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• Comparing the Great Gatsby by Scott Fitzgerald to The Graduate

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• The Impact of the Gold Rush on Native Americans and Mexican Americans (email me for the bibliography!)

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• Feminist Reform Movements in the 19th century, insert more transitions and its an A paper

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• Looking Backward on the Progressive Era- compares the movements of the progressive era with Edward Bellamy's Looking Backward... Highest grade in my class awesome paper

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• The Truth About Daisy- Compares Sallie Bingham's "The Truth about Growing up Rich" with Scott Fitzgerald's character in the Great Gatsby Daisy

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• Expansion to the paper would be better

  The language is a little bit simplistic, there is no argumentive thesis. maybe a side should be taken of mars colonization being really a good thing would lend credbility to you arguments as to why there might be limitations to colonization but why those limitations are overcomeable. The last sentence could be made into a parallel "instead of looking out to mars from earth." that would lend it some cohesion
  • 22/05/2004
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