really good essay! good quality! you deserve a better mark than what you got!
- 05/11/2004
- 21:48:42
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
really good essay, i enjoyed reading it! love it!
- 05/11/2004
- 21:44:18
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
really good work! one of the best essays ive ever read!
- 05/11/2004
- 21:34:47
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
more detail would be good. but what you have written is of a good standard. good work!
- 05/11/2004
- 21:29:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
really good essay!...but paragraphs would be good, besides that little mistake i like it!
- 05/11/2004
- 21:24:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i love it! i agree with most of your arguments and overall a really good essay with great structure!
- 04/11/2004
- 00:08:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
well done. We did anne frank for my school production this year and i really loved it! Some paragraphing would be good though, but besides that good work!
- 03/11/2004
- 23:59:36
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Even though i don't agree with everything you've said, you made your point strong, which is good. Paragraphs would help though, but overall i like it.
- 03/11/2004
- 23:51:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A very well written essay. I love the conclusion! well done :)
- 03/11/2004
- 23:46:15
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.