It seems like you're off to a good start, but what do the shots mean? what is the camera trying to portray?
- 18/02/2006
- 00:16:58
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There is an argument introduced, but nothing to back it up. You have theoretical examples, but no facts. Not very well organized either.
- 09/01/2006
- 00:03:11
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Overall the story is well written, and you did a good job at emulating Poe's style of narrative. The story is creative yet it stays true to the Tell Tale Heart. There are a few spelling/grammar errors such as "to" instead of "too" in the last paragraph, but no biggie. You nicely built up the suspense.
- 08/01/2006
- 23:48:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.