User Details For: xtwister161

Essay List
Comments List
  • Very nice

    Authors oppinion can be very easily found. Sources arent too clear. Very organized and paragraphs flow from one to the next.
    • 11/05/2005
    • 23:39:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    The essay overall is pretty good, but a better vocabulary has be to incorperated. The word "bad", which shouldnt even appear in a college essay, is overused too much.
    • 11/05/2005
    • 23:36:24
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.