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  • Good but can be improved

    Some of the sentences sounds 'funny' when you read it out as they're like 'hanging'. And you might want to consider checking for errors after you've completed an essay e.g. in paragraph 1, line 5 and line 8 have a SAME sentence.Hope you take this comment constructively. :)Have a nice day.
    • 31/08/2009
    • 11:54:24
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