I don't actually believe Performance enhancing drugs should be legal, I just thought this would be more of a challenge and since most of the class were doing they should be illegal i wanted to be different
- 13/06/2008
- 22:50:59
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ok, i didn't read all of it because it is REALLY long and is just dot points,but from what i read you have made some very interesting points!
- 13/06/2008
- 22:45:13
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the teachers must love you at school!such depth and insight!great structurejust everything is great
- 13/06/2008
- 22:43:17
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shows a lot of thought and research went into this which really paid off!very in depthwritten excellently!
- 13/06/2008
- 22:41:13
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To read it easier, download the attachment. It's the word doc i typed it in so it won't have all the weird codes.
- 13/06/2008
- 21:23:53
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Sorry about the weird codes like this: " – they're meant to be either ' or " or some form of punctuation. I copied and pasted it from the word document I typed it in and it came out like that for some reason, don't know why.
- 13/06/2008
- 21:22:17
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Well structuredWell said, points made clearly and wellFlows nicely!A very good essay! No wonder it got an A+WELL DONE!
- 13/06/2008
- 21:04:03
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sorry about the weird codes like ‘ they are meant to be either ' or " or some sort of punctuation or something like that. I copied it from the word document i typed it up in and it came out like that for some reason, i don't know why...
- 13/06/2008
- 20:56:59
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yeah sorry about the codes like " they are meant to be either ' or " or something like that, some sort of punctuation i guess.. I copied it from the word document i typed it in and pasted it and i don't know why it came out like that..
- 13/06/2008
- 20:45:09
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Oh and sorry about the weird codes like " those are meant to be either ' or " or some sort of punctuation. I don't know why it came up like that..
- 13/06/2008
- 19:34:28
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very good descriptions!maybe make it a bit longer and introduce the artist and painting and your point of writing this piece of writing. Also a conclusion is needed. But otherwise it's really good!
- 13/06/2008
- 19:00:03
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good start, very vague..expand on your points and think of at least 2 more oh and never use wikipediayour lecturers won't accept it for your bibliography!
- 13/06/2008
- 18:46:40
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Very well thought out, I love how you brought Romeo and Juliet and Much Ado about Nothing together. Well structured, the only criticism I'd have to give is that the conclusion sounds a little unfinished. Just one concluding sentence at the end that just sums the whole thing up and maybe a bit of work on your thesis and the essay will be REALLY good!!
- 13/06/2008
- 18:39:25
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this is an essay i just submitted at school, I'm hoping i get a good grade for it. Could people please rate my essays. I will rate yours back.
- 13/06/2008
- 01:55:49
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