You have used this "evidence" to support your contention 3 times! (ie. you are repeating yourself)Nevertheless, you have written this essay well =)
- 06/03/2009
- 00:33:31
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Everything you mentioned in your essay is scarily true. I cannot believe how closely your essay mirrors the lives of many readers, including me.
- 06/03/2009
- 00:28:07
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Your essay is very informativeThe structure is also very goodWell done =D
- 26/10/2008
- 01:35:34
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You used too much emotive language, and is seldom supported by reasoning and logic. This gives the impression of ranting.
- 08/10/2008
- 04:04:04
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though i have said some unpleasant things below,I think this is an excellent essay,and I had a great time reading it.
- 03/10/2008
- 05:41:33
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Parts of your essay is very simliar to another from this website.For the sections copied, everything is the same, word for word, compared to this other essay.This essay is a shortened version of the other essay.This essay was submitted on January 07, 2006, but the other essay was submitted on March 27, 2006, which is obviously a later date than your essay.Link to other essay:http://www.cheathouse.com/essay/essay_view.php?p_essay_id=70765
- 03/10/2008
- 05:36:51
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The way you have written it gives the impression of the essay written in dot points.No conclusion?
- 20/09/2008
- 04:20:33
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.