This essay is so good that my father doesn't want to hang all drug dealers now! He finally believes that marijuana isn't that harmful after all! Thanks a million Tozzy!
- 11/06/2003
- 08:20:27
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have never read this poem but i think that I will now-I thought that this would be about history or something and lo and behold it relates to many men i know. Thank you for the great analysis man.
- 26/04/2003
- 14:10:51
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Pretty cool, man! I thought that I knew the history of the guillotine but after reading this I realized that all my knowledge was wrong. I thought that Dr. Guillotine had invented the whole thing from top to bottom and like silverfirex I didn't know that the last beheading was held as late as 1977. Great work!
- 26/04/2003
- 14:05:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Pretty funny-not a very good story but acceptable for the authors grade level. I found it a little weird but then most creative writing stories are. The suspense could have been carried out a little longer but its still kinda good.
- 26/04/2003
- 13:53:51
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good analysis of John Keat's "Ode to a Nightingale." Everything is perfect except for the introduction (or lack of of) and the conclusion. The intro-I felt as if I was suddenly thrust into a discussion or like I came to five minutes late to a class. The conclusion-I felt that I was being led somewhere but I couldn't tie everything together.
- 26/04/2003
- 13:20:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very good description of the fashion and categorization of rave culture. Your information was quite accurate. However, I feel that you only explored the physical realm of rave culture. You never went into any depth about the stigma of/in belonging to one group or another. From my exprience at raves, I have found that the majority of "ravers" haven't any qualms about migling w/ others. Also, I have noticed that there is a group that you missed-the "breakers", or breakdancers (the people who take all the space from the already crowded dance floor).
- 24/04/2003
- 19:16:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a 12th Grade paper, only it's not an english paper. It was a paper for a Gym/Health class (I hope that that explains the inferior quality of the paper).
- 24/04/2003
- 18:31:43
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.