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  • The most convincing essay to date!

    This essay is so good that my father doesn't want to hang all drug dealers now! He finally believes that marijuana isn't that harmful after all! Thanks a million Tozzy!
    • 11/06/2003
    • 08:20:27
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good!

    I have never read this poem but i think that I will now-I thought that this would be about history or something and lo and behold it relates to many men i know. Thank you for the great analysis man.
    • 26/04/2003
    • 14:10:51
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting-very informative

    Pretty cool, man! I thought that I knew the history of the guillotine but after reading this I realized that all my knowledge was wrong. I thought that Dr. Guillotine had invented the whole thing from top to bottom and like silverfirex I didn't know that the last beheading was held as late as 1977. Great work!
    • 26/04/2003
    • 14:05:46
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Blade of Terror

    Pretty funny-not a very good story but acceptable for the authors grade level. I found it a little weird but then most creative writing stories are. The suspense could have been carried out a little longer but its still kinda good.
    • 26/04/2003
    • 13:53:51
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ode to a Nightingale

    This is a very good analysis of John Keat's "Ode to a Nightingale." Everything is perfect except for the introduction (or lack of of) and the conclusion. The intro-I felt as if I was suddenly thrust into a discussion or like I came to five minutes late to a class. The conclusion-I felt that I was being led somewhere but I couldn't tie everything together.
    • 26/04/2003
    • 13:20:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • A very good description of...

    A very good description of the fashion and categorization of rave culture. Your information was quite accurate. However, I feel that you only explored the physical realm of rave culture. You never went into any depth about the stigma of/in belonging to one group or another. From my exprience at raves, I have found that the majority of "ravers" haven't any qualms about migling w/ others. Also, I have noticed that there is a group that you missed-the "breakers", or breakdancers (the people who take all the space from the already crowded dance floor).
    • 24/04/2003
    • 19:16:28
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • This is a 12th Grade paper...

    This is a 12th Grade paper, only it's not an english paper. It was a paper for a Gym/Health class (I hope that that explains the inferior quality of the paper).
    • 24/04/2003
    • 18:31:43
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.