Stereotypes.

As spoon man said there are alot of errors in this piece, but it is these errors which have shown me how passionate you are on this subect. I'm not sure but after reading this i was under the impression you were in a bad mood perhaps after someone treating you as a stereotype. there is alot of anger in this piece and i completely agree with your point, people should not judge a book by it's cover, there is more to a person than their appearance or nationality

I am a little confused here and so will reserve grading until I am a little clearer.

Is this voicing your oppinion?

Is this a monologue by a created character.

It is submitted under creative writing and there lies my confusion.

u kno, not all stereotypes are bad. U kno those jews, they can fly! yeah thats a joke and in no way supposed to be prejudice. i am jewish anyway

i would just like to say thank you to everyone who rated or commented on my essay, thanks a bunch!

Many English teachers (High School) allow students to submit "creative writing" as a fun type project to get kids excited about writing. (Remember the ole "Tell me what you did this Summer" essay?) Although this looks like something from Hanan's diary, it's still creative, expresses her opinion well and gives examples.

I have to agree with this girl, because she is right. And i have to give her credit because she is saying what everyone else is scared or afraid to say. People do steretype, and i face with this every day because I am Russian and a lot of people make of me, or my accent, or that I am smart. It is cruel, but they also mentioned that I probably am a big drinker and love vodka if i am from Russia, and that competely pissed me off. SO i give the author a huge plus!

Sorry to say, but this essay is mediocre at best. I mean... talk about a grammatical nightmare. Besides the horrible sentence structure and numerous misspellling, the general tone of the essay is rather childish. What did you do, Hanna, copy this out of an after-school special. Really, though, you offer no incite whatsoever. With the honest to God truth, I hope you didn't seriously submit this to a class. Geez...