i found this essay to easily fulfill the requirements expected on such a topic. Yet due to its shallow level of analyzation one can assume it would be something written in the 7-8th grade level. (i know because i wrote at this level in 8th grade) Not much can be sayed against it seeing as it got a C. Good use of quotes, I would have explored some of the other characters as well and tying them in with the main characters. peace.
- 15/04/2005
- 15:00:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
but u coulda added a lot of stuff
- 21/11/2004
- 21:01:51
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
i agree with white_eskimo, u shoulduv used some more information such as article one section 8. god bless america, where the goverment can create the biggest example of hipocrisy known to god.
- 21/11/2004
- 18:13:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
down to the point, very informative
- 21/11/2004
- 18:07:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
ok i am left yet again asking myself "wtf does this have to do with anything" but its a pretty good piece for what im guessing the assignment was
- 27/09/2004
- 19:47:36
- Score: 8 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
wtf does this really have to do with anything? o well it still has a pretty good format but still has some errors.
- 27/09/2004
- 19:42:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
u kno, not all stereotypes are bad. U kno those jews, they can fly! yeah thats a joke and in no way supposed to be prejudice. i am jewish anyway
- 27/09/2004
- 19:40:05
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
some of the ordering is a tad off but this deserved at least a B-. Tell the teacher that she or he is a dumbass for me!
- 24/02/2004
- 23:10:14
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
yep
- 20/12/2003
- 17:30:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i must say that i like penis' you think that might be gay, but really its actually pretty damn cool, if anyone is interested in finding out more about penis' related to being gay. please call 666-6969
- 19/12/2003
- 11:37:04
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Sucky sucky five dolla! This sucks!
- 17/12/2003
- 21:24:54
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
with the other comment
- 16/12/2003
- 22:03:14
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
its nice as a reference but any assface that turns this in is getting blown by his mom i swear thats jst retarded, nice, but use it as a reference ONLY
- 16/12/2003
- 21:13:35
- Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
nice range of BIG words...lol, ok get over it u ripped it off, and its a piece of shit, any one writing shit like that has GOT to be some ass hole trying to fuck with the beautiful legacy of....CHeathouse.com the savior of the smart, but lazt asses
- 16/12/2003
- 21:12:38
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
its an ok essay, actually pretty good, but not necessarily what everyone is looking for, if this is the right range of topics for u then i highly suggest it seeing as its well written
- 16/12/2003
- 21:11:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
he said what i wanted to so there is no reason to repeat
- 16/12/2003
- 20:30:36
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this essay was just the thing i was looking forthanks
- 14/12/2003
- 23:42:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this read to me like a higher level paper
- 14/12/2003
- 23:37:09
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
i feel you could have expanded on your topic quite a bit
- 14/12/2003
- 23:35:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i agree with what he said, i follow the herd
- 14/12/2003
- 23:31:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
tells much about the life, and the works of andrew lloyd webberPeace,Zach Jones
- 14/12/2003
- 23:09:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
much better than my paper on a similar subject
- 14/12/2003
- 00:20:00
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
kinda iffy, but what the hell! im in a good moodPeace Hommes
- 13/12/2003
- 23:59:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i like it, thats pretty much it
- 13/12/2003
- 23:49:37
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
it kinda lets me get inside the world of the stars
- 13/12/2003
- 23:11:32
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very nice work :)
- 12/12/2003
- 21:21:27
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
im sorry but this doesnt really explain anything else besides what has been said on CNN
- 12/12/2003
- 20:01:58
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very well writin
- 12/12/2003
- 19:50:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i didnt really understand this, maybe cus im a city slicker
- 12/12/2003
- 19:47:30
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
i like this essay, nice writing style
- 12/12/2003
- 19:43:04
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay lacked a certain something
- 12/12/2003
- 19:19:02
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I feel you really gave your best on this one! :)
- 12/12/2003
- 19:15:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Memory of war fits this essay very nicely
- 12/12/2003
- 19:09:21
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
very nice work chap
- 12/12/2003
- 13:06:04
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
email me at zachjones4@hotmail.com
- 12/12/2003
- 12:58:21
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
very nice, brings details to the table
- 12/12/2003
- 12:54:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very nice work!
- 12/12/2003
- 12:50:51
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a radical essay dude
- 12/12/2003
- 12:27:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
good form
- 12/12/2003
- 12:25:08
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is not a good effort in my mind
- 12/12/2003
- 12:14:08
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
THIS ISNT A VERY GOOD EFFORT
- 12/12/2003
- 12:08:36
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
point of view........
- 11/12/2003
- 20:38:12
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
great explanation of a point of view
- 11/12/2003
- 20:35:22
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I like the great detail of this essay
- 11/12/2003
- 20:31:23
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Yep i do say that i do!
- 11/12/2003
- 20:23:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
nice job filling the format though
- 11/12/2003
- 20:19:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
never really thought of it
- 11/12/2003
- 20:13:01
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
yeah,this sends a..............message..........
- 11/12/2003
- 19:22:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
in your essay, you said that "In earlier times there were no medicines, even the common cold." There still isn't a cure for the common cold.
- 11/12/2003
- 19:04:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you presented this topicPeace,Zach Jones
- 10/12/2003
- 23:17:43
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! JEEZEOther Than That, Great Essay!
- 10/12/2003
- 21:11:38
- Score: 6 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
now thats a miracle i came across these! very nice notes!Peace,Zach Jones
- 10/12/2003
- 19:38:39
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i like you style of presentation, this is the form which i am trying to atune my essays to.Peace,Zach Jones
- 10/12/2003
- 19:36:31
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
I agree with what hoba said below. Very nice work!Peace,Zach Jones
- 10/12/2003
- 19:32:20
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I have never read an essay from this point of view on the warPeace,Zach Jones
- 10/12/2003
- 12:43:54
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i am a history major, and did a term paper on this topic, and shit, this is great!peace,Zach Jones
- 10/12/2003
- 12:42:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this is a very detailed essay about dealing with a sexual harrassment issue in the workplace.Great Job!
- 09/12/2003
- 22:00:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is..............special
- 09/12/2003
- 20:53:16
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
if you point out my mistakes, i learn from them and will most likely never make them again, so, contstructive critisism is what i need.Thanks,Zach Jones
- 09/12/2003
- 20:40:42
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
You went into great detail about the character to character relationships. This is a great essay. I only found a couple punctuation mistakes.very nice workZach Jones
- 09/12/2003
- 18:39:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
if you want the sources for this essay, please email me at ....zachjones4@hotmail.comPeace,Zach Jonesaka zachjones4, the writer of this essay
- 08/12/2003
- 12:31:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
many examples given to back up the origianl accusation
- 08/12/2003
- 00:10:48
- Score: 11 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
one of the better writings on the subject ive read and im not kidding! :)
- 07/12/2003
- 16:24:36
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
im sorry but name a class that assigns this
- 07/12/2003
- 14:35:21
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
lol hehehehehe nice essay though
- 07/12/2003
- 13:57:28
- Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
you could have expanded this paper a little i think
- 07/12/2003
- 13:15:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
nice work
- 06/12/2003
- 23:55:49
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
good reasoning
- 06/12/2003
- 23:54:04
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Just learn how to spell television right in the title
- 06/12/2003
- 23:47:19
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
very.................informational
- 06/12/2003
- 23:46:06
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Very informational
- 06/12/2003
- 12:13:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is an essay that goes staight to the facts, and it is very informational.
- 06/12/2003
- 12:00:40
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.