This is a good paper. You didn't put too many facts but still was able to provide a good view of Benjamin Franklin...which didn't make it boring to read.
- 19/07/2006
- 12:09:52
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Very informative and interesting. Not many papers keep my interest, but this one does.
- 16/07/2006
- 17:02:25
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I would expand more and show more research on the subject. It is a good start. The grammar needs improvement also.
- 09/04/2006
- 20:05:15
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You make some good points. It would be a stronger paper if you added some statistics or evidence to back up the argument.
- 20/10/2005
- 16:48:33
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needs a better conclusion.
- 09/06/2005
- 00:30:38
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very organized and easy to read.
- 03/06/2004
- 07:36:11
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.