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    guys, cant u read. clearly it is NOT an essay, shes classified it as creative writingi think its got a good basis, but theyre right, u havent put enough detail into it.. further analysis would have been nice, and perhaps rechecking for spelling & grammatical errors :)
    • 16/06/2005
    • 06:02:51
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
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    this is a great piece! it brings up a really important issue which affects us all, scary as it may be. you have chosen an interesting topic to write about, and you've incorporated many great ideas.. especially at the end; the media doesnt care about bringing news to the people, all it cares about is ratings & money- greedcy bastards! *haha* well done
    • 30/10/2004
    • 05:16:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
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    this is a great peice, really thought provoking.. its true that the world seems to operate on lies, where everything is now based on manipulated truths, sad as it is; and you have captured this issue rather nicely.. well written & obviously a lot of thought was put into this! well done, but be careful about generalising too much about lies & their advantages! coz remember kids, lying is NAUGHTY!!
    • 30/10/2004
    • 05:04:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
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    A nice, long, detailed essay addressing the issue of binge drinking amoung our youth today. A lot of effort has obviously been put into this, great research and good overall structure. Its great that you added a dash of your perspective into it, applying personal experiences always spices things up, not to mention provides evidence to support your point/argument! well done and great job
    • 19/06/2004
    • 07:37:49
    • Score: 21 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
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    Hahaha I agree with djraaphe, this was a fantastic read! I actually read the whole thing without even wondering off.. well done! Too bad about the 78%, obviously your teacher doesn't understand the meaning of STORY! Je l'aime beaucoup, c'est super! Even though I live in Aus, I still love it! (maybe because its partially true haha, SHAME) Great Job & Very creative, I loved it.
    • 19/06/2004
    • 07:18:53
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
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    Another brilliant discussion, very thorough & informative with a dash of analysis & opiniated perspective. Having read Brownings "My Last Duchess", your report has striked my interest in Browning's writing style once again. Classical dramatic monologue of a psychotic murderer, how could you refuse! Also great work on the inclusion of narrative techniques, thats what interpretation of poetry is all about- great job!
    • 18/06/2004
    • 23:10:47
    • Score: 46 out of 50 people found this comment useful.
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    You have analysed this poem in great detail, picking it apart and applying your interpretation skills extremely well. I admit I havent read this poem before but after reading this peice I have left with knowledge than before, so a big thankyou! Well done on the analysing of each stanza, it takes a lot of effort & obvious dedication- and thanks, i learnt a new word.. villanelle! Getting close to becoming a walking dictionary.. almost! Keep up the good work
    • 18/06/2004
    • 22:59:54
    • Score: 41 out of 46 people found this comment useful.
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    You've analysed this poem extremely well, ive always found it hard to analyse poems in great detail but somehow you've managed and you've done it brilliantly! My Last Duchess is a great poem, and now with a story behind it, its even greater. I particularly liked the idea about objectifying his wife by the use of the word 'Thats'.. very interesting interpretation of it, keep it up!
    • 13/06/2004
    • 04:26:43
    • Score: 68 out of 72 people found this comment useful.
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    This is a very opinionated peice but i quite like it. I'm studying Vanity Fair at the moment & your peice has offered me a different perspective into to the novel, nicely done
    • 13/06/2004
    • 03:48:28
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
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    Hey, this is amazing! you seem to have great insight into the novel & you cited, what more could u want! anyway well done, you deserved the 95%
    • 01/06/2004
    • 03:45:13
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
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    this is good, the Modern Prometheus subtitle isnt really explained these days, so good job.. I'm currently doing Frankenstein at school & you've got down most & probably more of what I've learnt about the relationship between Prometheus & Frankenstein so well done.
    • 08/05/2004
    • 03:24:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
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    hey marijuana is a really contraversal issue these days so it would've been better to have written a more argumentative peice but still its a great peice, very informative.. good as a report rather than a discussion, well done & great effort!
    • 08/05/2004
    • 03:18:48
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
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    interesting topic, able to be understood by everyone.. love the intro! the rhetorical questions were a nice touch.. caught my attention! well researched & nicely written, well done
    • 08/05/2004
    • 03:08:29
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
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    hey this is a great essay on death of a salesman, im doing it at school at the moment so its a great help.. you pinpointed the main themes & analysed the characters well, so keep it up!
    • 08/05/2004
    • 03:05:22
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
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    hey this is a nicely developed article and you chose a very different topic to research about, it was a good read, slightly generalised but overall nicely written, next time be aware that some people may read it with a different perspective & may take offence to it, although you didnt mean to cause offence.. anyway well done & great effort
    • 08/05/2004
    • 03:00:17
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
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    very well done! good topic & nicely written, an interesting read.. obviously you did a lot of research & it showed, you deserved the 93%
    • 08/05/2004
    • 02:48:12
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
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    hey this is really excellent, obviously you have done a lot of in depth research.. one little thing i think you should cite your sources but other than that, i really enjoyed it! it was easy to understand & v. informative
    • 08/05/2004
    • 02:45:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
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    hahah OMG that is the weirdest thing i have read all night.. Pretty hard to comprehend but i liked the beginning, very entertaining.. keeps you reading on which is usually a hard thing to do. The endings a bit confusing & abrupt but overall i liked it!
    • 17/04/2004
    • 06:46:37
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
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    Great peice, you deserved the 95% ! The sentence structures a bit crazy, going from here to there and back again but the information you've included is very thorough so overall, its nicely done!!
    • 17/04/2004
    • 06:37:30
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
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    Interesting choice of topic, i really like it! The rhetorical questions in the intro. are very effective, nicely done! It's obviously well researched & you definitely deserved the 97% but next time remember to cite your sources :) KEEP IT UP!
    • 17/04/2004
    • 06:31:12
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
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    I agree with johnjjp the intro needs to be the most brief & to the point paragraph out of any peice of writing but overall it was VERY nicely done!! remember to cite your sources so we know we're you're getting ur info from! keep it up ;)
    • 17/04/2004
    • 06:26:44
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
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    Nicely written! The intro communicates strongly with the responder, always a plus! keep it up :)
    • 17/04/2004
    • 06:08:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
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    what an interesting topic! obviously well researched, slightly biased but overall very well done!! next time remember to cite your sources..
    • 17/04/2004
    • 06:03:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Fantastic

    hey this is a GREAT peice, it's very thorough, its cited & the spelling/grammar is perfect! congrats.. its never pleasant to read about a thing like suicide but it was an enjoyable read nonetheless, well done!
    • 17/04/2004
    • 05:50:28
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ahhhhh!

    ahaha omg the imagery is fantastic, such a short peice yet so effective, well done!!
    • 17/04/2004
    • 05:44:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
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    overall nicely done, slightly generalised but very informative, references would have been good.. keep it up!
    • 17/04/2004
    • 05:27:14
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    good review of the movie.. bit short, couldve included more detail but still a good effort, keep it up!
    • 17/04/2004
    • 05:21:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Um?

    I can see that this intended to be a very dramatic short story which it is, but the sentencing and overall manner of this peice is quite poor! However you had quite a short word limit so good effort.
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:55:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good effort

    Not a bad attempt, a contraversial topic like capital punishment would have been easy to write about! you only picked at the minor details and hardly expressed your opinion though i can see you tried. good effort anyways.
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:48:13
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm

    You started off well in a very argumentative manner, however you didnt expand on your point! It just ended abruptly.. bit of an anticlimax! Perhaps could have expanded on your point..
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:41:33
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Short & snappy, touched lightly on the important issue's but overall a good analysis of the film.. which is by the way, an amazing film! one all my favourites.. well done!
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:34:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done

    this is a great peice of writing & you analysed the Duke's jealousy very well.. very convincing & argumentative, keep it up!
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:31:04
    • Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely written

    interesting topic, well written- very true! however very generalised & not much depth.. despite this overall a great effort
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:27:41
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    Very generalised, slightly biased approach but nonetheless convincing & informative
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:24:29
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    Slightly generalised but obviously well researched, well done!
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:22:44
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative..

    basic but very straight forward, easy to understand & nicely written, good effort!
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:18:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting..

    not exactly the most creative peice of writing.. don't understand how you got 93% but nonetheless i read it so it must be catchy to a certain extent right? good effort anyways and good subject choice, something that can be related to worldwide.
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:16:13
    • Score: 18 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good!

    This is quite nicely written, you deserved the 88%..! Love this book, hope u do too
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:10:02
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very thorough

    Well written & well researched, although references could have been included. Overall a great paper!
    • 09/04/2004
    • 02:06:39
    • Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    not bad! helpful for me, i start macbeth next term.. it worked on me, despite me having not read it..keep it up!
    • 04/04/2004
    • 05:08:01
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    nice work on an extremely depressing topic.. lots of research done, but be careful with sentence structure
    • 04/04/2004
    • 05:01:17
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow!

    hey, this is amazing! no wonder u got 99% for it, well done! i dont really like the book at that much but this is great!
    • 04/04/2004
    • 04:03:33
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • This is good..

    hey this is really analytical & a bundle of help.. a bit tricky to read with all the crazy spacing though, but overall i like!
    • 04/04/2004
    • 03:48:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Haha..

    Whoever knew a can of coke could have so much background? Great work, you should've got much more than 66%.. they must've marked real hard!
    • 27/03/2004
    • 05:47:55
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad..

    Thoroughly researched, good effort.. Paragraphs would have been nice, at the moment its quite a challenge to read without getting a headache but despite that its overall nicely done.
    • 27/03/2004
    • 05:27:17
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting!

    Good choice on the topic of the DDR trend, nice read.. enjoyed it heaps!
    • 27/03/2004
    • 05:20:45
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Smartie pants

    this is what i call short but straight to the point! such a small article bursting with juicy information.. very helpful! thanks and good work
    • 27/03/2004
    • 03:42:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good!

    Very in depth, and extremely helpful! Obviously researched it quite a bit, so well done for your efforts and thanks!
    • 27/03/2004
    • 02:13:28
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Tops!

    This is great! I'm doign the exact same question so this is a great help.. might borrow some of your idea's =) Will cite of course.. ;)well done & thanks!
    • 27/03/2004
    • 01:59:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant!

    I really like the honesty & insight you put into this- well done! It's a nice peice of opinionated analysis- something thats always a lot of fun to read..keep it up!
    • 22/03/2004
    • 06:38:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.