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  • Jie_wang are you blind!!!

    This essay has been stolen, you dont leave nice comments u dildo!!!
    • 14/08/2004
    • 07:27:06
    • Score: 8 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Dreams

    This is a lovely piece of writting. Its deep and full of emotion, but yet with information and sources. Good work. It takes someone so confindent in themselves to write something like this, so good work, im touched!
    • 04/08/2004
    • 08:24:14
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • A cute Poem

    Hmm..... yes, good. But you didnt use any punctuation, and sometimes punctation is the key to a good poem. But i was cute yes, it was lovely and im sure came from deap inside your heart.
    • 03/08/2004
    • 15:19:02
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Smoking

    Good statistics and good research, yet no biblography for your sourses, next time add a small one. Yet, good work and a good effort. ;)
    • 03/08/2004
    • 13:53:23
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Prejudice

    Some very good points. And your views are clear. Its set out nicely and is easy to read. Well done! :-)
    • 30/07/2004
    • 10:18:59
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Impact

    Brilliant! Well done. This is one of the best creative writing pieces i have ever read, good work!
    • 30/07/2004
    • 10:09:01
    • Score: 13 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Ohhh!!

    I love the way you end the chapters!! Yet again another brilliant part to the The lord of the Necklace, sorry, i meant The Nevklace, well done!
    • 29/07/2004
    • 10:47:15
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Gosh!!

    Their so much like lord of the rings, but i have read the books and seen the movies so many times, this is like a new breath of fresh air on lord of the rings, so well done. I liked the way u gave them all really weird names apart from john and sam, by the way, lord of the RINGS the NECKLACE, pure genuis!!!!! good work1=.
    • 29/07/2004
    • 10:43:54
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Media essay assessing 'the sixth sence'and 'the sandlot kids'.

    6 sense is classic! i have never seen the sandlot kids. Good essay, and you have a good choice in movies as far is i can tell by your essay, thanks for sharing this with us, o and sence-sense!! wee mistake!!
    • 29/07/2004
    • 08:43:01
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    This clears it all up for me. I went to school with a girl who had Cystic Fibrosis, i didnt no what it meant, no one did, she wouldnt say. But everyone knew she was going to die before she was 25, 21 or 22 the doctors guessed. I would look at her, she was so happy and popular yet in 6 or 7 years time, shell be dead. But thats, this has cleared up the whole matter, i still pray the doctors will find a cure, but good essay and well done!
    • 29/07/2004
    • 08:36:56
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Re:

    I no it was short, but it was suppost to be short, its a 400 word debate on your chosin topic, and i did it like 3 years ago.thanks for the comments anyway
    • 29/07/2004
    • 08:24:06
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Of Mice and Men

    Good comparision of the book to the movie, yet you could have added abit more about the book than the movie. Anyway, well done, its a brilliant book.
    • 28/07/2004
    • 11:12:32
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Of Mice and Men

    Well written analizise of Power and the absence of power colours the relationships Of Mice and Men and steers the course of its events. Good work, brilliant book good topic!
    • 28/07/2004
    • 11:10:45
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Mitosis and Meiosis

    For the Mitosis part, you could have added in something abou the semi-permable memeberne and the high to low consitration gradient. But they are good notes and i asure you this is going in my favourites! :-)
    • 28/07/2004
    • 11:09:01
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Herion

    You didnt actully write anything about herion, you just copyed the alcohol paragraph down twice. The ciggarette paragraph, every sentace started with smoking. It wasnt in essay format as you haphazardly stuck in randomly. But i gave you an averge rating as i felt you had some good points that could benifit an essay, so next time try a bit harder.
    • 28/07/2004
    • 08:08:19
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • The strengths and weaknesses of the traditional budgeting

    Good strong essay with back up points, well done.
    • 27/07/2004
    • 14:06:23
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • American Ethnic History

    Even though i am Irish, its nice to read about other ethnics historys. This is a good long essay and im sure is a credit to this site, good effort!
    • 27/07/2004
    • 11:56:47
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Shakespeare's Othello

    Well done. This is a good essay full of quotes, a few spelling errors, but all the same it is brilliant. Good work!
    • 27/07/2004
    • 11:25:55
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Biography

    Good biography. I can see you have put a lot of work into it. Well done. goood effort!
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:51:51
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • The matrix

    Crap movie, Matrix reloaded is good. But a good strong essay. good work. Its a intresting thing to read as i love movies like the matrix and lord of the rings, you know, thing that will never happen. so this is a nice essay to read. thanks!
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:43:48
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Death in Space

    It was good and all, and i liked the way the decided to get drunk(joke) but no1 died! did they? Anyways, it was a good story with a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Good work!
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:25:22
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm....

    Yea i see what your trying ot say in this essay. It holds many good points and im sure will be a credit to this site. Well done!
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:14:04
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: cain77

    Im having a shortage of money. I have 8, 9, 10 and now 12, but 8, i needed replacing because their old so i bought new ones, and a new 10 of ebay. but 2 is really expensive on ebay. yet ill try! thanks for the comment!
    • 26/07/2004
    • 18:08:22
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Beautyful

    Nice poem spoonman! It uses nice words and nice things in it, even though the whole thing is in vain. I love some of the language you have used. Well done.
    • 26/07/2004
    • 17:19:55
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Young Voters

    Yea, i totaly agree with you on this essay. Young people dont care about elections, but i find that the magority of young people vote on big brother! Sorry im obsessed! well, thanks for sharing this with us, its a real credabily, by the way, whos sommer?
    • 26/07/2004
    • 13:20:38
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Pickle2suck

    Im getting really enoyed with you. Stop rating my essays and poems bad, with out leaving a comment. No1 else thinks they are!! So stop it. your just being stupid and it makes you look bad as you havent submitted any essays for me to think are bad.!
    • 26/07/2004
    • 13:13:31
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    I did a Life, Death and Works project last year on Louis Vauxcelles,so this was very intresting to read as he had a part in German Expressionism. This is a good essays and i thank you for sharing it with us!
    • 26/07/2004
    • 12:04:09
    • Score: 11 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • 82

    How the hell did you get 82 points for this essay, yet no1 commented??But i will. It is a brilliant piece of writting and is worth 82 points, so well done.
    • 26/07/2004
    • 11:45:06
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Michel Foucault

    This is brilliant, i never knew who Michel Foucault was until i read this.... well done noone. Its a good piece of writing as its easy to read and displyed nicely, welll done!
    • 26/07/2004
    • 11:15:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    This is a nice piece of work, and will surely be a credit to CheatHouse, and i liked the way you used steps to number your paragrphys, well done!
    • 26/07/2004
    • 10:53:55
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I liked the way you bragged about being the daughter of a successful entrepreneur. No, only joking. Your review from how you see your fathers busnisses has reflexed opon you. Its a good piece of writing and quite personal, well done ;-)
    • 26/07/2004
    • 10:40:20
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Race Discrimination

    Good work, its good to see that you have put in such a good effort in a topic i believe in so much. Good work, and keep it up!Also good long biblography :-)
    • 25/07/2004
    • 17:34:38
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • No One's A Mystery

    Good to see this, as it is a brilliant piece of work, yet it only needs to be submitted once.
    • 25/07/2004
    • 17:29:27
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Religion : Minkind's Security Blanket

    This is very good, i enjoyed it so much i wished it was longer, but yes, it is brilliant. I agree with you on all the points you have made like "God" and the "afterlife" are relativelt accwptable justifications for this tendency.Its well researched and thanks so much for sharing it with us ;-)
    • 25/07/2004
    • 12:30:02
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work!

    I can see you have spent a good bit of time on this, and its worth it. Its an intresting subject and you have exploted it well, good work!
    • 25/07/2004
    • 12:26:45
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Same again

    Like your other essays, their too short, their good, dont get me wrong their good but too short.
    • 25/07/2004
    • 11:38:03
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • CARELESS DRIVING

    Are you sure thats all you could write, 400 words. Its a widely talked about topic, so im sure you could have made it 2000, yet short it was, it held many good points that i do agree with, well done :-)
    • 25/07/2004
    • 11:37:03
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I know why the caged bird sings

    Good work, this is one of my favorite books, its so sad. Your essay has sone it justice, thanks. :-)
    • 25/07/2004
    • 11:00:24
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • RANDOM!!

    lol, y A Day in the Life of a Gnome? Its sooo random. but i liked your essays anyway, and rated it good! :-)
    • 25/07/2004
    • 10:45:06
    • Score: 1 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Dylan Thomas' "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night"

    Its also brilliant. You use your words wisely and display them so well. it is a brilliant essay, as are your other 3, but this one has more depth and meaning, well done!
    • 25/07/2004
    • 10:24:17
    • Score: 34 out of 39 people found this comment useful.
  • Robert Browning's "My Last Duchess"

    Good work John. I had to do a author study, i picked Robert Browning and i also had to study 3 of his poems, this of course was one. I agree with all of your points, its very well done, short but sweet, good work, yet again john! :)
    • 25/07/2004
    • 10:06:59
    • Score: 52 out of 56 people found this comment useful.
  • The Destructive Enemy. One of the stories i wrote. Got to do with Star Wars. Take a read!!!

    In your title im sure you didnt need to add in the last part, im sure it would have been read anyway. Its an intresting story, of course it is very like Star Wars, but i like your story. Is that the ending? Because i think you could make a The Destructive Enemy- part 2! Yet, well done and good work! :)
    • 25/07/2004
    • 10:02:24
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Becton Dickinson

    Good, but no conclusion, and the conclusion is vital with essays. Yet it is a brilliant piece, so well done!
    • 24/07/2004
    • 15:59:07
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • How to choose a major

    Maybe you would have been better off submitting this as an article. Then you might have gotten 600 points instead of only 350. It is very very good, a little short, but personalized and easy to read. Well done! keep up the good work!! :)
    • 24/07/2004
    • 14:16:10
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Ipods, music pirates or victims of industry

    I can see you have done lots of research for this, but dont you think its a wee bit short?Dont get me wrong, it is very good, and i have rated it good, but maybe next time if you could extend it a bit more, but thanks for sharing this with us! :)
    • 24/07/2004
    • 13:11:46
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Benito Mussolini is Not Inherently Evil

    Very good work and research for this biography. I didnt actully know who this person was untill i read this, so well done, and keep up the good work! :)
    • 24/07/2004
    • 12:29:58
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • What?

    Of mice and men is written by John Steinbeck!!! Whos Gorge Orwell?
    • 24/07/2004
    • 10:14:30
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Writing assignment: Free Speech doesn't come without a cost

    Its touching!!I am very objected to those who ridicule others for speaking their minds, pretty much like Vickor, if you watch Big Brother. His a black man whos speaks what he feels and was voted out of the house. Well not the same as your essay is about. But yes, i totaly agree with all of your points and your end paragraph was brilliant, well done, a few spelling mistakes. But keep up the good work! :)
    • 24/07/2004
    • 08:36:03
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant

    This is a brilliant debate. No really it is because its formal and easy to read, yet you didnt add a biblography.I liked the point you made about mobiles and ciggarettes, yet why cant thy just do both? I do! No sorry, dont smoke!! Well, back to the point, its a brilliant essay, one of the best i have read so far, well done, and keep up the good work!
    • 24/07/2004
    • 08:27:20
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Lord of the Flies- Chapter 4 from "Roger remained watching the littleuns..." to "so that Roger went to him."

    God Dammit!This is yet again another brilliant Lord of The Files essay. I really have to read the book! I know some stuff, and this essay helped me learn more. Well done, it is a brilliant essay. :)
    • 23/07/2004
    • 16:53:26
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Punic Wars

    It would have been nice if you have started off your essay by telling us what the Punic Wars were, what they were about, you know, just some info on the wars itself.Also a small biblography showing where your sources came from.Part from these small miner flaws, this is a brilliant History essay and a real creadablity to this site, well done.
    • 23/07/2004
    • 13:25:40
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: Nice...

    My mum also had Cancer, yet she is still here today. I find talking about cancer hard, yet maybe not as hard as you might, but thanks for the comment, it was brave of you and i appreciate it very much.
    • 23/07/2004
    • 13:22:29
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Persuasive letter in support of Jonathan Swift's "A Modest Proposal"

    Very good in depth letter, well done. I can see you have spent time on this, yet i dont understand what the last stuff means!! Any way, well done and keep up the good work! :)
    • 23/07/2004
    • 12:50:23
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • 'Richard is a truly evil character with no justification for his actions'. To what extent do you agree with this assessment of Richard's character in Shakespeare's Richard III?

    Allthough this is a considerable short piece of writting on a extensive subject, i feel you have done it very well.You did leave out some miner parts about Richards personality that im sure would have helped this essay. Yet it was a good piece considering how short it was and i want to telly ou that it is a very good piece. So keep up the good work!
    • 23/07/2004
    • 12:09:00
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Book Report on A Very Private Life by Michael Frayn

    Even though i have never heard the of the author nore read the book, i still think this report is detailed and brilliant. Thank you for sharing your book reports, and i liked this on the best because it was clearer and more of your opinions were put into to it. So well done!
    • 23/07/2004
    • 11:59:35
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Cults

    This is a topic that i havent seen arise here in CheatHouse. But im sure it will soon as cults are an increasing problum, as you have said. Its so well structured and easy to read. You have done a great job, keep up the good work! :)
    • 23/07/2004
    • 11:21:22
    • Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice one Chick

    As allways to be expected from you, nice one! Its personal, but its still classy, well done. such a painful topic 2 discuss but you have done it so well, good work!
    • 22/07/2004
    • 17:52:52
    • Score: 22 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok... good

    But it was too short. It holds some good points, but their isnt enough information and sourses to back it up. I think it has great potiental, but dont mind if i rate it averge as it was quite good and i did enjoy reading it. :)
    • 22/07/2004
    • 14:17:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Toyota, Flexible manufacturing

    Good, but a few spelling and grammar errors, no conclusion, but apart from those it was a good essay. I thank you for shareing this with us, as some of my friends are memeber on this site and are studying cars and car makes in uni, so thanks a lot. Plus its also very intresting, so good work! :)
    • 22/07/2004
    • 12:49:25
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • DragonBlade2

    It was me, but only by accident!
    • 22/07/2004
    • 11:40:10
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Isolation of One's Self

    Good, i liked the way you used Lost in Translation to help within your essay. Your points were clear and written well, good work. The end paragraph is nice and sums up the whole essay, well done!
    • 22/07/2004
    • 11:01:18
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    I have been seeing your user name a lot lately so i thought id rate one of your essays. This one stuck out, as it is one of my favourite poems. "Porphyria's Lover" is a horriable but yet beautyful poem and you have done it justice, well done John!
    • 22/07/2004
    • 10:56:22
    • Score: 45 out of 50 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant!!

    I have no critizisms at all for this, it is probalily the best esay i have read on a dubliners story, except for mine, joke!No, i mean it, you have explored every aspect of 'Araby', yet except for one, you didnt talk about paralysis, but it doesnt matter. Well done, it is a brilliant essay!
    • 22/07/2004
    • 10:03:41
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok....

    This is a short piece of writting with many good points as well as bad. For example of the badare, some spelling errors and it was very short, maybe the purpose of it was to be short, but i dont no. Yet it was dark, eerie and very good. It brings a lot of personal feeling to it, this is a talent that is quite hard to find within story writers. Yet, all the same, you did a good job, well done!
    • 22/07/2004
    • 09:55:38
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Its my turn to have ago at u!!

    Nah... im jokin, this is another brillant piece that can be expected from you. I love it, it shows you have a creative and personal touch, well done!! :):):)
    • 21/07/2004
    • 15:27:35
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Same sex Marrage

    this is one of the best essays i have read on the topic. Its clear, consise and straight to the point, not many people can write essays on such a contraversal topic and know they can out line the main points, good work~!
    • 21/07/2004
    • 15:24:55
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good but...

    A few spelling and grammar mistakes.No bibliographyNot paragraphedNo conclusion or introductionApart from this miner things, your essay was brillant and just the right length. Thanks for sharing this with us as its a topic that not many people see fit to write about, because of embaressment or maybe they can relate to it, and think other people dont need to hear about it. And im very sure your points will be a great help to some people as it is a brillent essay. Well done! :)
    • 21/07/2004
    • 15:18:44
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent but...

    No biblography hun. Your points were clear and easy to understand. You had information to back up each of your points and it was a great topic. I also agree with you on most of your views to. Good work, :)
    • 21/07/2004
    • 10:41:33
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Im soo sorry hunny!!

    This was a brillant part 6, ive read all the other parts including this and its brillant. The wanker that gave u a poor rating, (we all know who she is) is a stupid cow, and wants to make it up 2 u, because it is a brillant story!! :(:(
    • 20/07/2004
    • 17:06:22
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm...

    Firstly, you didnt add a bibliography and i would in future like to see where your Statistics came from.Secondly, the conclusion could be longer and end better.Any way, it was a brillant piece, and for only 580 words, its brillant. Well done, and keep up the good work because this essays shows you have spent lots of time and effort on it! :)
    • 20/07/2004
    • 14:33:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey hun!!

    This essay was brillant, even though i didnt know who Judith Butler was :S:S. Good work, and next time add a little bibliography!!:) :)
    • 19/07/2004
    • 11:44:05
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree with sarapatt

    It just seems like facts put together to make a brillant essay, and it is a very well written piece.Anyway, well done
    • 19/07/2004
    • 11:41:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Brillant

    Well done, brillant essay, not to many spelling or grammar mistkaes. It was clear and consise and thanks alot for sharing this with us. Well done! :):)
    • 19/07/2004
    • 07:39:18
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm....

    Seems to me this has the perfect potiental to become a good essay, right now its in kinda note form. Also, next time could you add a small bibliography showing were you got your sources from. But it was good, and i did rate it good, because it is an averge essay, but you have written it with that style that it could be created into at least an 1000 word essay. Well done :)
    • 19/07/2004
    • 07:36:59
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Part3

    I asure you all that is NOT the ending, part 3 is nearly finished!!xox
    • 18/07/2004
    • 13:47:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    Strange topic. But altogether it was brillant. I few spelling mistakes, but it was brillant well done hun!
    • 18/07/2004
    • 09:39:15
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmmm....

    Not that this isnt good or anything, but if you got 98% for this, then why is it so short? It holds many good, well structured points, but is a bit too short. Anyways, well done and keep up the good work!! :)
    • 18/07/2004
    • 09:30:33
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • ADHD

    Even though you did a very good essay, their was no need to submit it twice, im sure you'll get all the points you need from this essay as it is brillant, well done!
    • 18/07/2004
    • 09:15:58
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Age discrimination

    I agree with all your points and havent noticed much grammar mistakes. Its a good lenght and includes a good biblography, well done!!I loved your start paragraph, i always like it when the writer begins with asking us to picture something or as you've done, imaging something, well done!! :)
    • 17/07/2004
    • 18:28:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • An essay on D.H Lawrence's Tickets Please. Used in English GCSE

    This is a brillant essay. I didnt notice any spelling mistakes or grammar errors. Its a good read for anyone and a great help for guys at GCSE level. Yet it is a bit short, and lacks some fine points, but all in all you have done a great job, well done!
    • 17/07/2004
    • 18:22:00
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Swear

    Why do you have to swear so much in this?Vuglar child, well done anyway, its very.......... interesting
    • 17/07/2004
    • 11:53:38
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Kurt Cobain

    This is lovely. It really is, so nice of you to share it with CheatHouse. Well done!
    • 17/07/2004
    • 11:50:34
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Again brillant

    But too short!! Please i urge you to write more. This is a good essay but lacks detail and depth! Well done anywho.
    • 17/07/2004
    • 11:47:48
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • 18-21

    It most certainly should not be 21!! Joke!You have lots of good points on the debate, but it is too short. I liked this because its an honest straight out debate from your point of view, and makes it a intresting read. Well done!
    • 17/07/2004
    • 11:29:12
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Story

    Very poor grammar. But it was an excellent story! It had a good twist, but im sure im not the only one whos going to say this but the story had the potental for a WAY better ending!! So next time, give us all another suprize with your ending, but all in all good work, and a few spelling mistakes! :)
    • 16/07/2004
    • 15:36:34
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Set Aside Programs

    Well done!This is a well written essay, and a good topic to. I felt maybe a bit more could have been wrote, and maybe if you make it clear that the last paragraph is your conclusion by summing up all your main points.But any who, brillant!
    • 16/07/2004
    • 15:26:32
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • To kill a mocking bird.

    I liked your essays as you went into great detail. I also like the book, so to read such a good review is quite pleasing, well done!
    • 15/07/2004
    • 12:02:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • This is brillant

    O i really like this!! Most of the movie reviews were 200 words and lacked everything yours has. It is inspiring that you could write this, and make it so good and injoyable to read, even for those who dont like Shrek.Well done!! :)
    • 08/07/2004
    • 08:55:39
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • U did it again!!

    Please i urge u to write over 300 words for something!! Your essays will be far more appreciated that way!This essays holds view points, most of which are brillant. Well done, this is quite good, but please write some more :)!!
    • 08/07/2004
    • 07:28:49
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I think we all no the answer to that!!

    I like this, but it could be clearer and longer, but all the same well done! And its a good topic 2!!
    • 07/07/2004
    • 15:28:31
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Classic

    This is very good. Reminds me of lord of the rings mixed with shakespeare. Anyway, well done........ i have no critisums!! :) :)
    • 07/07/2004
    • 12:07:46
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok.....

    Yea, ok first, when asking a question use one question mark, two makes you look babish.Ok, never heard of "girlfriend" magizine, but i live in Nireland, so, anyway. I liked your essay, it was strong and preswasive, and a good read, so well done!
    • 07/07/2004
    • 10:32:29
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Of mice and men

    In the first paragraphy, you could have alberated by sharing the difference about 'Curleys wife' with us.I agree with your point on how the movie didnt protray 'Curleys wife' as a rascist bitch, but the movie made people see that she was a victiom of sexism, as she was, but she didnt do herself any favours by discrimiating a black man, she made me lose all sympathy for her.I also felt you spent far to much time on 'curleys wife", and you had a few spelling mistakes.On the good side, your points were clear, and it was structured well and was very easy to read, yet it could have been longer! All the same, keep up the good work, because this is a brillant essay!
    • 06/07/2004
    • 10:53:38
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Of mice and men

    Very well written. I believe that each of your points are strongly wrote from what you believe..... "hope brings happiness" this is in my view a very personal aspect, which you blended into your essay!Well done!! :):)
    • 06/07/2004
    • 10:46:36
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Euthanasia

    I am an medical student right now, its quoted that Euthanasia is:The mercyless killing of persons by means of which are either legal or illegal with either concent of the family or reckless actions.But, your essay was brillant. It was full of emotion, but it was still quite formal. Your points were clear and had information to back them up, the only thing i didnt see was a bibliography!Anyway, keep up the good work!!
    • 06/07/2004
    • 08:32:02
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Abortion

    Well done. Your points arent very clear, but i get the message and you have a few grammer mistakes, but all in all well done. You have contrasted abortion in such a good, easliy understud way, and i liked the end line, good work!!
    • 06/07/2004
    • 08:19:36
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Smoker

    I myself being a smoker find it very hard to give up, even with this method. This has been a well researched, and made me realze that i better stop smoken!! Well done!
    • 05/07/2004
    • 09:14:24
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks!

    I have a 5 page essay of my choice on a life issue and i choose Euthanasia, you dont mind if i take some points off this, as its easy to read and perfect for my essay!!?Well done!!!
    • 04/07/2004
    • 13:38:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Of mice and men

    Of Mice and men is my favourite literature book ever, and i feel you have done it justice. This Continuation feels like John Steinbeck wrote it himself, its so like Of mice and men in the way the works are phrased and the language is used. I think your story is a little far-fetched, but all the same, so is most books i read, but its excellent and the time you spent on it most have been ages, well done!
    • 04/07/2004
    • 13:12:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Anorexia

    Firstly, the thing i like most about this essay is, you started off by asking us to picture something, which is a good writing technique. Secondly, your points are clear and to the point, and your bibliography is clear and can easily be understood. One thing you didnt do however is talk about the effects of Anorexia, like, hair loss, brital teeth, inbfertility so on so forth. But all in all it was brillant, well done!
    • 04/07/2004
    • 13:02:44
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work!

    I like this a lot. Good work!
    • 01/07/2004
    • 14:21:15
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work!!

    This is brillant! Its so detailed and full of resources. I like it alot and i know you must have spent ages on it. Good work, and quite a hard topic for people to respond to, so well done! Keep up the good work!
    • 01/07/2004
    • 14:19:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • You seem to like Australia

    This one is better than your other essay. I believe this one could be longer, but its also good. Keep up the good work!
    • 01/07/2004
    • 11:57:02
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Women of Australia in the 19th century

    Very poor spelling. No care taken at all in writing this. You could have wrote at least two more paragraphs and its just rushed. No conclusion and no biblography.On the hole,some of your facts were clear and on the point.
    • 01/07/2004
    • 11:53:56
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • OSmosis

    is from a high to low consitration, throught a simi permeable membrane.But the rest is good, it is quite a hard topic to be evaluted on, well done!
    • 30/06/2004
    • 12:34:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Jesus!!!

    What a twist! I liked this alot, but i dont understand how Ted died! Any ways, it was very well writin and a excellent read, good work!
    • 30/06/2004
    • 08:56:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Few mistakes

    "it's overall theme is the boy's realization of his fall from grace" isnt a theme. The main themes in Araby are paralysis, love, youth. I believe you could have wrote a lot more, yet all the same, it was a brillant piece of writing. Maybe if it helps, you could talk a look at my Araby essay, allthough, mine is a comparision with Eveline, another short story. The Url is:Compare and contrast Joyce's 'Araby' and 'Eveline'. Comment on the writer's effectiveness- corrected
    • 30/06/2004
    • 07:21:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Who am i

    i am obsesed with gothic art,clothes, paintings and poems. This is just beautiful. I love it, it paints a gothic picture and it is so well writen. You have a gift!
    • 29/06/2004
    • 16:31:01
    • Score: 15 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • FF8

    OMG, i cant get on 2 the second disk, im sucha spastic! I loved ur essay and i am surprized no1 rated it! its my fave game as well!!! Well writin, good luck in the oth FF's!
    • 29/06/2004
    • 16:16:53
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Ahhh!

    very touching and moving! well done!:):)
    • 29/06/2004
    • 16:02:32
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Porn

    OHHHHHH! I REALLY LIKED THIS ESSAY!I like this because its a good topic 2 explore and you have done this very well.Secondly, i liked the way you added in your own personal opinion, with not many essay writers do. All in all it was a great read! Well done ;)!
    • 29/06/2004
    • 15:48:30
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • T. S. Eliot: Tradition and the individual talent

    I liked the way you explored all the aspects of this essay, and i really liked the way you used "vs" in one of your subheadings. Brillant essay, keep up the good work. ;)
    • 29/06/2004
    • 13:35:24
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Communication Protocols

    Yes, it was quite good, maybe explain abit more but it was still brill. Well done!P.s. y did you submit it twice?
    • 28/06/2004
    • 12:33:34
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Treaty

    I like this, but i have to correct you, you said: "they were forced to sign the treaty or Germany will be invaded" Yet, germany was invaded many times. Anyways, short, snappy and good, well done, keep up the good work!
    • 26/06/2004
    • 12:31:04
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Relevance?

    Im sorry, this was a very good essay and i liked it alot, but i dont see its relevance! maybe a point or two on how it affects us, why it does and what the future holds for mystry shoppers!?all the same, it was brillant!
    • 24/06/2004
    • 16:58:40
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Body shop

    Yes, i have heard lots lately about the body shop, but this essay puts it into perspective thanks!Well researched, and well done!
    • 24/06/2004
    • 12:53:03
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Calving

    I had no idea what the word even ment! Well done, but hard to understand as the headings dont match the paragraphs but all the same it was very good!>
    • 22/06/2004
    • 12:08:19
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well researched!

    Anyone who doesnt give you good or at least average rating is mad! I can tell even by the amount you have wrote that it was going to be good because,lets face it, you cant write 3000 words on the biggest pile a s***! but anyway, i really injoyed your essay and i thought you reseached it very well! good job! xoxo
    • 21/06/2004
    • 17:02:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • LOL

    I agree with bvplaydrum make it legal!But anyway, this was a good essy and i enjoyed reading it, well done, nice topic, easily read, goodjob!
    • 21/06/2004
    • 16:58:19
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Binge drinking

    I myself relate to your paper, everynite my classmates go out and binge drink, its ludacris!Anyways, good paper!
    • 19/06/2004
    • 09:31:12
    • Score: 19 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
  • Omg! lol

    sorry, its just that i had a essay question on my chemistry paper on the history of the periodtic table, lol, if i had only read this, but anyway, very good, liked it alot. Yet you could have but the essay into paragraphys but i no u did it at the start, but i looks neater, loved it, and thanks for sharing.
    • 13/06/2004
    • 16:44:17
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Lol

    "The flame that once burned as passion, now smoked out with time" i like this line alot, the whole essay is brillant and i can see you spent lots of time on it,but maybe summing your points in a conclusion paragraph would be helpful. all in all i like it and im adding it to my favourite essay list!
    • 13/06/2004
    • 16:40:10
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Affects

    i liked you essay alot, it wasnt a typical essay, but all the same i liked it alot, easy to read, no spelling mistakes that i seen anyway, and clear and persise view of you information, well done!
    • 13/06/2004
    • 16:31:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Acne

    very well writen, but you could have added a ending paragraphy suming everything up, but the points you raised were brillant and the hands and pillow thing i reali didnt no, very good!
    • 06/06/2004
    • 16:21:39
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Erm...

    Im not going to tell you your essay was crap, because it really wasnt, i loved it and the context was brillent! Yet, i resent the "little converse" as they are my favourite shoes, but ill let it go, ive rated you 'good' as i myself am a punk rock fan, and the sex pistols being my favourite made this a more interesting read. I also have here 3 guys who found your essay good aswell, so keep up the good work!
    • 03/06/2004
    • 12:09:52
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • ?

    call me old-fasioned, but i feel that you havent really explaned your point well. the whole essay is brill and i rated you good ( :) ) for it, yet i dont reali understand what your fighten for, but, i really injoyed it and belive you spent lots of time on it.
    • 31/05/2004
    • 15:41:48
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Omg

    OPEN UR EYES!thats what this essay says. i no myself, i was pressured by "m8s" into sex, but if i had read this a year ago, it would not have happened! very modern and up 2 date statisticsexcellent!
    • 20/05/2004
    • 10:37:37
    • Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Good, but difficult concept

    i think you could have added more to this, like langauge and plot line and characters. you picked another essay to discuss that many wouldnt do. Araby and eveline are easily compared as they both consist of the same themes and paralysis occurs in both, yet all in all you have done a great job, so thumbs up!
    • 16/05/2004
    • 15:31:50
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Thank you

    all i cn say is thank u, u saved my life!
    • 12/05/2004
    • 11:50:59
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    well done, this was very impressive
    • 12/05/2004
    • 11:48:55
    • Score: 0 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Me

    me
    • 12/05/2004
    • 11:41:35
    • Score: 4 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Brill!

    i like it a lot! lol thats all i can say
    • 12/05/2004
    • 11:40:13
    • Score: 2 out of 7 people found this comment useful.