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  • Good.

    Good paper: has a lot of information, reasoning, and exclamation marks!
    • 31/08/2005
    • 23:24:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Very well written, structured, and thought out. You definately deserve a higher grade than 89% for this.
    • 28/08/2005
    • 23:12:06
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    Very nice essay. The story seems a bit out of place but this is an informative essay, not a formal one. Missed the fact that females can rape males as well though it happens in only 2 to 3 percent of cases.
    • 28/08/2005
    • 23:04:31
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    Pretty interesting but much of the wording is really redundant. Try using a thesaurus on those words (ie child labor instead of childbirth, etc)Also: How WILL the children be raised? By machines? Pleaes specify this in your paper.
    • 28/04/2005
    • 07:10:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Very nicely flowing essay, definately a :).
    • 03/04/2005
    • 09:57:45
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Errors

    You have left out many parts of the start of Windows, including the whole Apple scene and how Gates' sale to IBM didn't even exist at the time, etc. By the way, its Microsoft Corporation :).Good essay other than that.
    • 03/04/2005
    • 09:50:41
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Supported

    Your thesis is well supported.
    • 02/04/2005
    • 14:00:11
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Post once

    Post only once, please.
    • 02/04/2005
    • 13:55:11
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ummm

    This isnt an essay... its more of a paragraph. Poor transitions between sentences, but informative overall.
    • 02/04/2005
    • 13:50:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good summary

    Very good summary, kept the important parts. Some minor tense issues but these are small (ex. it helped Danny a lot.)
    • 02/04/2005
    • 13:46:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Simple language

    good, short analysis but language is very simplistic.
    • 02/04/2005
    • 13:42:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Facts

    Good facts but you probably should have included that Cholera, Typhoid, and Yellow Fever were so common that one in six children died before age 1, and one in three children died before age 5, and more facts of this type
    • 11/12/2004
    • 05:59:39
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very true

    I am only in 10th grade and I work on my homework from 3:15-11:45 around and wake up at 4:30 to finish it. I am also late to history class every day because I only finish my homework when there are about 10 minutes to get ready.
    • 11/12/2004
    • 05:51:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    good essay, bloated useful facts in it instead of empty words.
    • 11/12/2004
    • 05:47:36
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Note

    It is Cawdor not Caldor. Other than that it is a pretty good essay except for it seems a bit rushed at the end. No mention of his apparations, lack of sleep, etc.
    • 01/12/2004
    • 15:34:08
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • ...

    Many things are missing. Mention that this is Visual Basic, first off. Very ugly code, some functions I believe do not exist (.invisible = true is supposed to be .visible = false), etc.
    • 16/11/2004
    • 12:48:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Just a note

    not using two dimensional arrays makes this a whole lot simpler :)
    • 16/11/2004
    • 12:40:58
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Not enough

    This isn't in enough detail at all. You forgot to mention you can do echo "<font color=\"red\">"; etc. No real point to this given that all we learn here is static although php is supposed to be dynamic
    • 16/11/2004
    • 12:14:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm

    Good start but not long enough.
    • 16/11/2004
    • 12:11:04
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Whoa

    So many metaphors! Enough said.
    • 26/10/2004
    • 13:19:32
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    nice story. good ending. Only problems i found were pointed out by wet.
    • 26/10/2004
    • 13:17:18
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Strong

    Good arguments and well supported. I am sort of on the fence for this but it seems like i am falling off now. A green smiley will fit this well :).
    • 26/10/2004
    • 13:14:35
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Not specific enough

    Written in a simple language, too general, doesn't prove its point with specific details. This essay doesn't fit for highschool level.
    • 25/10/2004
    • 15:54:29
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a good paper that proves its point although it kind of gets off track at the end. Still a green smiley though :)
    • 21/08/2004
    • 17:26:08
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Whoops

    forgot to add this (bibliography):Economist, The. "An invisible hand?." 19 Aug 2004. Economist.com. The Economist. 20 Aug 2004 <http://www.economist.com/science/PrinterFriendly.cfm?Story_ID=3104321>.
    • 20/08/2004
    • 21:14:32
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good and to the point

    You got to the point without taking too long. Great essay :)
    • 20/08/2004
    • 20:28:52
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Just a question

    you said 41% of them are white and 63% are non white, how could this add up to 104%?
    • 07/08/2004
    • 18:11:23
    • Score: 22 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
  • Cool

    I never heard of Gnostics before but I like hearing things about religions, even though I don't beleive in God...
    • 07/08/2004
    • 18:03:46
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    way too short... good ideas but I cannot rate this well (you can write more than 159 words cant you?!)
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:57:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Detail

    Good job of looking into detail. Although I assumed that it would be very hard for George, I don't think I could have proved it this well. Smiley face :).
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:48:41
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • -.-

    Shows a new point of view to the story which I never thought of before, although it is not justified enough. But Curley was sort of random so it is hard to justify his thoughts. Im gona click between the yellow and green and see what u get :D
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:44:57
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • :|

    Although very analytical, there are quite a few misquotes (not by much but missing a word or two) so I have to give it a yellow :|.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:39:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    Interesting paper although I dont beleive in Witchcraft. Your paper was very well crafted so I give you a green :).
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:31:58
    • Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Clever

    Clever solution :)
    • 04/08/2004
    • 16:59:27
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Only simple equations

    Why dont you have equations that are a bit more complex like (x+y)(y+z)(z)?
    • 04/08/2004
    • 16:56:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • :)

    This essay had one problem, which is talking about cross reducing:Next, see if you can cross reduce.2 goes into 2 1 time. 3 goes into 3 1 time.2 goes into 4 2 times. 3 goes into 6 2 times.Maybe you should explain that you can only cross reduce a numerator with a denominator (and vice versa). Over all, this paper was good. :)
    • 04/08/2004
    • 16:54:18
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Tools?

    Although this is an accurate paper, it is more about agricultural systems than about tools. It could have been longer. I'm giving you a :|.
    • 04/08/2004
    • 16:48:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Looks good

    Although I havent read My Last Duchess, this summary seems to explain it very well. Maybe I'm going to read it now because it seems interesting.
    • 04/08/2004
    • 16:46:18
    • Score: 44 out of 50 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Seems good enough to be put in a poem collection :). Good work.
    • 04/08/2004
    • 16:41:34
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    You have point of view that I have never seen before on this subject. However, it seems like you are giving us fact after fact without ever showing the other side and why his theory made sense to people back then even if it doesn't make sense now
    • 22/06/2004
    • 11:16:00
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    very clear and to the point. Good job, i understand how you got a 100% on this
    • 05/06/2004
    • 19:06:16
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    this essay is well written and compelling. Maybe my sister will convert now (she's all about this stuff, ill show it to her)
    • 05/06/2004
    • 07:11:36
    • Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Missing

    Its missing the other side of the story: We are only made up of atoms, and as much as we would like to think that we make our own decisions, its all just a matter of if the atoms are in the right place in the right time, which if you knew exactly where every super string is, could be calculated billions of years ago. so you can't argue that robots cant think because they are calculations, but we can because what we 'think' is actually preditermened.
    • 05/06/2004
    • 07:06:40
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well...

    You could have added some of their myth like the eagle on the cactus and things like that, pretty nice rundown on the history though.
    • 04/06/2004
    • 18:27:55
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Could make it longer...

    If I were you, i would make it longer. I enjoyed this essay, however, because it is very informative for its length. Im only a 9th grader tho so i didnt know what C6H12O6 + 6O2 -> 6CO2 + 6H2O + energy meant :D
    • 04/06/2004
    • 18:25:09
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    Very good essay! Some minor grammar errors are NOT gonna affect my rating @ all. Very strong ending especially.
    • 04/06/2004
    • 18:20:51
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Whoa

    This is a really good review sheet, few minor problems (ex: tenses and electroscope isnt always gold leaf). Not gona hurt rating tho
    • 04/06/2004
    • 07:42:26
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Some problems

    i never really saw this essay as a good one because I have seen quite a few spelling mistakes and some grammar ones. Use spell check next time.
    • 04/06/2004
    • 07:39:38
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Sorta

    This essay shows the basics of it, but you might want to add time/length dilation and increased mass and what happens if u pass the speed of light (which you cant).
    • 04/06/2004
    • 07:36:26
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    this essay is very good, i definatally think that cheathouse will accept it. Very informative and yet straight to the point.
    • 04/06/2004
    • 07:06:20
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Um...

    You might want to explain how just 1 lethal injection costs 3.2 million dollars, that sounds absurd. Also lengthen it if u can (and if u want to) cuz it seems kind of short for a 12th grade paper. Has many facts and is right to the point, which is what I like (and why i hate charles dickens :D )
    • 03/06/2004
    • 17:40:27
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well...

    That's the basics, you should have added in that the Dome of the Rock is there and that Israelites bought the land from Palestinians before the mass migration but other than that, good job!
    • 03/06/2004
    • 17:36:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    Seems like you can recall it very well, and none of it seems made up. Your story is something we can all relate to, even if its on different scales. I think almost all americans can remember this day, but not all can put it into words like you did. I know I cant.
    • 03/06/2004
    • 06:48:22
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Good start, shabby middle, but a great last sentence that summerizes it all: 4. The right management team, with strong foundations in marketing, management, finance, and product development. Enough working capital to survive in the working-capital-intensive retail channel.
    • 03/06/2004
    • 06:38:04
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good!

    Good summery of the book. Well written and constructed, with some actual remarks of the author.
    • 02/06/2004
    • 17:40:56
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.