Wasn't very infomative.
- 23/08/2004
- 19:21:37
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Few little errors in the grammer and spelling. Courlove was correct with his comment saying that he does jump from subject to subject.
- 11/07/2004
- 08:20:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I've actually written a few of my own business plans and yours seems to hit the nail on the head. Obviously every business plan is different and covers different aspects. The part i liked most about yours was the competition section.Again, very well researched. Thumbs up!
- 11/07/2004
- 08:16:46
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very well structured and researched. Excellent for 11th grade level!!!Thumbs up!Could do with some references.
- 11/07/2004
- 08:12:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay seems to go around the main point and not hit the nail on the head. Also, i found quite a bit of irrelevant infomation included. Any references??Apart from that its ok.
- 09/07/2004
- 23:24:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.