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  • Larry flint

    isnt courtney love in this movie! Aye i think this is the one i saw. Great notes for anyone who couldnt be bothered watching it! lol. Nicely done'!
    • 12/09/2004
    • 15:11:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Tut tut spoony!!

    Look, another minus essay from our new great number one ranker. If u ask me, and most people do, this isnt the kind of example u are suppose to set for pending users... seems to me like johnjjp was better suited to the number one spot!! Hey, lets see.... who ever wants spoonman to be number1, rate this comment poor, who ever wants someone else rate it average whoever wants johnjjp rate it good. Thats fare, isnt it?
    • 11/09/2004
    • 12:35:55
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Brill

    im doing the cold war now in history and its kinda crap. this essay sums it up well and helps shorten it to points that are easy to learn! thanks
    • 11/09/2004
    • 12:25:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • -10 and counting

    if i dont say so myself, -10 from the top ranker! john never had a minus essay, yet again u SUCK!
    • 09/09/2004
    • 14:43:25
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Pitty

    pitty about the typing prints, yet a good essay, well done!
    • 07/09/2004
    • 14:36:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Teen preg

    first teenage pregnacy is the worst thing ever!! Theres a girl in my class missed the most important exams of her life, and cant re-do them! all because she couldnt keep her legs closed. Secondly, please paragraph ur work.
    • 07/09/2004
    • 11:12:00
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Lol

    A bit childish but all the same funny! nice job!!!
    • 03/09/2004
    • 13:41:16
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • EXCELLENT!!!

    These are the things i like about your essay:1. Clear and consise and goes straight to the point!2. The opening paragraphy asking the reader a question and is allways affective in essays like this.3. Your paragraphys have sources4. You have a nice long biblography6. Its intresting to read and not many spelling miskates!Nice job, and his is a brilliant essay!
    • 02/09/2004
    • 11:34:17
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Euro Disney

    You have written a well adapted essay on the downfal of Euro Disney. I have been so many times and each time it gets worse. Its still a magor atraction, but at the rate its going, a pile of crap will be more intresting, Nice job and keep up the good work\!
    • 02/09/2004
    • 11:25:17
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Dublicate submission

    good essay. Theres no need tto submit it twice, but i hope it doesnt get deleted as its very intesting essay, well done!
    • 02/09/2004
    • 11:23:13
    • Score: 4 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Beauty Mags

    Nicely done. This is the kind of essay that values your view point, and you didnt add enough of that, still it explored the aspects of gender roles and beauty mags and how woman try to become the beautyful woman on the front cover of one of those mags. well done!
    • 31/08/2004
    • 11:46:08
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • French Revolution

    Nice essay on the French Revolution. Nice long biblography and very detailed! Excellent job!!!
    • 31/08/2004
    • 11:24:42
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Obesity

    Nice essay on obesity. "Over one-half of all Americans (about 97 million)"-- please add a biblography. This essay had the potental to be longer, yet its quite short but holds lots of valued information, also, maybe next time add some more statistics.
    • 31/08/2004
    • 09:26:49
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Gothid Project

    part 3 coming soon!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 17:05:06
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Children of an Idle mind2

    Thanks once again for the comments guys!!!!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 17:04:36
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Children of an Idle mind

    Thanks for the comments!!!!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 17:04:01
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • A Destiny Controlled by Thought

    Nice short account of a destiny controlled thought. Well done, short and sweet but effective! thumbs up
    • 30/08/2004
    • 16:58:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Macbeth

    I have read so many Macbeth essays, none really did talk about his destiny. This is well ploted and research and adding the page number beside the quotes is so helpful! Thanks alot, im doing a study of Macbeth and parts of this will be used to complete my conclusion. Thanks its a great help.
    • 30/08/2004
    • 16:56:08
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Pearl Harbor

    Good job! Yet a biblography would also be nice.You have here a very detailed account of Pearl Harbor historical story. Im sure this will be very popular! Nice job!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 16:53:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A lesson to Remember

    Nice.... it really brings out a personal touch, well done. ALso, it could have been a bit longer, nevertheless was nice to read!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 16:50:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice work Admin!!

    liked it alot, hey.. why dont you submit anymore?? Tut tut!! Well, all the same, good job!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 15:48:04
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Sex and the City

    Sex and the City is my favourite programme! well done! I think you did well in this essay that im sure was hard to write about and i liked the way you explained each persons personality and then referred them to us or what we could be. Nice job and once again well done!!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 10:36:27
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Sexual Abuse

    First let me say well done and nice job. Then let me say that you didnt includ a biblography and you really have to in an essay like this were its full of facts and statitics. Yet your sources were brilliant (e.g. (Finkelhor 1995, p. 1417).) and it was well researched an a good length. Well done, thanks for submitting this it will surely help alot!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 10:33:53
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done!

    Thank you for sharing your first Assignment as Executive Assistant. I just want to say somethings about it. You now hold no credabilty or rights to this anymore and when this gets acepted and your boss checks your work it will come up on the check screen and it will look like its not your work. Nice bibloggraphy and im glad you submited it i just hope you dont lose your new job over it!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 10:31:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • The Holocaust

    WAy too short. This is a topic i have seen 5000 words written for. Please take the time to resubmit this and im sure it will reach at least 50 for it. Thanks again, and i gave you an average rating and a thumbs up!
    • 30/08/2004
    • 10:26:11
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Emotion

    well, if say you work with a man that your secretly in love with, your feelings towards him are obiusly going to change. You might hide from him, try to get as far away from him, or follow him its different with different people. The emotion involved either drives you forward, or drives you away leaving your work unatended to and the risk of getting fired. That is why i think emotiion just gets in the way.
    • 28/08/2004
    • 11:55:01
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Teen abortion

    Personaly, you dont what to know what i think. But, i think (contradicted myself!!) you should fix your grammar, structure your paragraphs and keep all opinions to yourself in this kind of essay.
    • 28/08/2004
    • 11:51:53
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Er.....

    Earnest Gaines originally wanted to write The Autobiography of Miss Jane Pittman as a folk biography, with a "group of people telling of this one person's life" for over 100 years of history. You cant really write a autobiography of 100 years in 590 words. There are so many websites with information about the autobiography and its author and the autobiography meaning. Yet, its a start and i would be grateful if you tryed again and re-sumbitting it, maybe a bit longer. Yet you did get a good rating from me. I know sometimes essays such as this are hard to write, and i see lots of good work in yours. Thanks all the same.
    • 28/08/2004
    • 11:38:01
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good analyation

    it could have been longer but all the same well done. As you said Philip Hobshawm's poem 'A message from the Fish' relates to mans distroying of the waters, i all think the poem is quite retorical in a sense. Its true that he is trying to make us see the wonders that are held in the ocean, and it would appeal more to fishermen this way. All the same, nice job and a conclusion. Well done!
    • 28/08/2004
    • 11:32:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Final Friends:3

    Nicely done Hanna! at first when i read the title i thought it said final fantasy 3!! But, i guess it didnt!!!! Yet nice story and as i was reading your story, i also just completed final fantasy 8 for the 3rd time. Hehe, nice work!!
    • 27/08/2004
    • 14:39:36
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    It is very persuasive. Its also clear and easy to read. Its brilliant, and very well done. nice work!
    • 27/08/2004
    • 13:52:15
    • Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Funny as fuc*

    Brilliant made me laugh!! I had to study ADD for a while, this brought back memories, nicely done!
    • 20/08/2004
    • 08:10:16
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm...

    A few things i dont believe in. The point about 'Heaven as I see it is not a destination but a starting point of our lives with God' i believe heaven is a reward, not a 'new turn'.Yet i loved it, even though it was a bit short. It was a brilliant description of Heaven, well done!
    • 20/08/2004
    • 08:07:14
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Stolen Generations

    Its very apealing because its grewsome but is in the same sense intresting. I think you have a brilliant essay here.This is a brilliant essay, yet the conclusion is a bit ruff, all the same nicely done indeed!
    • 20/08/2004
    • 08:04:53
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    http://allfreeessays.com/student/free/Trench_Warfare_in_WW1.shtml
    • 19/08/2004
    • 14:45:52
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Dublicate Submission

    Nicely done. in your essay you described the scenery nicely and made the surroundings seem beautful. The ending is beautful aswell. Its so sad but the rose makes it seem romatic. Well done, this is one of the best pieces of creative writting i have ever read. Although there is no need to submit it more than once!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 14:42:34
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Origin Of The Moon

    You have writtin for your first ever essay a very detailed accound of the Theories on the Origin of the Moon in your own words. I must stress apon the importance of a biblography showing were your information came from. Yet thanks for a great first essay.
    • 19/08/2004
    • 13:38:21
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Edgar Allen Poe

    Nicely done. I liked the way at the end that you added in your feelings towards Poes poety and lifestyle. Well done indeed!!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 13:15:18
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice....

    You have here a essay about what a challenge/responce system is. Yet, i feel it was too short to be explained fully, yet you did a good job, so well done!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 12:15:03
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    Nicely done. A bit too short but you have submitted a good piece of writting, well done!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 12:09:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree with larrylovenduonofit

    This is too short for such a contraversal topic. Please re-think this and try harder. Then re-submit it because i really want to read it. Thanks
    • 19/08/2004
    • 10:56:52
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Music

    Nicely done. I agree that New Media technologies have greatly influenced the content and functioning of music and other entertainment industries in recent times. Were i come from music is the courtnrys thing, theres no such thing as brittany spears advertising sketchers in my counrty, and i believe that classical music is only inhanced my practise. Nice essay and well done!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 10:49:26
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Flu

    Nicely done! Your essay was full of helpful notes and statistics and had a bit of advice at the end, well done!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 10:40:48
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Cancer

    This is a well informative essay on cancer and tumors, most of the stuff in this essay i didnt know, and i have a biolgy exam soon!! Nevertheless this essay has been a real help to me and i am keeping it in my favourites if you dont mind!!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 10:36:29
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Like your other pending essay, this is short. Yet in this case short is good. This is a well structured essay and a real creditation to this site, nicely done!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 10:24:38
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Acid Rain

    Irelands probibly the worst place for acid rain. Yet, you explain well how it affects were you live, and all other valued information concering acid raon. This is a briliant essay, yet you diddnt conclude with a biblography. Anyway well done!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 10:22:46
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Entertainment Music and Television

    Too short. This has a brilliant poitenal to grow into a longer essay. All the points are there but you need to structure it. ITs way too short for such a contravesal topic, yet you got a good rating from me as i can see the effort! well done!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 10:18:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Julius Caesar

    I liked this because i hated him!! But yes, this is a nice essay. Its so full of detail and i just fell like you have done the site some creadtion with it! Thanks
    • 18/08/2004
    • 14:58:56
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Kurt Cobain

    Nicely done. this emotional yet formal and is nice to read. Yet, a little too short, but nice to read, thanks!
    • 18/08/2004
    • 14:41:33
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    Erics essay was put into the wrong subject, but boo stinkin whooo? Does it really matter? The point is, his essay isnt rated 11 because its crap, it means something to somebody even if you cant see that. Sometimes opinions are better than facts. =p
    • 18/08/2004
    • 14:29:27
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Again

    a start and conclusion paragraph would benifit here. All the same nice job and a nice make of car!
    • 18/08/2004
    • 14:26:44
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Aladdin Knowledge

    Unlike your other essays, i have no idea what this is about. Maybe if you had added a start paragraph explaining what Aladdin Knowledge systems were then it might be clearer. Also, the layout here is good, a few grammar errors but apart from that well done!
    • 18/08/2004
    • 14:24:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Loctite Company

    You have written a good essay on the Loctite Company. you laid it out in question and answer form which is always good, Nevertheless, you could have done a conclusion, and in it you could have talked about rthe business' goals, and the results expected. Please add a small biblography next time.
    • 18/08/2004
    • 14:22:04
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • HOLY CRAP!

    My god this is deep. Its short but full of pain and remorse. No one has the right to tell you why "god" killed someone. That is bullshit about the smoking and drinking think. Irelands full of drunks and they arent killed because god thinks there a waste of space. This is brilliant. You really have over come this. Well done. No one has the right to suck you into a baptist cult. Nice job.... no really well done!
    • 18/08/2004
    • 12:49:38
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Tool Mcadden?

    You seem to have a problum with both me and Spoony! Tool..... how orginal, which kind of tool? If you had any such sense, you'll notice you are wrong. First you complain at me for saying your essay had no point. Now your doing the same with spoonys, but the thing is, his does. People want to know about the olympics, how many people want a letter to a friend?? I didnt even understand the letter. Now your deniying everything! Mcadden, it seems to me, and not just me that you are affraid of losing your place in the rank so your writting worthless pieces in the hope someone will see the good. I know you dont like my writtings and poems yet i happen to know that your work is brilliant. But now you have really let yourself go, why.... o well.
    • 18/08/2004
    • 12:35:20
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Schools and r.e

    Nicely done! Yet, a biblography would be nice even for such a short piece. Nevertheless i really injoyed reading this and you deserved a green smiley, well done!
    • 18/08/2004
    • 12:29:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree with Grapey

    If this had the questions with it then maybe, but its short, no meaning and pointless. Sorry.
    • 18/08/2004
    • 09:48:25
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Your essay is a real credit to me. I have to do a paper this yeaar on the Andersonville raiders, do thanks! Also, the comment biblography is apresated.
    • 18/08/2004
    • 09:30:02
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Real Estate

    I know how expensive they are as my family are moving house. You have a nice clear essay that has back up information and is easy to read and understand, nicely done. Also, good job with the biblography.
    • 18/08/2004
    • 09:27:20
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Human Trafficing

    I think you spelt a part of your title wrong. Never worry though! This does seem very familar, but some of the things in this i havent read, so im sure you havent plagorized it. Yet, a nice essay and a well done from me!
    • 18/08/2004
    • 09:24:57
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: Re: Mcadden

    Sorry for my spelling mistake as it bothers you so much. Are you blind?Quote"If spoon didn't want his essay to be poorly rated, maybe he should have labeled it creative writing as well." Can you show me a poor rating on this essay? MAybe if you havent rated it. Please stop contradicting yourself. This is the 3rd time ive had to correct you.
    • 18/08/2004
    • 09:07:49
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Careers

    Nice essay about careers. Im under 18 so i find this essay very usful. Nicely done and i think you for taking the time to submit it!
    • 18/08/2004
    • 09:02:58
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: Mcadden

    I think your essay was good. It was morer personalized than a formal esay.Mcadden, do you remember how pissed off you were when i told you that your letter had no point? WEll, your doing the same thing here, except your opinon is a lot stronger than mine. Erics has a topic, yours didnt, yet again your views are being over throwen by your feelings.
    • 17/08/2004
    • 09:32:10
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Rise of the Great Blade

    Nice!!! Hope this one will be as long as you gift of a thousant parts!! Nicely dont Dragon!! Nicely done!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 12:27:12
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Topic

    Weird topic! But you have written so well about such a boring thing! No affence! This piece of writting makes light units seem intresting as you have added your own views and some facts about were you live and the light units there. So well done on such a hard topic!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 12:13:21
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Very intresting

    I noticed that many of the sites essays are to do with history and German history is a main topic. This is very well written and will help a lot of people as i know it has a fixed a few things i needed to clear up. Well done!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 12:11:15
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Jane Alexander

    Nice biography of Jane Alexander, well done!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 10:59:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Bride?

    Well, it was a good.... poem, essay whatever. Makes you wish there was more............
    • 16/08/2004
    • 02:33:00
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    I want to thank you all for taking to time to write a comment on my essays. Thanks alot it means so much!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 02:31:50
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Macbeth

    Funny, it was my brithday yesterday, and i recived a book set of shakepeare dvd's and i was hoping for Macbeth. I got, Romeo and Julette, Midsummer night dream, The rape of luacrea and Hamlet, but no Macbeth! Anyway, this essay really made me want to watch the movie as i have read the play ages ago. Nice job!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 02:25:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • More than saddness

    Brilliant poem Noone! well done! Lovely to read!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 02:22:21
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Describe the strategies that China has adopted to promote economic growth and development.

    Very good for a first essay. yet it would be helful if you wrote a small biblograpy showing were your statics came from. Yet, nice effort!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 02:15:50
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Billabong

    I have a billabong t-shirt! Sorry, lol. Good long refernced essay. Good job! Nice topic and well research! have a pat on the back! =p
    • 16/08/2004
    • 01:51:37
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Designer babies

    yea, i have read alot lately about this topic. Seems to be pissing alot of people off. Well, nicely done!
    • 16/08/2004
    • 01:47:44
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good poem

    very good eric. Shows the life of a stoner, well done!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 16:44:45
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Our Town

    Good notes on our town, you have explained why the stage is bare and how it makes us feel. Something many people forget to talk about
    • 15/08/2004
    • 16:38:24
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Parts

    are plagorized because you didnt show were those parts come from, nor did you put them into your own words.http://www.findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0AZV/is_1_42/ai_99848681
    • 15/08/2004
    • 16:15:58
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Albert Einstein

    Nice long biography of Albert Einstein. Good job, yet you may need to add a biblography. Please do in future.
    • 15/08/2004
    • 15:41:50
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Lol,

    Just thought id share this with ya. I have a poster of Martin Luther nailing the doctorine to the Catheral door, but he is talking to someone and isnt paying attention. Theres also a sign beside the door saying 'muder is a sin, signed jesus' but the nail isnt going through the door, its going through the priests head. Haha, sorry.This essay is a good example of how important Luthers ideas were, also how he created his 'lutherins' as he liked to call them. Good job!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 15:38:05
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: hanna, princess666 and bvplaydrum

    Thanks alot for your comments. I think both essays will be deleted, so..... but i will be submitting it again as i have reason to believe as it hasnt be rated poorly yet that its wanted here. Thanks again for the comments *sob*
    • 15/08/2004
    • 15:04:49
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: Pixle_for_life

    Really, was there any need for that? Just look how many people have rated this, and wrote comments and your comment will get more than -3 i can tell you now. I dont know what johnjjp has done to upset you, or to cause you to burtaly imbarrese him on his own essay, but y dont you take it up with him in a email. I have rated your comment poor as it deserves it, nothing personal to yoy, but lets face it, if i called you a bastard on one of your top essays, would you smile and give me a green face?
    • 15/08/2004
    • 14:58:45
    • Score: 42 out of 54 people found this comment useful.
  • The Tempest

    Nicely done!I can see the extreme effort here even though its a bit short, but good job and keep up the good work!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 14:52:56
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Im going to have a go at you.

    Seems to me, apart from the fact your a spoilt bitch, i also think that you dont hate the country, you just hate the way its run and the goverment.look at this, these are the things you stated, most are to do with the goverment or the goverment is in charge of and you dont like.-The Government-The Traffic-New Zealand Law-The Lack of Opportunity-lack of moneyThe other 5 points are you just being stupid! Im sorry to say. So what if drivers are old and have to wear glasses, thats just sad to say it bothers you that drivers dont want to crash into people. So what if everyones stoned? If you cant beat em, join em! I live in ireland!! I would love to live aboad, anyone here would. So get your ass down here and see how it is. Cold, no drugs, no ones ever that drunk, we have a ozone layer hole too, i cant get a good job cus im under 18, the people are sometimes dumb and the drivers crash into other drivers for the craic of it. Be grateful for what you have, and also, maybe if you worked you;d get money, why should anyone just hand you $100,000 and a plane ticket for where ever you want to go just for sitting on your ass!!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 14:37:36
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • 8th serise, not 7th.

    Good, i love harry potter books, and i have read all 6 back to front! There brill. Good work and a very good length for a book like this, well done
    • 15/08/2004
    • 14:06:20
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Too short

    i disagree. Nike had no busness taking over Converse. I no her i N.ireland converse comes bfor nike any day. This essay was ok, but was wayyyyyyyyy too short.
    • 15/08/2004
    • 13:39:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Pirates of the Carribben

    Brilliant movie, actors and review, well done!!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 13:05:28
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice review

    I myself wrote a review of the 'Passion of Christ' But i wrote mine for a newspaper and had to be 2000 words! I liked your start paragraphy stating how you felt abou the movie and how Mel Gibson felt to. Nice job!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 13:03:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Jarassic park

    I liked this review as it is one of my favorite movies. Its a bit shorter than the other 2 reviews, but well done.
    • 15/08/2004
    • 13:01:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Islanders

    Brilliant!!! This is really really good, well done...=p
    • 15/08/2004
    • 12:52:44
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Wordsworth

    This is a bright essay on the poems and portyal of them by Wordsworth. One of my favourite poems by Wordsworth is the Dafodils, which is too do with nature, clearly!! You have done a good job expalining how his poems teach us to apperciate nature. Nice effort indeed.
    • 15/08/2004
    • 12:26:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Gay oral

    Whats lays? You wrote, \"sorry lays theres.....\" Also, you referrer to the second gay as there instead of him. \"Yes they will be.\" Also, i dont have a problum with it, but some gay people might be against you calling them gay 1 and gay 2! You could have started by saying, Paul is a gay man who met Sean when they were in collage, they fell in love and are now applying for a gay marriage, then go on to your role play. Yet, i gave you a good as it was good, it held all the information about gay marriages that is needed, and made me laugh a bit! Good job!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 12:09:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    You have picked two people out of two very good stories and compared them. How can anyone compare two very different people in only 200 words? Thoughts, feelings,looks, family, jobs, cultures, woman discrimation, how it affects both women. This would only be a base line for an essay. It was good mcadden, dont get me wrong, but short and sweat belongs to childrens books, not 3rd year collage students!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 11:56:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Basketball

    Best game ever. But in Ireland we all it nets! Lol, nice fluency and a warm cultural opening, well done!
    • 15/08/2004
    • 11:49:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Your essay Religious Parody Script called 'Heavens Above'. A comedy that raises issues about Religions impact on Mankind and Mankind in general, apart from holding lots of .<Tab/> is altogether quite good. Well done
    • 14/08/2004
    • 15:28:11
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Belfast

    I live in northern ireland, and i do also libe in belfast. i dont like the way people are always going on about loyalist, terriorest and rebel groups and how belfast is just one big fight, its not. I live there and its a nice place to live. Your essay is a perfect example of this!
    • 14/08/2004
    • 15:19:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Main theme??

    The main theme is paralysis as m_iria_m stated. Yet, this doesnt take away from the quality of your essay. Nicely done.
    • 14/08/2004
    • 15:11:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • A Letter to the Past

    nice letter, well written and scripted. Nice job eric
    • 14/08/2004
    • 15:07:03
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Literature

    Good strong essay on literature, well done for your first ever essay!
    • 14/08/2004
    • 15:01:54
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    But i found you a-f points on this site.http://www.fact-index.com/p/pe/perfect_competition.htmlPlease site your sourses better.
    • 14/08/2004
    • 13:40:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Coca- Cola

    Very nice essay. Love the topic! Nice presented and well structured, also, a bilography! good job indeed!
    • 14/08/2004
    • 13:27:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Are you ready?

    God, i new you were a talented story writter, but i didnt know you could write poems. Well done mr lots of talents!!!!!
    • 13/08/2004
    • 15:25:07
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • P.s.

    plagorizedhttp://www.planetpapers.com/Assets/4909.php
    • 13/08/2004
    • 15:02:48
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    www.123helpme.com/preview.asp?id=4756www.digitaltermpapers.com/cat.cgi/the_great_gatsby.html
    • 13/08/2004
    • 15:01:56
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    ltd.vg/view.cgi/Miscellaneous/great_gatsby1-2.shtmlwww.hot-papers.com/Miscellaneous/index43.shtmluk.geocities.com/lesleycody_1998/gatsessa.htmlwww.123helpme.com/preview.asp?id=11917www.4freeessays.com/essays/1644.shtml
    • 13/08/2004
    • 15:00:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    http://www.planetpapers.com/Assets/443.php
    • 13/08/2004
    • 14:59:20
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    www.chuckiii.com/Reports/Shakespeare/ Blood_Imagrey_in_Macbeth.shtmlwww.planetpapers.com/Assets/1988.php
    • 13/08/2004
    • 14:56:06
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    http://www.killer-essays.com/Sports_&_Games/sjf139.shtmlwww.studentcentral.co.uk/Sports_Sciences/more3.htmlwww.netessays.net/viewpaper/21411.html
    • 13/08/2004
    • 14:37:43
    • Score: 14 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    This is your 4th pending essay today that has been plagorized.http://www.netessays.net/viewpaper/28436.htmlhttp://www.4freeessays.com/essays/1447.shtml
    • 13/08/2004
    • 14:28:01
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    http://www.planetpapers.com/Assets/760.php
    • 13/08/2004
    • 14:24:01
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • System

    You have written an intresting essay on The creation of a functioning market-based economic system in China. It is a very good essay as it 1)holds a biblography 2) is well researches and 3) is very intresting. So thumbs up!
    • 13/08/2004
    • 13:44:13
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Meaning Of friendship

    This is a nice piece of writting. Its short and sweet, but yet holds lots of emotions. This is very touching, well done!!!
    • 13/08/2004
    • 13:40:28
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Howard Zinn

    Well structured essay. Not many people give him reginision as glengem said, but... makes a change, a well needed change! So.. nice essay and good work!
    • 13/08/2004
    • 11:29:02
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Muhammad

    Quite a good biography of Muhammad and his teachings. Well dones. It was yes short, but held most of the needed information, so good job!
    • 13/08/2004
    • 11:24:56
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Brill

    Nicely done! Also a biblography!!!!!!!!!!!Halia louya! Job well done!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 19:10:20
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I liked the end bit, it was kind of a 'Moral to the story' ending. A bit short, but holds the same detail, good job.
    • 12/08/2004
    • 19:09:12
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Of mice and men

    Silly mistake, it was indeed John Steinbeck, but no worries. Good essay, bit short and sweet.
    • 12/08/2004
    • 19:06:17
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: MccaddenSucks

    Thank you, i have writtin many poems such as these for my GCSE english (N.ireland exams) and this being one. I recived an a grade along with all my other pieces. Others certianly see its depth, others dont. Im glad you took the time to rate it and im glad you shared your view on my work, even if it was a bit harsh. I believe that poor ratings are for work that is bad, i mean bad spelling and pure crap. If, like you said it does nothing for you, fair enough, but i didnt force you to read this, and i hope next time your rating my essays, you wont judge them so harshly and try and see them from my view.
    • 12/08/2004
    • 18:50:53
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good... nice work!

    THANK YOU FOR THE BIBLOGRAPHY!Sorry, its just when reading essays like this some people forget to site there sourses, making the essay looked plagorized. But, thanks and good work!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 17:54:33
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok...

    i dont see any point in this? am i wrong? If it was longer maybe, but i really dont see how this could be helpful to anyone, yet i give you a good rating as it made me laugh! Good use of humor!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 17:47:31
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Brillant!!

    Please tell me theres another part!!Ahhh this is so good. Well done chick!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 14:13:59
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Prisoners of war

    I told you id come back to your story and i will. Spoonman, frankly, i think you shouldnt have put this here, its too good. You have lost all rights to this, and im sure you could have got this published as a small book. Yet, another brilliant chapter and im glad yoy did submit it!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 11:51:24
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I am

    Brilliant piece. its dark and mysterious, well done and good work!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 11:48:05
    • Score: 15 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • Final Fantasy

    Ha! You never told me you had a final fantasy essay!! Well done. You have truely captured the game in its best. Well done chick!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 11:45:43
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    Although this essay eas too short and held many spelling and grammar mistakes, i agree with everything you said. except for the bit 'realize by killing a person, we violate his right to live'You should have said their right to live. Nevertheless, a nice essay on your views, but check for grammatical errors next time.
    • 12/08/2004
    • 11:42:30
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Yea.....

    Ok... i see were your going here, and i dont really agree with the other comments as it is quite good. Please, you really could have made it longer and Theirs is someones something, you used it instead of theres. Yet, it has amazing potental.
    • 12/08/2004
    • 11:35:38
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Yea good.

    I am very certian this could have been longer, im afraid im rating it average, its just too short, Yet it holds many good points and lots of information that might benifit someone, so nice try!
    • 12/08/2004
    • 09:20:42
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    http://www.kat.gr/kat/history/Start.asp?WinF=Eco/AdamSmith
    • 11/08/2004
    • 14:25:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    fromhttp://members.lycos.co.uk/DawnMac/criminals_born_or_made
    • 11/08/2004
    • 14:21:10
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • No

    The usa should not invade iraq, the countrys poor enough. This is very hurtful to people who live there or familys live there. This will only cause a war, and i hope thats not what you want, i resent this essay and if people are going to rate it poor, so what? I have to say what i feel, and this is pure BULLSHIT!
    • 11/08/2004
    • 14:16:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • The Answer

    Good, it was good. MAkes you think doesnt it? Well, good job.
    • 11/08/2004
    • 09:41:29
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • My Bike

    Ok..... nice.It seems to me that 83% was a little much to give to this essay as it doesnt hold any discripive words or phrases, but i liked it. It made me see that the one thing in life i love i couldnt live without....................... my teddy.Well done!
    • 11/08/2004
    • 09:34:56
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Opinions

    Its nice to read essays with an opinion, thats my opinion because bland essays are quite boring sometimes! Good job!
    • 10/08/2004
    • 16:33:58
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Cross Gender

    "Gender identity is one's internal sense of being male or female"Couldnt have put it better myself even if i tryed! Good work!
    • 10/08/2004
    • 16:32:12
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: Tawny_Rookwood

    If you saw 2 people who were wiccan, would u say;"there wiccans"? Wicca is used when talking about two or more!!! Wiccan is one person. I would know, trust me. It has been proven that some wicca have been possessed by devil-live spirits all because of magic. Wicca's use black magic, not fairy tale magic like tinker-bell. Yes, the power they recive is from satan, they are NOT satanists, but like i said, you dont get something for nothing. Hope this answers your question.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 16:28:41
    • Score: 10 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Plato

    I have had to do many papers on plato and i found that most of the sites i used to help with mine, some of the information used there is put into your essay. This however is not plagorizeing, but not putting a biblography showing were you got the information from is, please site your work.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 14:11:29
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Biblography

    Your essay was full of statistics and if someone needed this essay for research, for all they know, you could have made them up. The biblography alows them to go to those sites and check and take more statictics from those sites that helped your essays. It was a good essay and i did give you a good rating as i though it was good, please bear in mind the biblograhy.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 14:06:38
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • The Meiji Restoration

    I find this is a very intresting topic, and found lots of information inhttp://www.compsoc.net/~gemini/simons/historyweb/meiji-resto.htmlthat might have helped you in this essay.Insteed of for you did 4, instead of too/to/two you did 2 and you will be marked down for this. Please use for and to instead of numbers, yet this was quite good, so nice effort!
    • 10/08/2004
    • 13:59:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • "Porphyria's Lover"

    Yet again a wonderful piece from you john. well done and you really should submit another one!!
    • 10/08/2004
    • 09:32:51
    • Score: 33 out of 40 people found this comment useful.
  • Foreign Policy

    Nice flowing essay well done, good work.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 09:28:07
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Dylan Thomas

    I agree with your comment about Thomas' special message, it is indeed why most people injoy this poem, and this essay is also just a good analysis of the poem that people like so much. Good job
    • 10/08/2004
    • 09:06:48
    • Score: 30 out of 35 people found this comment useful.
  • 'Pale Fire'

    Good analysis of 'Pale Fire, and a nice start and conclusion paragraph. You certainly done your research and is a pleasure to read.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 09:02:46
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Culture Jamming

    Nicely done. You have here a nice, flowing essay, one of which i have never known, it was useful in so many ways. You also included a well structured biblogaphy which also added to your esssay, yet i must stress apone the fact that submitting more than one of your essay will result in both being declined. Yet nice essay and you have a green from me.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 08:40:50
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • SERF??

    By serf did you mean servant??? I dont really understand. Yet it was a good essay and held many facts of our civilisation such as in your starting paragraph. This essay has a nice, flowing feel to it and is the perfect length for a subject of this matter. Your sources were brilliant, (example(Eaton, 1966)) and your biblography was even better, so good work and nice effort!
    • 09/08/2004
    • 17:07:27
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Theodore Roosevelt

    Nice, flowing essay. I still think it could be longer, but nevertheless it is a nice piece to read, so thanks for your effort.
    • 09/08/2004
    • 17:03:23
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    learning.unl.ac.uk/mt102/researchmtlecture.ppt
    • 09/08/2004
    • 15:39:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hot zone

    Very good, i love all the detail about grewsome blood and things, good job.Also, i liked the bit at the end, the, a monkey with a needle, lol. Well done.
    • 09/08/2004
    • 15:30:22
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Drink driving

    Sorry, i dont understand, if it has lots of spelling mistakes and isnt well written, why did you submit it? Why didnt you not correct it? I really do not understand!!What is the point to this essay? Im sorry, but i see no purpose in it! Please write back to this and explain why you have submitted such a poor essay without even trying to change it!
    • 09/08/2004
    • 10:59:14
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • True!

    This is a very clear example of a debate essay that is very helpful to this site, so ill congradulate you on a job very well done!
    • 09/08/2004
    • 09:44:47
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: everyone

    Thank you all for your comments. I am new to this site, and to have one of my essays so apresated is flattering. Thanks once again for your support.
    • 09/08/2004
    • 08:33:37
    • Score: 7 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Of mice and men

    I love reading other peoples of mice and men essays, also because i have exams soon on it!Good work, one of the best i have read, yet alittle short, but sweet
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:45:04
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Yea....

    I think the main link was they were both the same person!Sorry, that was mean. Good work, i like reading about what people have to say about jesus, good work! And nice biliography!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:39:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: Joan of Arc

    I got a Dvd player for my brithday and it came free with 2 others, i havent watched it but i should!!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:26:08
    • Score: 9 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Poem study

    For a plagarizing lazy bitch this is one of your good pieces, y did u have to lose everything over plagorizum, was it worth it?
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:12:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Motivating Adult learners

    Nicely done. Nice length, good sources and a nice long biblography. When i say sourses i mean (Dean 1994, p. 24) things in brackets in your essay. Good effort
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:10:44
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Pulp Fiction

    Good essay, its on 2night so im going to watch it, well done
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:08:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Euthanasia

    Good, a few spelling mistakes and a nice layout, could have been longer thou!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 17:03:50
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hamlet and Rosencrantz and Guildenstern

    Nice. I injoyed this for two reasons,1) Its structured well and the points are layed out were they should be.2)It clears up a lot for me. Thanks for submitting this, it will help alot for me!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 16:38:33
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Australian immigration policy

    Nice work. Very good references and looks like they took more time to do than ur essay there that long. Well, a good bilography is a sign of a good writter. All in all very good work and it shows because of the fulency of your writting, the language you use to portray it and the length, so i say to you again, good work and a nice effort!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 16:35:04
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Dreams

    Good work indeed. i love dreams and dreamcatchers and things like that because i believe a dream reflexs who you are, and they are very personal and so is this essay. well done
    • 07/08/2004
    • 16:31:52
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • 'The Lottery'

    Never read the book, but your essay makes me want to, i only read things like lord of the rings or things like that, but ill give it a go. Good work indeed
    • 07/08/2004
    • 16:27:31
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Global Positioning Systems

    Good work indeed, makes you want to rethink your thoughts on the millitary. Good job!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 16:25:06
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagorized

    I knew i had read this somewere!http://www.digitaltermpapers.com/view.php/d/The%20Patients%20Wish.txt
    • 07/08/2004
    • 13:40:02
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Prisoners of War

    This part is classic! What with the simpsons and the weed, god, those boys know how to have a good time!!Good work, and the climax is brill, the mother being arrested for drugs, its just so fun to read!!!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 11:32:25
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Of Mice And Men

    You could have added in your starting paragraph that the town Soledad were the ranch is means 'loneliness'.Good essay. I liked the way you took each character and explained them in their own paragraph. Good work
    • 07/08/2004
    • 11:24:58
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Comparison

    Like johnjjps poem essays, they hold lots of good information, and are extremmly vital information about the poem. You have indeed like johnjjp wrote a brilliant essay on Robert Brownings 'Porphyria's Lover' and 'My Last Duchess'. So good work
    • 07/08/2004
    • 11:08:14
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Charlie and the Chocloate Factory

    An old favourite of mine. Good work, perhaps if it was longer it might be more credit to other people, but it u have an intresting piece of work here and i did injoy reading it!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 09:41:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A cute poem

    Very cute indeed, the guy must feel very lucky. He also must be very handsom to write such a good poem based on him!You didnt use commas but it didnt take away from the good poem, excellent!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 09:36:07
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Prisoners of War

    Yes, i believe i have a conversation much to that nature when i have to go to church! Well done, its so fun it read! Excellent work!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 09:33:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Prisoners of War

    Lol, i liked this one because of your use of language, example:"and I was one step away from either pissing my pants" awwww... good stuff! One or two spelling mistakes, but all in all another brilliant part. (I swear ill get through them all, even if they kill me!)
    • 07/08/2004
    • 09:28:44
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Prisoners of War

    Another great part to this story, yet it wasnt as long as the other one, but hey.... i have like 20 more parts to read!! I asure you i will read and rate them all. Good work on part 2
    • 07/08/2004
    • 09:25:46
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Prisoners of War

    Omg this is brilliant, I cant belive how good it is! I loved it it has such a climax about the drugs at the end. Well done!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 09:22:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I hate to do this but......

    Plagorizedhttp://www.autoindustry.co.uk/docs/global.doc
    • 06/08/2004
    • 18:18:44
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Robert Browing

    Your use of quotes is amazing, it brings depth and a lot more meaning to your essay. It is very well written and uses a lot of formal yet unformal langauge, good work.
    • 06/08/2004
    • 18:06:23
    • Score: 41 out of 50 people found this comment useful.
  • Part 3

    I have read part 1, 2 and now 3 and i think they are brilliant. I also love the climax. Its a brilliant story. Well done
    • 06/08/2004
    • 17:49:28
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.