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  • Awesome!

    i really found this to be very useful and a great read. thanks!
    • 14/06/2009
    • 19:35:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Useful!

    i really liked your writing style and structure for this essay. it was really useful for me in writing my own assignment response. thanks.
    • 17/05/2009
    • 00:35:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good.

    i liked your perspective on the details of the artist's work.
    • 17/05/2009
    • 00:26:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good.

    i like the summation of all the information that can be found about the company. good work.
    • 17/05/2009
    • 00:25:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Pasting quotes.

    I don't think it's enough to just paste quotes and string them together as you have in this paper, you need to give thought as to why you put them there, what you're trying to get at, what your point is....it's not enough otherwise.
    • 21/04/2009
    • 10:02:04
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Examples and conclusion.

    I think that more detailed examples and a more encompassing conclusion would have improved this essay quite a bit.
    • 21/04/2009
    • 10:00:33
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Labels.

    I liked the idea behind this report and don't really have anything to complain about aside from the fact that you don't need to have labels over each section.
    • 05/04/2009
    • 14:59:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great work.

    Great structure with excellent thought behind the ideas and arguments. I liked it a lot and can't see any flaws in it.
    • 05/04/2009
    • 14:58:08
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work.

    this is a great overview of democracy and a great essay.
    • 05/04/2009
    • 14:55:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting.

    This is an interesting entry, I'd never heard of this before.
    • 05/04/2009
    • 14:51:19
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Genre?

    this seems to be more of a journal entry than an essay.
    • 05/04/2009
    • 14:48:55
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • A few typos.

    Great essay with great flow and thought behind it, but another edit would have taken out the few typos.
    • 05/04/2009
    • 14:47:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not enough.

    I feel that you could have found a whole lot more detailed and indepth things to connect with the themes and symbols of the play.
    • 04/04/2009
    • 21:04:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Personal info.

    I don't think that you're supposed to be putting your name and things up on this to count as part of the page count, but it's a good essay!
    • 04/04/2009
    • 21:01:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • More formal.

    The essay is pretty good overall, with great insight but I didn't really like the structure of it. The introduction for example was too casual. Try using a more formal tone when you write.
    • 04/04/2009
    • 20:47:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Weak conclusion

    I liked the structure of this essay and the great explanations, but if you could write a more firm conclusion, the essay would have been perfect.
    • 04/04/2009
    • 20:44:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • :)

    good summary.
    • 14/02/2009
    • 19:35:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good.

    I like this! Very well written and good note on details.
    • 14/02/2009
    • 19:29:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting.

    i haven't studied psychology at this depth yet, but this is a well written essay with great insight.
    • 14/02/2009
    • 19:21:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Lol

    you made me laugh.
    • 23/09/2008
    • 21:09:51
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm

    this isn't an essay but the logs of your experience were interesting anyway.
    • 23/09/2008
    • 21:09:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 8

    I like your style and wish that it wasn't as short as it was. I enjoyed reading this.
    • 23/09/2008
    • 20:54:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 6

    Good setup, but you could be a whole lot stronger with your arguments and there are a few spelling errors.
    • 23/09/2008
    • 20:53:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wth?

    this is an essay?
    • 19/09/2008
    • 20:03:09
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting.

    I didn't think anyone would ever be assigned a topic like this but now that I've read the whole of your essay, it's actually quite interesting.
    • 19/09/2008
    • 20:01:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Nice writing style and good structure and details.
    • 19/09/2008
    • 20:00:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 90

    there were a few spelling errors in this essay, but overall i think this was well written and thought out. good job!
    • 29/07/2008
    • 11:24:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work!

    seems to be a boring topic. but it is a very well written and detailed essay. good work!
    • 28/07/2008
    • 13:39:45
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done!

    excellent essay! very well written! and it gave me a lot of good information. I'm also glad that the works cited list has been posted here unlike most works on this site. good job!
    • 14/06/2008
    • 22:18:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Edit?

    this essay has good ideas and a good flow but really bad grammar. you should edit it!
    • 12/06/2008
    • 23:19:52
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Details?

    this is a fairly decent essay. it just doesn't seem to have enough details. more like a summary.
    • 07/06/2008
    • 19:53:29
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i really enjoyed reading this!it was an excellent essay and very solid.
    • 05/06/2008
    • 22:17:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pakistan zindabad

    I'm Pakistani and i totally agree with you. i had a very similar experience.
    • 21/05/2008
    • 15:05:21
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Agreed.

    I've always wanted to go to Tibet!
    • 21/05/2008
    • 14:59:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Brazil!

    this isn't an essay, but it was a decent description. I'd like to go to Brazil now!
    • 21/05/2008
    • 14:58:03
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Smiley faces

    you bring up a lot of interesting points in this paper. i never thought about wall-mart that way.
    • 21/05/2008
    • 14:54:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Flow.

    what kind of conclusion is that? so detached and not flowing. the whole essay is decent enough but you should have really worked the structure out a bit .
    • 16/04/2008
    • 18:56:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Ideas

    I agree with the ideas in this essay. it wasn't perfectly written,but it was a good idea. perhaps another edit would have helped polish it.
    • 16/03/2008
    • 21:12:51
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    very informative. I loved this essay! and it was well-written too! good job!
    • 16/03/2008
    • 21:09:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Edit

    Another edit would have polished it up.
    • 16/03/2008
    • 21:08:15
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • None

    Not bad.
    • 16/03/2008
    • 21:07:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • ;)

    hmm. I liked it! it was really helpful in finding a way to write my own essay.thanx
    • 12/03/2008
    • 09:26:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Bravo!

    wow! I was never aware of any of these before! I really enjoyed reading this and plan on reading off more from your listed sources.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 22:53:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice!

    very insightful! I liked the fact that you seemed to be more open-minded than most.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 22:49:04
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Lol

    nice work! this topic is a good joke! :)
    • 06/02/2008
    • 20:16:51
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • What?

    What a load of crap! I like how you don't go into details and totally failt to see th reality of things, which is that Canadian society is not all that's good and pure.
    • 20/01/2008
    • 09:00:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Double Pack

    why has the same essay been submitted twice?
    • 20/01/2008
    • 08:56:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm

    This is a good essay but the organization isn't at all well done, kinda messy.
    • 20/01/2008
    • 08:56:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    I like it. good details.
    • 29/12/2007
    • 23:36:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • !

    good detailed work.
    • 13/12/2007
    • 14:27:43
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    straight-up. keep writing. good work
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:50:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs some Work

    could use another edit. but I really appreciate the message!
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:47:19
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • OK

    good work! good words.
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:46:36
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    this is sooo cute! good job hun!
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:45:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Work

    I really liked it! good job!
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:45:12
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • OK

    good for a speech. good voice and passion in expressing opinion
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:44:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    well written. and good use of rhetoric
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:44:05
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    well researched!
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:43:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Written

    well written. good eye.
    • 13/12/2007
    • 00:42:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 10

    good job. very useful!
    • 29/11/2007
    • 19:07:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 10

    very good work!
    • 29/11/2007
    • 13:41:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 10

    weird but funny!
    • 29/11/2007
    • 13:29:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Excellent information!
    • 22/11/2007
    • 16:11:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • !

    What kind of essay is this? Half the work is scattered listings? And the writing itself doesn't present a clear thought-process.
    • 12/11/2007
    • 21:50:53
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 1/10

    Is this an essay? Or a list of pasted information? Really really useless and shows no thought process whatsoever.
    • 06/11/2007
    • 17:00:39
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • !

    Very scattered thought process you've got going here. You seem to be agreeing with Clinton and then changing your mind throughout the piece....make up your mind!
    • 06/11/2007
    • 16:55:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • !

    Good work! I think this is a really good essay.
    • 05/11/2007
    • 16:01:02
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice work

    Well-written essay! Can't wait for a chance to see the film now.
    • 05/11/2007
    • 15:54:58
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • !

    I agree with the second comment here, this piece could use another edit. And you could also take a deeper look at the ideas to better this piece.
    • 02/11/2007
    • 19:13:26
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 9

    Hmm. Well-written. IU never though to compare these two, but it was a very clear and forward perspective that was given by the writer of this piece. Good job.
    • 02/11/2007
    • 19:04:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • :D

    I agree with most points made by the writer here. And a nice touch with the conclusion.
    • 02/11/2007
    • 19:03:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • !

    Humorous piece! Enjoyed reading it. Well written and with a very informative tone. An enjoyable read.
    • 02/11/2007
    • 19:01:29
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • !

    Fairly well-written. Informative and with a good structure.
    • 02/11/2007
    • 18:58:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • :D

    Good work. Very detailed. Good writing structure.
    • 23/10/2007
    • 19:12:30
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • :D

    I agree with the first commenter...you're work needs to flow together a bit more. But the ideas presented were still great. I think I'll look into finding myself a copy of the novel now.
    • 23/10/2007
    • 19:11:45
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great work.

    I really liked reading this piece. You did a good job in giving great descriptions and that really brought me closer to the work. And overall this was a great piece. Great work.
    • 23/10/2007
    • 19:10:29
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm.

    I only read this piece because of its title. I am one of those people who equate money with happiness and even though I still stand by that statement because I think it is the only way out in my own world, I still liked looking at your take on the subject. Interesting.
    • 23/10/2007
    • 19:01:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice!

    I love this piece! I read the book but wasn't aware of the film, I think I'll look into it now. And I agree with alot of the ideas you presented into your work. Nice work!
    • 23/10/2007
    • 18:59:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm.

    Pretty well written, and made me look at my own decision for my up-coming postsecondary education.thnx.
    • 23/10/2007
    • 18:56:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    Well written and very interesting. Good job.
    • 15/10/2007
    • 06:29:41
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    Very informative but lacks depth. Good structure.
    • 15/10/2007
    • 06:28:35
    • Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • B-

    Good story, interesting enough that I stuck with reading it till the very last word, although I would have liked to read more to find out what happens later on. And also, there is a problem with the names of some characters, first it is maria, changed to marina, and then back to maria and trisha/tasha keep going back and fourth too. :S :)
    • 09/02/2007
    • 20:04:47
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • D

    You need more arguments and examples. Though I did enjoy reading it with what you already have.
    • 17/01/2007
    • 18:35:48
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • C

    Good info and arguments but I didn't really like the writing style, struck me as a bit unformal.
    • 17/01/2007
    • 18:34:19
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Good essay! I liked the information you presented and the your writing style.
    • 17/01/2007
    • 18:31:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • False words, false hope

    Good content. The essay was very informative and well-written too.
    • 17/01/2007
    • 13:22:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Part 4

    I liked it. You did very well in applying your character sketches, they seemed quite realistic and whole. I also liked the dramatic course of your storyline, very well thought-out and very creative.
    • 15/01/2007
    • 19:12:01
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • :D

    I liked it. You really did well in describing the emotional and physical stuff that your narrator was experiencing.
    • 15/01/2007
    • 19:06:44
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job!

    Woah. I can just hear my ex reading this to me. It's pretty awesome! *props* yo!
    • 12/01/2007
    • 14:28:20
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.