Very professional and organized sounding paper. Great flow from paragraph to paragraph.
- 11/01/2008
- 07:24:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Some examples to back your statements would make this a better paper. Sounds more like your opinion.
- 10/01/2008
- 10:46:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Short choppy sentences, does not flow well. Sounds very much like a Jr High paper. Needs paragraphs.
- 10/01/2008
- 10:44:07
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Needs to flow a little better from paragraph to paragraph. Is a little choppy. Some electronic references would be better suited for online classes
- 07/01/2008
- 19:08:09
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very well laid out paper. Great flow and good information. Reference are current. Covers all of Tyco's planning structures.
- 10/12/2007
- 16:28:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I do not see a Appendix 2 referred to in the Matrix structure paragraph. Essay does not flow well, too many short stubbing sentences and no references listed.
- 10/12/2007
- 08:24:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Would have like to see how the organizations structure works. Who makes the decisions and how executives make major decisions
- 09/12/2007
- 17:19:41
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is an awesome essay! It flows very well and includes enough information about Jack from his childhood all the way to his current retirement date. The paper includes a good introduction and great conclusion. References would be great though.
- 04/12/2007
- 12:39:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Not much information but a lot of list. I am looking for more material about why companies outsource??
- 03/12/2007
- 18:52:40
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Doesn't seem to have a flow to the reading. Very choppy. No cites??
- 13/11/2007
- 08:59:19
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Ends abruptly, needs a conclusion.
- 11/11/2007
- 14:07:13
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good paper with cited facts. I thought the paper was told a little to much by 3rd person. Would have sounded more professional is not 3rd person.
- 21/06/2007
- 07:26:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Excellent paper, full of information and easy to read and understand. Great references.
- 21/06/2007
- 07:17:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I was looking for more on discharge planning for substance abuse. I didn't really find that in this essay.
- 21/06/2007
- 07:13:10
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Not very profession. In third person. Does not fit APA style writing.
- 15/06/2007
- 19:25:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.