Having a good education is something that has always been important to my family since I was a child. Teaching is very important in making the future stronger for tomorrow. My desire to teach comes from my love of always wanting to help others. I am a compassionate person who wants to help others out in any way that I can. For me being able to educate children and maybe even effect their lives are all the reward that I could ever ask for.
The most important reason for wanting to become a teacher is that I love to work with children. I could not imagine my life without being around children. Since I was a child, I have always been surrounded by many kids. There was always fun, and things to do, and we were always willing to learn something new. Every child brings lots of excitement and joy every day.
With early education, I know that my days will never be the same or ever a dull moment. The second reason why I want to teach is the desire to constantly be learning. By teaching, I will be able to learn many things every day from the learning materials, children, as well as my experiences. Everyday we will learn from each other. The curiosity and anxiousness of children will be great from learning and teaching each other together.
Teachers have the ability to inspire their students to achieve all their goals. I believe that all students want to learn and succeed if the teacher is patient and puts their effort into sparking the child's interest. I believe that students should be taught things that are in their surroundings. It is important that children are involved in their learning experiences. This will help them to make their own...
Not bad but very general
I like your essay, but it's almost like an essay that I read many times before. You could make it stick out more by not just talking in general terms but by getting more detailed. For example you wrote: Teaching is very important in making the future stronger for tomorrow.
You made a statement but you don't back it up with anything. Try to explain your statements. Many of your statements make great topic sentences that just scream for further elaboration. I hope I make sense.
Being able to put detail in your essays will make your essays stand out from the crowd.
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