This is a very nice essay. I didn't have to concentrate on what was being said; therefore, I had time to enjoy it, and I did. A few parts were pretty funny also, which added to my liking it.
- 01/11/2003
- 18:08:39
- Score: 19 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
At first, I thought that your essay was just opinion rather than fact, but you have included very good information in it. I think it is well organized with your facts and subordinate ideas.
- 01/11/2003
- 17:37:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think that you are 100% correct in believing that beginning businesses need a start-up plan. It is very wise to do so because there are many difficulties to face and many risks that are to be taken as you explained in your essay.
- 01/11/2003
- 17:32:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good descriptive essay. The writer uses very nice imagery. She also included well written similies--especially the one about "two lovers".
- 01/11/2003
- 17:11:07
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The overall theme, the constant struggle between past and future, of this essay is pretty good. The only thing that I didn't like very much was the repetitive voice of the essay. However, there was nice usage of literary terms such as foreshadowing and personification.
- 31/10/2003
- 12:21:55
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a well developed essay with many good sources. It contains much information and some conflicting issues.
- 31/10/2003
- 12:12:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think that you have planned a nice strategy with lots of information.
- 31/10/2003
- 12:07:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay does contain very nice information about how oil hazardously affects our environment, but many other things do as well. How can we change something that we rely so much upon?
- 29/10/2003
- 16:19:08
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a nice piece of creative writing. The author uses a lot of imagery in his writing and makes notable use of the senses. Also, it is clear that the writer has his own unique voice.
- 29/10/2003
- 16:06:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a very well written essay. The criteria in the essay is supported with factual data, and there is a lot of information dealing with boot camps. Not only does this essay tell how successful boot camps can be, but it also explains that they may not work all of the time. It's a nice contrast. Good job...
- 29/10/2003
- 15:17:57
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Although this essay, in my opinion, lacks a well-rounded grammatical background, its content was pretty well organized, and the quotations from the novel added to its quality.
- 27/10/2003
- 17:36:00
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.