A nice essay regarding the content but the writer did not care much about the formatting which makes it difficult for the reader to concentrate on the content. It can be rated better if it would be formatted better.
- 22/10/2004
- 18:40:59
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The writer should be praised for a nice written essay. As the writer tried to tell that a friend in need is a friend in deed; I would like to add a point in this theme that in the present time every one wants a friend with the qualities mentioned in the essay but never tries to prove himself or herself such a friend for others.
- 18/10/2004
- 08:28:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The writer of this essay is confused towards the topic of the essay; even though he/she had few valid points regarding the topic but the writer could not manage to write a nice piece of writing. It is requested that writers should be clear about their titles before posting it to the site so that readers can get benefits from the essays.
- 18/10/2004
- 08:15:58
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Writer of this letter could not make an impression as this letter has many loop holes. I am highly confused that how the president can admit the charge by the customer with out any proof which could result in winding up of its business. Another point is that will this company will be permitted to do business by the government in result of such letter.
- 22/09/2004
- 12:26:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I want to appreciate the writer for this nice piece of writing in which he/she tried to tell the readers about the cost of freedom, benefits of freedom and the current situation of our country, America regarding the issue of freedom. I just want to add a point in this essay that one should also cares about the freedom and lives of other people of the world. America, the only super power of the world, has the duty to safeguard the right of freedom of others which America unfortunately did not perform in recent past such as in case of Iraq.
- 22/09/2004
- 11:43:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The writer showed only one side of the picture in the above essay. Globalization is also responsible for economic troubles for the developing countries. Developing countries have lost markets for their products even with in their countries. As it is very difficult for the manufacturers of countries even like India to comptete with the products of America, Japan or Germany. Only a few manufactures like the producers of sports goods and surgical items of Sialkot, Pakistan have gained profits while exploring the international markets. Another disadvantage is that the people from third world has access to the living standards of the developed countries, leads in stess and depression, on finding huge gap between standards of two.
- 04/08/2004
- 00:38:26
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The concepts of capitalism and socialism are defined and differentiated in a very easy way so that even novices to the subject can understand the concepts. The essay contains work citations which increase its weightage. Good job.
- 02/08/2004
- 15:56:35
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.