Good creative images
- 06/04/2004
- 16:22:34
- Score: 19 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
The whole paper is one run on paragraph. The paper needs to be broken up to be easier for a reader to read
- 06/04/2004
- 16:17:51
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
The thoughts are there, but they are getting very disorganzied on paper. Its a good topic for a paper
- 06/04/2004
- 16:13:09
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good job of integrating the article and your thoughts
- 06/04/2004
- 15:55:17
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
There are alot of spelling and gramar mistakes in your paper, but otherwise it is a good paper and I think it deserves to get a good grade. So from now on use your spell check. it's easy to do, and it takes care of most of your spelling and grammar mistakes.
- 06/04/2004
- 15:53:38
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This was very interestesting to read, although it might be easier to read if there were titles to show the movement of the paper
- 06/04/2004
- 15:36:02
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
All those sources and only 5 facts. More information should be provided
- 06/04/2004
- 06:05:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This was an interesting essay to read. I have never heard of this case and you explained it well.
- 06/04/2004
- 06:02:02
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.