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  • Awesome!!!

    Good job! Dont know what to say, I really like it!
    • 15/04/2004
    • 18:05:39
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome!

    I like it a lot. I think all that even kids who are not kids of divorced parents can relate to it. Very persuading!
    • 14/04/2004
    • 16:20:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Same choice of words

    By my opinion the essay is not bad at all. I have noticed how author is using same words over and over again.\"A firefighter has an aspect of thrill and would give me a chance to save peoples lives\". Than again in the second paragraph and than again in the conclusion. Other than that it\'s good.
    • 14/04/2004
    • 15:47:10
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.