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  • Pretty good Essay

    Your essay is accurate and it has a lot of important events that happend at that time. The only thing I would recommend is to re read it and check out the commas and periods, and basic sentence structure. Overall good essay.
    • 17/11/2004
    • 19:35:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.