However, I think you are forgetting one of the most important reasons which is following the generally accepted rules and conventions.
- 06/07/2007
- 01:51:52
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Some English issues (tenses, using "then" instead of "than"). Ok on the whole.
- 03/07/2007
- 04:06:51
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But there is no introduction and conclusion. Each paragraph is a separate argument, I think it would be good to sum them up at the end.
- 03/07/2007
- 03:58:30
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