This paper is good, but only for people who live near upper saddel river. A female wrote this paper and it shows (That doesn\'t mean anything). If you had a lot of time this paper could be adapted for use by anyone, but more sources need to be added. The current sources are all by women authors and that makes the paper less credible for males to use. over all the format of this parer is entertaining and interesting. I wish I had more time, I would use it.
- 05/12/2002
- 15:16:59
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This paper could use some further explination and is too short. there are some typing errors, but over all this paper could be useful to bulid on.
- 03/12/2002
- 23:34:59
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This paper could use some work on the wording. It has a story time kind of tone to it, but the information contained in the text is very accurate. This paper definetly needs a bibliography/works cited. There is plenty to work with here.
- 03/12/2002
- 23:27:01
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent paper. The works cited is really good and the verbage was truely college level.
- 03/12/2002
- 23:19:02
- Score: 8 out of 11 people found this comment useful.