very shallow and clichéyou describe emotions well...but thats been done so many times before... try come up with something new. if you want it to be good that is.
- 09/06/2008
- 13:31:05
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pretty well written, i like it, but i think that you center all your arguments too much on the quotes. is any of this your ideas or is it just other people? I'm not saying you've plagiarized because you quote and everything, but theres at least one quote in each paragraph, i think thats too much.
- 09/06/2008
- 13:28:44
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I disagree. I certainly don't think that they got their job done; look at all the problems Iran has at the moment- it seems to be the next Iraq.the essay itself I don't think there is enough analysis; you're just reciting some facts.
- 09/06/2008
- 13:11:52
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it might seem kinda confusing because this site doesn't do like spaces between paragraphs properly so it kinda ruins it but yeah..
- 27/04/2008
- 05:51:58
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so cliche. why upload stuff thats been written billions of times before?
- 27/04/2008
- 04:13:51
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not good at all. there is nothing interesting in this. no original idea. pick a better topic...
- 20/04/2008
- 07:05:22
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