Great information.
- 22/01/2004
- 18:32:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
First I think that you should have changed the title when putting it on a website such as this, I was under the impression that it was about the Medicare reformation. At any rate, your material is good, but you have not sitings, where did you obtain your information?
- 22/01/2004
- 18:24:50
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was very good, and well sited. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeeing more of your work.
- 22/01/2004
- 18:21:37
- Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
This was excellent information, however, when writing an essay you should site where you received your information. But again, excellent job.
- 22/01/2004
- 18:18:24
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was good information, however, where is your format and where did you site your information
- 22/01/2004
- 18:07:25
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
For someone who has never read this book, I think you should have elaborated more, you leave the reader wondering and confused, an essay is supposed to summarize the entire book, suject, etc.
- 08/01/2004
- 00:06:13
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think you should have elaborated a bit more on this subject, this really does not constitute being an essay, but rather a summary. Also, you need to site where your information came from.
- 07/01/2004
- 23:52:13
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I gave this a smiley, because you are only in Jr. High, however, when writing an essay you need to site your information and become more detailed. You gave an overall brief description or shall I say an overall summary.
- 07/01/2004
- 23:48:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very well written, and interesting.
- 06/01/2004
- 21:40:17
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
However, it looks like it was copied. Where did you site your information from?
- 06/01/2004
- 21:32:28
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
For a ninth grader, you did a great job. Keep up the good work, people will critque your work, but in the long run it is for your own good. These are things t hat I'm sure you haven't learned yet, however, you did manage to site your information which I don't see on most college essays.
- 05/01/2004
- 10:51:18
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Interesting topic, but where is the information, this is not an essay, this is a paragraph, there is a huge difference. I can't believe that this was accepted.
- 05/01/2004
- 10:41:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty good essay and I agree with Eggy on the structure, however, you should also site your information since you are makeing strong points, such as "history has shown that Marx was wrong in many aspects"
- 05/01/2004
- 10:39:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I can only assume that you are a male and entitled to your oppionion, however, it is just a movie. I don't think they set out to make it feminist. But good paper.
- 31/12/2003
- 00:37:33
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I would like to know where you sited your information from. This seems interesting
- 31/12/2003
- 00:22:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I agree with your feeling to a degree, but what happens if a woman is preganant and her preganancy risk the life of the mother and/or fetus, if we didn't have abortion, we would have a great deal of dead people on our hands, would that not too be considered murder.
- 31/12/2003
- 00:07:26
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Some of these facts I knew, however, most were interesting to learn. Great idea.
- 23/12/2003
- 01:34:37
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Well written and explained thoroughly.
- 23/12/2003
- 01:29:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You have really done your homework, and I look forward to reading more of your work. The only problem that I had with this, is that you did not share your sitings on the essay.(I did see your comment) Otherwise great work.
- 13/12/2003
- 19:30:04
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I agree with "ccmustangs2001" If you are going to site something, especially from the Bible, you need to read from the new and old testement in order to get a broad understanding. The bible will always advise you to look to another verse for better understanding. The other thing is your paragraph structure is wrong. you have sentences starting in one paragragh and ending in another. The fact of the matter is, people are going to do what they want to do as far as sex is concerned, however, the bible does not condone this type of behavior.
- 13/12/2003
- 19:12:42
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Because you stated that this was just your oppinion, I will give you a smiley, you didn't try to pass if off as an "essay" and your oppinon counts. However, I don't agree with what you are stating.
- 12/12/2003
- 15:37:12
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This was truly excellent you provided information, examples and excellent writing abilities. Great Work
- 12/12/2003
- 04:13:30
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Being a manager, I loved this essay, it was straight to the point and well written. Good work!
- 12/12/2003
- 04:02:31
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Obviously effort was placed into this, it was sited well, and written the same, a few errors, no big thing. Overall, great paper
- 12/12/2003
- 03:54:48
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You have a very good perspective on this. I liked this paper, it was well thought out and although it was your oppinion, it didn't seem bias. Great Job, looking forward to seeing more of your work!
- 12/12/2003
- 03:52:21
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I agree with your argument and from the first paragraph you can clearly tell that this was clear that you weren't just giving written facts, but rather a testimony of some sort.Good Paper
- 11/12/2003
- 23:58:05
- Score: 0 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This was very interesting. You capture the readers attention right away, and I enjoyed it.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:52:26
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Where did you get your facts, there are no sitings in this essay, for a stategy, it seems short and not organized. The first thing in strategy is organization.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:49:57
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your introduction threw me off completely.This should have been your second paragragh, after letting the reader know what he/she was in for. It started off as a book in reverse. Needs revision. Good paper, don't get me wrong, and you've obviously put a great deal of effort into it.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:46:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Your structure is all wrong, this could have been just the way it was downloaded; however, I agree with the rest of the gang, punctuation needs improvment, and you didn't elaborate on anything you wrote about.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:41:47
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
However, I have to agree with everything that Hoba said. It does not make sense to the naked eye. It doesn't grab the readers attention, and yes it looks like it was copied and pasted from the internet, straight to this site, by the formatting. This needs revision.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:37:06
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a very nice poem, however, it is not creative writing. I have this very same poem at home.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:28:29
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Ok, I disagree with this totally. First of all, anyone can get a gun if they are 21 and older with a background check of some kind, the other people that have guns, such as your gangs, are getting them from somewhere. 2) You say 18 or older with some rules. What other kind of rules do you mean, there are too many children that are being killed now by the hands of guns who's parents are cops, (who should be more than responsible people) however, it is happening. 3) at 18 I really don't think that a person at this age would know what to do with a gun. At twenty-one you think you're grown, you are looked upon as grown, but this is when you make most of your mistakes, you are just learning about taking on responsibilities.3)Where did you site any of your information to try and back up your philosophy? A gun is deadly, it has no name,color, religion, sex, or status. It is not a good idea. But this is just my oppinion.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:25:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Although you may not know this, it cost more money for someone on death row than it does for someone to be in prison with no parole. There are appeals on top of appeals after a judgement is made for the death penalty costing taxpayers more money. The second thing is, you are entitled to your oppinion, however, what about people who have been on death row for twenty years, (this is usually about how long the average person takes to actually get the death sentence in effect) and they are now finding out through DNA that the person had nothing to do with the crime. Sometimes you can kill innocent people for no reason.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:17:29
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Although you bring up great points of intrest and your work is sited well, you lost me on the last sentence in the 1st paragragh, it seems as though you are starting one thing, not finishing and then going to another.
- 11/12/2003
- 23:13:44
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was not only informative but interesting. very good paper.
- 11/12/2003
- 20:53:36
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
pretty goos
- 11/12/2003
- 10:13:03
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
For someone who was sick, you did an excellent job, and I'll give you a smiley and 98% for dedication.
- 11/12/2003
- 02:37:30
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I got hungry just reading this, you are so right. Great essay.
- 11/12/2003
- 02:35:03
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have to agree, it seems like you didn't want to write this, but it was funny! Great Job
- 11/12/2003
- 02:31:23
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This looks like it came out of a book or something, there is no inner self in this essay, it is like a newspaper article. An essay has to capture and keep the readers attention and you must site it.
- 11/12/2003
- 02:18:58
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was very good, however, I hope this is not your true feelings. What seems dark today, will be enlightend 2mrwo.
- 11/12/2003
- 02:15:23
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was good,interesting to read, and to the point, however, siting is critical in an essay. You want people to know that you've put your own work into such a fine job! You also have some spelling errors, but we all have those from time to time. :-)
- 11/12/2003
- 02:11:16
- Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This is great however, you have what appears to be facts by giving statistical information. You should include where you've sited your information. But you've got a smiley from me.
- 11/12/2003
- 01:59:34
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Great work, long, but very clear and worth it. and it is sited nicely.
- 11/12/2003
- 01:55:58
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I had an aunt (my favorite) who died of cancer, it is the worst feeling in the world to watch someone go down to nothing, and see their lovely face look like plastic because of the morphine, which didn't seem as though it was working. Good Job
- 11/12/2003
- 01:51:17
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
You've sited your info and it is well written, I agree with Hoba on the structure. Good paper though
- 11/12/2003
- 01:48:40
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very well written article. I too believe that a fetus is a person, and killing is killing; however, there may be times when it is necessary, such as tubular preganancies or one that puts the mom at risk.
- 10/12/2003
- 14:40:03
- Score: 19 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
Your entire essay, seems like it came from a book or internet site. There is no introduction, conclusioon, or what happened with the "abortion act",you need to elaborate on this, and where did you site your information from? Critical information in an essay
- 10/12/2003
- 12:40:45
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This paper has no "essay" structure, it looks like it came straight out of a book or internet site, and speaking of which,where did you site your information. This is critical in an essay.
- 10/12/2003
- 12:33:30
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
For a tenth grader,I think you did a wonderful job.
- 10/12/2003
- 12:29:12
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
\"I am eager to work in this position, as I love to being around people\" You state that you should be eager and the best, however, you should also make it personable. This sentence should read: I am eager to work as a/an \"name of position,\" as I love being around people. Your cover letter is basic for anyone who may see it, you have to make the interviewer feel that they are special, that you\'ve picked their company over any other. Otherwise, these were great tips, and very informative.
- 09/12/2003
- 19:24:38
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay, good work!
- 09/12/2003
- 19:12:39
- Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
Although you gave some grammar errors and as everyone else agrees, your sentence structure needs work;however, to be in the 7th grade, I think you did an excellent job. I have seen college papers that weren't close to this. Keep it up!
- 09/12/2003
- 19:02:47
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
This essay sounds a little too verbatim. And to top it off, you never stated where you sited your information.
- 09/12/2003
- 18:57:39
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Very good research. You have explained in detail what this disease consists of and how it can be treated. Excellent work!
- 09/12/2003
- 18:52:38
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This article is great,and has very good facts, however, you did not site any of your information; therefore, you should have listed it under "creative writing" not an essay.
- 08/12/2003
- 19:56:13
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
I think that when you put out a paper for the public to read, you may want to use the word "African American" otherwise,you sound just as predudice as the movie. You also have more than a few spelling errors.
- 04/12/2003
- 13:31:30
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Great Job! Very well done!
- 04/12/2003
- 00:56:29
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is not my cup of tea, but it did keep my intrest. Well written.
- 03/12/2003
- 21:09:46
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was good for the lay person, however, your question should have listed: "Do you work on a contingency fee basis" again, it seems that you wrote this for the lay person, so I'll give you a smiley, since they may not have know what that meant. Good Job! and cute comment.
- 03/12/2003
- 21:04:47
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay is average,you should have elaborated a bit more and your paragraphs are not lined correctly, you also have spelling errors.
- 03/12/2003
- 20:37:56
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was a very good paper, it kept my intrest and it's unfortunate,that something like this would keep a persons intrest, but it will make people aware of what a rape victim has to go through, it never goes away, these things happen too often. Again Great Paper!
- 02/12/2003
- 23:46:08
- Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Very informative, but my number one question where did you site your information, where is your bibliography, you only sited one source, and your structure is all wrong. You need paragraghs, not sentences. I believe this is an average essay, you would have scored better with the missing items I mentioned above.
- 02/12/2003
- 22:09:01
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
All I can say is excellent, and I hope that this didn't really happen.
- 02/12/2003
- 18:28:41
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I agree with ccmustangs comment, this was short, but good.
- 02/12/2003
- 18:20:01
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think that you've made extememly valid points, me as an African-American female can agree with you, and yes, I myself at times feel ashamed of being African-American, not because of my skin color, not because I'm not rich, but because some (not all) of our people, (however, these are the one's who stick out) will use any excuse not to further themselves and blame what they don't have on "the white man" My children were taught at a very early age not to discriminate. My son has a passion for caucasian women, it worrys me though because, although we don't discriminate, some of the girls parents would, as long as they were "friends" he was great, when they would find that this friendship has blossmed, he's a "nigger". Unfortunatly, racism is something that is "taught" and until adults can learn to teach their children at a young age that it's not right, it will continue.
- 02/12/2003
- 18:10:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I don't agree with this at all, however, you did have sources to back up what you were conveying. A few grammar errors, otherwise good paper.
- 02/12/2003
- 17:56:06
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Ok, you are in 7th grade, when writing an essay you need to include where you received your information from,you need to express "what is pop art" you have information about it's history, but not the target. This needs improvement, however this is pretty good for a seventh grader. Don't get discuraged, you will be critiqued, take them as lessons, not as insults.
- 02/12/2003
- 11:49:49
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Where did you get your information? This is too short, there is no title, book, reference or anything else to connect this to. This needs major improvement.
- 02/12/2003
- 11:44:01
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I have to agree with a67sm, there is no flow, my intrest was not kept, punctuation is terrible. Although this is a country wide ordeal, there is no facts to back up your statements, no sitings. Terrible. 40% and frown
- 02/12/2003
- 11:37:02
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is a well-rounded essay, with good factual material, my only concern is, because you are in the 11th grade, I am under the immpression that you have never been married. Is this first hand information or did you site this information from a source, if so, you should include it. I give it a 95% and a smiley.
- 02/12/2003
- 02:19:27
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
although I don't agree with your thoughts, there are a lot of pregnant young women facing this problem, however, it is very selfish to KILL an inocent child, if you knew you did not want to get preganant, protect yourself. There is no reason for it, a person can not in this day and age say that they are nieve to contraceptives.
- 01/12/2003
- 22:35:29
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very informative information, apparently, a lot of work went into this, I would give it an A-, I agree with hoba, paragraphs are a must.
- 01/12/2003
- 22:00:19
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
You had to really think this one out. Well written I would give this two smileys if I could. Good work.
- 01/12/2003
- 19:43:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
These are good lecture notes,very interesting and to the point. I'll give it a 92% and a smiley.
- 01/12/2003
- 01:08:31
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Although I have never written the book, you describe it as the book has more to do with the wife, than the cat, I think you should have elaborated a little more on this, otherwise good paper. Because these are notes and not an actual essay, I give it an 88% and a smiley face.
- 01/12/2003
- 00:54:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
in response to your comment, in paragraphs four and five, I described that sex has become more risque and more provacative. Thank you for your comments.
- 01/12/2003
- 00:46:47
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
If I were raped and didn't want the baby, I would give it up for adoption, if you asked me this ten years ago, I would agree with you. There is no reason to kill a child, unless as I expressed earlier there is a serious medical condition.
- 01/12/2003
- 00:33:42
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I agree with your paper to a degree; however what if you had a medical problem, and although by law, your doctor can not outright tell you to have an abortion, he does tell you it would be in your best intrest. This happened to me, I was happy to find out that when I went for the abortion, I found that I needed a tubal ligation instead. This made me feel better in some respect because this was not my choice. I had an ectopic pregnancy, the baby was so large and I was at such risk, there was no choice, lucky for me I already had two beautiful children. Otherwise you make a great point, and it's a good paper, but I think people need to know abortions are not always a "birth control method"
- 01/12/2003
- 00:29:53
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is a very touch subject, I personally believe that when it is your time, then that is it, but what is that time. If my brain has no function- to me, that's my time, if I am dying of cancer, no, let me live as long as I can despite my pain, this is the will of God, not man, but this is just my oppinion. Good paper, but I agree with hoba, you should have added some examples, such as the one's I describes above.
- 01/12/2003
- 00:20:15
- Score: 22 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
This was funny, but I must agree, it does not constitute being an essay.
- 30/11/2003
- 22:56:14
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
What you are trying to present is a strong case, this is a subject that most people don't want to hear about, but should. You were a little redundant in the beginning and you need more facts to back up your statements. Good subject, but essay needs improvement.
- 30/11/2003
- 22:50:42
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very interesting article, kept my attention, you have a strong argument, yet I think it was a little personal. some grammar problems other than thatGood paper!
- 30/11/2003
- 22:43:45
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was a very touching story, and no one should have to go through that, especially as a teenager. I had the same problem, so I can identify with you. Keep those appointments.
- 30/11/2003
- 16:29:36
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
It is good to know that we can make good impacts on childrens lives, you never know what it is that may help a child, and although you as a person may forget, that child will always remember.
- 30/11/2003
- 16:21:37
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay was too short, it did not keep my intrest because you were short on your message. I think that you should add more information and capture the readers attention.
- 30/11/2003
- 16:06:32
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Some video games, I agree, are safe for kids, at the same time, children should be outside playing games, have you looked into the statistics of children with diabetes because they are overweight because of lack of excercise. I don't totally agree with this essay, I think you should have received additional material.
- 30/11/2003
- 01:14:22
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I don't agree with drinking at all for my own personal reasons, however, if an 18 year old person can go out and fight for his country, then I guess they should also have the right to drink.
- 30/11/2003
- 01:07:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You make a strong argument and if this is what people want to do, I guess why not, I don't agree with same sex marriage, at the same time, I'm not against it. In other words, morally, I think it's wrong, however, I would not look down on someone who did it, why? Maybe my son or daughter may come to me one day and say they are gay or a lesbian, I'll still love them, and it's their life. I want them happy. Good paper.
- 30/11/2003
- 01:02:56
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
What people do with their body,is their own thing, however, when it comes down to innocent children being taken completely advantage of is another. I think you should have elaborated on subjects such as this and of those who are in porn magazine, movies, and on the internet, that did not want to be,or was forced to be.
- 30/11/2003
- 00:55:49
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I don't happen to agree with the death penalty for some of the very reasons your research has mentioned; however, I think that you should have also compared other races, wealth reliance statistics against blacks, poor, or minority. This makes your paper a little one-sided. Other wise good paper!
- 30/11/2003
- 00:49:03
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think you should have included where you sited your information from, and given more detail. Otherwise good paper!
- 30/11/2003
- 00:41:36
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
http://www.papercamp.com/hlth12.shtml
- 29/11/2003
- 21:51:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
http://www.papercamp.com/hlth9.shtml
- 29/11/2003
- 21:49:06
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
http://www.papercamp.com/hlth8.shtml
- 29/11/2003
- 21:44:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
http://www.papercamp.com/hlth4.shtml
- 29/11/2003
- 21:35:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Interesting information, good job!
- 29/11/2003
- 17:58:44
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I think this was very informative. Good Job!
- 29/11/2003
- 17:55:52
- Score: 11 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
who is the author, what is the book that you are trying to elaborate on?
- 29/11/2003
- 17:44:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This type of writing is expected from a fourth grader. This is definitely not what you would expect from an 11th grader.You could have basically written this in five sentences.
- 29/11/2003
- 17:42:03
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
For such a short essay, you have a number of grammar problems.
- 29/11/2003
- 17:37:52
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think you could have given more information, and where are your sources?
- 29/11/2003
- 17:33:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very interesting, I think that you tried to capture every aspect of the book, which is good, but you get a little lost because of it.
- 29/11/2003
- 17:26:54
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was interesting and very true essay, well written
- 29/11/2003
- 16:59:38
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Where did you site your information from, where are your sources?
- 29/11/2003
- 16:52:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Where did you get your information from?
- 29/11/2003
- 16:50:55
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was very informational, great job!
- 27/11/2003
- 18:44:36
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I loved it, very good imagination, but just as I was getting into it, you stopped. Good Paper
- 26/11/2003
- 16:44:01
- Score: 31 out of 36 people found this comment useful.
Great work as ususal, and no, I couldn't find any grammar errors either :=)
- 25/11/2003
- 02:42:26
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
It's a shame that your prespectives changed because of these terrible events, but the point is it did. Great Paper! We all need something to change our prospectives on things. I truly hope you never have to go through such an ordeal again.
- 25/11/2003
- 02:39:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Wording is consistantly repetetive
- 25/11/2003
- 02:32:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Although this is a short play, and more could have gone intoit; it definitely express' the point. Good Job!
- 23/11/2003
- 22:53:48
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I found this to be very insightful for people who are unaware of these myths. I am taking a wellness class this semester and the first few weeks was spent on exactly what you are talking about.
- 22/11/2003
- 13:40:43
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have never seen this play, nor read the book,however, I became very interested when the word "satan" appeared. I beleive this is a must read. Good Job!
- 22/11/2003
- 13:34:01
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I am not a science fiction fan myself, however, you made this to be a very interesting book to read.
- 22/11/2003
- 13:26:09
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I myself, have a family member who is an alcoholic, I asked these questions because I was trying to get the author to see that although it is quite clearly quoted about the cravings, tolerence, etc. Most functional alcoholics will not let you see these things unless you witness them, like you and myself obviously have. Most people that know this family member of mine, has absolutely no idea that they are an alcoholic; however, you can sometimes tell an alcoholic from being around them long enough, the smell of alcohol vents through their sweat, they have darken eyes, etc. I am sure that you can agree with these things. I still agree it's a great paper.
- 22/11/2003
- 01:40:58
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I really meant to rate this a good essay, I don't know why it cam up wrong, I was not being funny;however, I can't seem to change it, hopefully the administrator will see this. I thought it was an eye-opener!
- 22/11/2003
- 01:24:34
- Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
My goodness hoba, why are you still there, not that New York is too much different, I guess anywhere you go, the state, county, and country is out to make a buck, in our case; however, with all this money being poured in via descriptions of this essay, how can the USA be in a deficit? Good Job as usual!
- 22/11/2003
- 01:14:42
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
What you have given is suggestions, not solutions, who will pay for the free classes at college, in counseling what are they counseling people on rather than "we the people" offering food stamps?Where are the motivators coming from? A motivator and/or mentor could be a drug dealer. Are you suggesting that people get first hand information before leaving high school, such as a high school, before getting on this road? If people are poverty stricken, these are good suggestions but I think you should have included where to seek the benefits that you are trying to convey.
- 22/11/2003
- 01:03:34
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I tried to change it to the grade that I finally receieved and it came back up again, I wrote to the administrator and asked them to delete it
- 22/11/2003
- 00:41:54
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper was found on http://www.papercamp.com/pol32.shtml
- 21/11/2003
- 19:12:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This artical was pretty informative for the lay person, I think, however, you should have placed in your essay the signs of an alcoholic, you basically gave information from the "alcoholics" point of view, i.e. cravings, dreaming etc, but how would someone know the signs of lets say a functional alcoholic. Otherwise good paper.
- 21/11/2003
- 18:59:30
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I've copied this into my favorites, not to use, but to read up on for myself. You actually get into the mind and manner of the character that you are portraying.......this is a gift. Great Job!
- 18/11/2003
- 18:00:37
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Absolutely beautiful! (and I'm not lieing)
- 18/11/2003
- 16:15:59
- Score: 1 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
what happened between 1700's to 1961 and 1961 to 1999?
- 18/11/2003
- 14:52:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
My goodness, there sure is a lot of information here. I'm trying to think of words to explain this. This was the most bizzare, yet interesting thing that I've read in a long time. Good job
- 18/11/2003
- 03:06:23
- Score: 24 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
I have never seen the movie, however, I was very intrigued by the report, it was like you wrote the book- great job
- 18/11/2003
- 02:35:19
- Score: 15 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
well, I just learned something new!
- 18/11/2003
- 01:39:14
- Score: 10 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
The summary seemed a little too brief. I felt like I was learning somthing and then you went on to something else. I think you should have elaborated a little more. the other thing is,it seems as if you took all of your information from one page of a book
- 18/11/2003
- 01:15:35
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Apparently you put a lot of work into this ; however, where did you obtain the information.
- 07/11/2003
- 15:50:43
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I thought this was extremely creative, yet informative.
- 05/11/2003
- 22:54:03
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It seems as though you have quite a bit of information, yet where did you obtain if from, you have no footnotes. I am sure that if you would share them, you would get alot more hits. :-)
- 03/11/2003
- 17:54:24
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.