Very detailed and academically written.
- 24/05/2010
- 07:11:05
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Love your style
- 23/11/2009
- 22:14:58
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I dig this
- 15/11/2009
- 00:45:45
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Love it.
- 15/09/2009
- 00:42:59
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Good start and can be expanded to become a great piece.
- 10/07/2009
- 06:17:07
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Too many stats. More description needed.
- 02/07/2009
- 05:48:05
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digging (loving) it
- 29/06/2009
- 05:04:35
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Could do better.
- 22/06/2009
- 05:18:32
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Like it.
- 16/06/2009
- 05:21:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Please be a tad more formal.
- 02/06/2009
- 07:28:40
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Solid and strong.
- 09/05/2009
- 06:47:31
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Comprehensive report.
- 04/05/2009
- 05:53:33
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Could cut down on the dialogue.
- 17/04/2009
- 21:20:12
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Great detail in this piece.
- 13/04/2009
- 05:49:22
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Luv it.
- 09/04/2009
- 06:14:26
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Waffly.
- 07/04/2009
- 08:07:27
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Reasonable essay.
- 19/03/2009
- 03:20:28
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Nice and clear.
- 10/03/2009
- 04:46:51
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Good stuff.
- 09/03/2009
- 01:54:50
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Love the essay.
- 04/03/2009
- 06:55:12
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Thank you.
- 03/03/2009
- 02:56:51
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Tends to be a bit boring.
- 27/02/2009
- 05:05:31
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Lacks detail
- 23/02/2009
- 02:58:07
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Insane.
- 17/02/2009
- 03:13:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Lame as.
- 15/02/2009
- 01:13:47
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Great use of resources.
- 11/02/2009
- 06:22:44
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Lots and lots of detail. Well done.
- 10/02/2009
- 03:01:21
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B grade.
- 07/02/2009
- 18:20:55
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Great detail with lots of depth.
- 04/02/2009
- 03:11:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great stuff.
- 31/01/2009
- 01:06:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Loads of info.
- 29/01/2009
- 06:10:28
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What film is this?
- 25/01/2009
- 22:45:33
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This piece lacks a proper purpose.
- 25/01/2009
- 12:43:51
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Reads like a good essay.
- 22/01/2009
- 21:33:48
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Not good enough for a 9th grade. Reads like a 7th grade.
- 20/01/2009
- 14:29:40
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Heaps of good detail.
- 19/01/2009
- 17:07:49
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Reads OK.
- 16/01/2009
- 20:11:02
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Needs heaps more detail.
- 12/01/2009
- 22:24:51
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Like the detail.
- 08/01/2009
- 12:31:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Loads and loads of detail well done.
- 03/01/2009
- 20:48:29
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Short but covers a lot of ground.
- 31/12/2008
- 22:37:57
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Lost in translation. Please use English.
- 29/12/2008
- 15:15:12
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Well done. Lots of detail.
- 28/12/2008
- 21:30:16
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Very detailed.
- 26/12/2008
- 00:46:21
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I like where you are heading but you could elaborate a bit more.
- 16/12/2008
- 20:35:09
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Good effort.
- 14/12/2008
- 23:56:20
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You get what you deserve.
- 13/12/2008
- 23:48:18
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Great summary. Well done.
- 28/11/2008
- 21:47:41
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Well done in a small lengthed essay.
- 26/11/2008
- 21:38:57
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Great with lots of detail.
- 24/11/2008
- 20:56:41
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Ok but don't use wikipedia.
- 19/11/2008
- 22:51:39
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OK effort but could expand a bit more.
- 18/11/2008
- 14:14:17
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Great start but needs more detail and bibliography.
- 16/11/2008
- 23:04:14
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Great job but don't use wikipedia in your bibliography.
- 06/11/2008
- 00:34:45
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Satisfactory description.
- 03/11/2008
- 22:59:33
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I like the points that you have made but it does need to be a tad longer.
- 31/10/2008
- 00:12:59
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Plain boring with little excitement or suspenseful moments.
- 23/10/2008
- 22:31:51
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Fair summary but could be in more detail. You should also analyse the language features used in your chosen text.
- 23/10/2008
- 22:10:15
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Too short. Lacks detail. Not an essay.
- 19/10/2008
- 21:29:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A good piece of writing. Good detail considering that you have only looked at the first chapter of this book.
- 07/10/2008
- 17:17:57
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This piece has the potential to become a longer and better essay.
- 01/10/2008
- 22:13:24
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Way too short to be a good essay.
- 01/10/2008
- 22:11:44
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay needs more depth.
- 01/09/2008
- 03:44:55
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This essay is too short and requires more depth.
- 17/08/2008
- 02:42:58
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This may be a good essay but it needs a translation to English. It probably needs to be a bit longer as well.
- 16/08/2008
- 16:53:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This piece of writing is very boring. More effort, detail and length is required.
- 13/08/2008
- 05:22:39
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This essay is way too short. It needs to be more detailed.
- 11/08/2008
- 00:05:01
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This is an excellent essay with great length and detail. However, try not to use Wikipedia as a resource as it may be unreliable at times.
- 06/08/2008
- 03:13:51
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is an ordinary essay. More content and depth could be included in this essay.
- 23/06/2008
- 02:14:35
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Your analysis is good but you need to develop a good thesis and link your analysis back to the thesis. Nevertheless, a good mature effort.
- 10/06/2008
- 22:51:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very detailed case study. Well done.
- 10/06/2008
- 22:44:51
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This piece of writing lacks in content and does not include an in-depth analysis of the poem. A much longer essay of about 1000 words is required in order to convey your point strongly.
- 02/06/2008
- 01:58:06
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Considering that you are writing at a year 11 level, this is a good essay that covers many aspects of Hinduism. Well done.
- 02/06/2008
- 01:53:55
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It seems like you have written a recount more than a report. You have frequently used the first person point of view and this is not ideal when writing information reports. There are good points in the form of a table but expression needs to be improved.
- 02/06/2008
- 01:50:19
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Although this story is set in the future (2009), there is little tension in the story. You need to develop a good climax, minimize the dialogue, use more descriptive language and include a few cliffhangers.
- 02/06/2008
- 01:47:23
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This analysis has some good points made in it. However, it is way too short. You should aim towards 1000 words at least. In addition. better sentence structure and more complex diction is required in this essay.
- 28/05/2008
- 01:42:34
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The language in this essay is not formal enough and is not strong enough to convey the main points. The essay sounds biased and should be neutral in order to get the highest marks.
- 23/02/2008
- 17:50:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Excellent story with good use of figurative language and imagery. However, the story is a bit long.
- 23/02/2008
- 17:12:59
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This description appears to be an average level because the language used is not very complex and there is a lack of terminology used. "Vectors" can be used instead of "lines".
- 23/02/2008
- 17:05:19
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This essay is not thorough enough and seems to be only on the surface. The language is not formal enough and does not meet the standard of a college undergraduate. It seems like an essay written by a high school student 10th grade.
- 23/02/2008
- 16:59:38
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.