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  • Good

    Good piece here - but sort of needs paragraphs
    • 19/09/2010
    • 07:50:45
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  • Out of curiosity

    what year level are you?good story btw
    • 02/03/2010
    • 04:21:03
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  • Well done

    good piece of writing here - but the conclusion lacked a bit
    • 27/01/2010
    • 07:17:15
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  • Good

    was an ok piece -
    • 27/01/2010
    • 07:16:40
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  • Good

    was ok - bit short tho
    • 27/01/2010
    • 07:15:36
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  • Good

    was good on average - lacked a bit in parts tho
    • 27/01/2010
    • 07:14:26
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  • Awesome

    good analysis there - well done
    • 27/01/2010
    • 07:13:22
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  • Good

    was a good essay - helped me a bit with mine
    • 27/01/2010
    • 07:12:14
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  • Awesome

    I have always loved this movie (listening to dance magic right now in fact ^^ "and baby said... dance magic dance!") good report here, I agree with it entirely
    • 03/11/2009
    • 20:16:53
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  • Insane!

    This is an awesome bunch of notes.. very very helpful ^^
    • 31/08/2009
    • 06:34:10
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  • Wow

    OMG such an awesome essay - very very informative, was of great great help while i was writing mine - Thank you! i want to hug you because of this, thats how much it helped
    • 31/07/2009
    • 08:33:21
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  • Ok

    an ok piece, needs more detail
    • 27/07/2009
    • 09:03:41
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  • Good

    good, interesting to read, helpful
    • 27/07/2009
    • 09:00:51
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  • Good

    Good - nice to read, inspiring
    • 27/07/2009
    • 09:00:30
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  • Good

    good essay - enjoyable to read
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:16:21
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  • Awesome

    FULL of information, easy to understand and helped me a lot on my essay
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:16:03
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  • Ok

    Good for a 9th grader
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:15:39
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  • Good

    helped me on my German essay, good information
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:14:46
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  • Good

    good information and full of interesting points
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:14:03
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  • Well done

    good essay, one of best I've read on this subject.. very good conclusion and easy to understand information
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:12:52
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  • Good

    interesting information, helped me out on my essay too thanks
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:12:02
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  • Good

    best Weimar republic essay I'ive read, well done
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:11:42
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  • Good

    good information, but the conclusion lacks
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:11:13
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  • Good

    interesting layout, but good information
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:10:53
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  • Awesome

    helped me out a lot on my essay - thanks
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:10:37
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  • Nice

    Good essay here, interesting information and good layout
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:10:03
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  • Nice

    Very good essay, interesting too
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:09:43
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  • Great

    Nice essay - was of great assistance
    • 23/07/2009
    • 10:09:22
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  • Very good

    very helpful and insightful essay here- helped me a lot
    • 20/07/2009
    • 07:55:57
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  • Great

    a touching piece, very emotional
    • 29/06/2009
    • 05:55:30
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  • Great

    enjoyable to read, i can almost feel the sand now
    • 29/06/2009
    • 05:54:41
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  • Great

    i can almost smell the pigs now!
    • 29/06/2009
    • 05:51:24
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  • Good

    very descriptive, and helpful
    • 29/06/2009
    • 05:35:20
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  • Awesome

    an awesome piece of work right here.. (bet u cant tell if I'm lying or not)
    • 29/06/2009
    • 05:34:23
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  • Nice

    A good piece of work, interesting and well thought out
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:37:39
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  • Good

    good format and valid points, needs a better conclusion though
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:37:13
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  • Good

    not seen the pit and the pendulum but this looks like a good piece here
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:36:40
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  • Good

    although I've not seen lord of the flies, this is seemingly a good piece of writing
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:36:04
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  • Excellent

    Extremely interesting to read, I'm an Aussie my self and this was quite an interesting read
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:35:37
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  • Nice

    Very true, good points and well written
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:34:59
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    valid points and well thought out
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:34:09
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  • Good

    interesting to read, enjoyable too.. well worth an A
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:33:41
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  • Good

    i liked it, brought up valid points, very helpful
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:33:07
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  • Good

    fair few valid points, good to read... curious what grade you got for this
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:32:37
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  • Nice

    interesting way to look at the harry potter series, good piece of writing
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:32:01
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  • Good

    good piece of writing, good length to, was a joy to read
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:31:19
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  • Good

    was a good piece of work and was very helpful
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:30:55
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  • Excelent

    helped me out allot, and i agree with you almost fully with this essay!
    • 24/06/2009
    • 03:20:42
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  • Good`

    Interesting, I've never been to Wal-mart (I live in Australia) but interesting none the less
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:49:40
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  • Emotional

    such an amazing piece of work
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:44:13
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  • Good

    good essay but slightly biased.. i did enjoy reading it tho
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:33:46
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  • ... wow

    i loved this, was amazing, very beautiful
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:33:14
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  • Thorns

    I liked this, it has the could easily be a very beautiful poem
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:31:52
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  • Nice

    i like this essay quite a lot, i have never noticed a lot of what you point out and i shall notice a lot more from now on
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:29:21
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  • Good

    good piece of writing, never have heard of Chayon Ryu before now so i guess i learnt something from this
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:27:32
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  • Good

    like petra said, a few valid points but a bit short. i am extremely curious as to what is in store for us in the next 50 years (good or bad, who knows)
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:25:19
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  • Excellent

    Very good essay, i liked the use of questions and rhetorical statements in it.
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:23:43
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  • Hmm

    I agree with you mostly here, good essay and well thought out obviously
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:22:53
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  • Brain Blast!

    Good Piece of work, i enjoyed reading it and you captured the essence of neutron very well, i would love to read more!
    • 23/06/2009
    • 07:22:23
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome

    very interesting subject to choose to write about
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:20:22
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  • Nice

    Good, interesting to read
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:19:27
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  • Good

    i agree with qbanita, not such a good conclusion, but the rest is good
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:17:54
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  • Thanks

    this helped me greatly while trying to write my essay for English
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:17:03
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  • Good

    (i have the first comment, yay) good piece of work and was a pleasure to read
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:16:16
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  • Nice

    its a good review and i think the person above me is being slightly over critical, but i do agree with them
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:15:38
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  • Good

    good review and a few interesting quotes
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:14:48
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  • Good

    Some good points here and on whole a good essay
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:13:52
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  • Good

    Including the questions would have helped, but good none the less
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:12:52
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  • Good

    was a very good essay and you did mention several valid points, but i disagree with you in the most part, but fairly persuasive none the less
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:12:11
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  • Good

    Nice, it helps me understand the book a bit, good to read
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:11:05
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  • Good

    Good piece, but I'm unsure if a bibliography was actually necessary on a piece of work such as this
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:10:22
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  • Yep

    Was good, but i agree with the previous person
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:09:07
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  • Quite Interesting

    Very Interesting, lots of points, some of which i noticed in the book, some i didn't.. very good work
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:08:15
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  • Good

    Not too bad, could use a bit better of an ending though
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:07:16
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  • Nice

    not too bad a piece of writing here
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:06:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Quite a nice piece of writing here
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:05:50
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  • Good

    I do like this one
    • 22/06/2009
    • 05:05:21
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  • Good

    very good information and facts were easy to understand
    • 08/06/2009
    • 07:39:52
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    nice essay...good information...
    • 08/06/2009
    • 02:32:09
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  • Good

    was well written, and has very good information - but, as the previous comment states, it is missing your reference list
    • 17/05/2009
    • 02:34:04
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    was an ok piece, could use a bit more details about Gage though
    • 17/05/2009
    • 02:33:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    information was quite informative and i found it relatively to understand- nice bibliography
    • 17/05/2009
    • 02:32:13
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  • Good

    well worth that A
    • 28/03/2009
    • 07:20:36
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  • Interesting

    good, quite informative
    • 28/03/2009
    • 07:19:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good piece of writing...
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:56:42
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    well structured
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:55:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    well structured and has a nice bibliography
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:54:23
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  • Great

    fairly well written and has a good bibliography
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:53:34
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  • Good

    A few spelling errors but good none the less
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:52:57
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  • Good

    good structure and a really good bibliography
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:52:20
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  • Good

    good information, well spaced out
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:50:45
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  • Good

    had very good information and a good bibliography... well structured
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:50:13
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  • Good

    good, informative and well structured
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:49:28
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  • Good

    good information and structure, great bibliography
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:48:45
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good information and great bibliography
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:47:09
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  • Good

    Like the previous comment said, needs a bibliography
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:41:03
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    well written, enjoyable to read+
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:39:25
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    was good, i liked it, but the again, who doesn't love walmart XD
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:28:06
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome

    really well written
    • 24/03/2009
    • 03:25:18
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I enjoyed reading this

    nicely done, good work
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:10:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    fairly good structure and reads nicely
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:09:54
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  • Work on the structure

    the structure of the essay could use a bit of work
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:09:39
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  • Quite good

    fairly good, bit more work on the structure though
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:09:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done

    i enjoyed reading this
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:08:36
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  • Nicely done

    good work with a fairly good structure
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:08:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    well written and good structure
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:08:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Really well written

    and does have a good structure
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:07:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok structure

    good structure but could be better
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:07:28
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good structure

    pretty good structure
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:06:41
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  • Fairly good structure

    fairly good structure
    • 23/03/2009
    • 09:05:08
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  • Awesome

    very good answers to all the questions, I liked how you added your own personal spin to each of the sections too
    • 04/02/2009
    • 05:24:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    good piece of work
    • 24/01/2009
    • 22:15:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    an awesome piece of work.. well thought out and written.. although it needs a bibliography
    • 24/01/2009
    • 22:14:35
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    was very good, clearly well thought out and has a very good bibliography
    • 24/01/2009
    • 22:12:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    very good, quite the informative work
    • 24/01/2009
    • 22:11:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    needs paragraphs but other than that good
    • 24/01/2009
    • 22:09:01
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    a few spelling errors but a really good story
    • 23/01/2009
    • 03:23:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Descriptive

    was a very descriptive piece of work.. i personally would have made it a bit shorter, but thats just me. after reading it i give you a 9.5/10.. 10/10 would be achieved by being slightly shorter
    • 23/01/2009
    • 03:04:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    was good, id give it a 8 / 10 (id give the movie its self a 9 / 10 XD)
    • 23/01/2009
    • 03:03:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome

    As a hard core one piece fan, i couldn't have said it before.. although i would have mentioned the word Nakama at least somewhere in here.. but still.. awesome
    • 23/01/2009
    • 03:02:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    was a good essay, fairly strait forward and in understandable terms.
    • 31/12/2008
    • 21:31:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    very informative and doesn't use what seems like a foreign language to those of us who have no clue what plutonium is.. a few spelling errors but no one is perfect.
    • 31/12/2008
    • 21:29:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good!

    Was quite an interesting read, explains everything clearly for those who just think as anti matter as "the stuff that makes the enterprise go fast"
    • 31/12/2008
    • 21:19:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    covered most fields quite well, and information was really understandable, even for someone like my self
    • 16/06/2008
    • 03:29:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.