I liked the essay but you may want to put an intro in.
- 09/01/2007
- 16:32:05
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Rather than using a wikipedia definition it might be better to use a Dictionary like Webster's. A good job as a whole though.
- 02/01/2007
- 16:21:33
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The last paragragh leaves you wanting more by starting a new topic.
- 04/03/2006
- 21:34:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Extrememly enjoyable to fans of the works used in essays but boring to those who are not fans.
- 04/03/2006
- 21:31:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I love the quality of your work but hate the quantity. Shorten it up a bit to keep the attention of those that are easily distracted and have to grade a couple hundred essays.
- 05/12/2005
- 19:15:52
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
it was a bit dry add more detail and flavor.
- 07/10/2004
- 19:07:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
really good job but u might want to go a little more in depth
- 26/01/2004
- 17:29:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
why in the world are you on cheathouse.com if you think cheating is wrong
- 13/01/2004
- 19:42:47
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
essay is structually sound
- 19/11/2003
- 16:32:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
great references but more of an article than an essay
- 19/11/2003
- 16:09:52
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very descriptiveshow the info in an organized fashion
- 18/11/2003
- 20:25:55
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
you made it too informalbut you had great facts in an orginized matter
- 18/11/2003
- 19:57:01
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
very good essay used many good tips intro could be better
- 18/11/2003
- 19:39:30
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
might want to use more specific example but overall a wonderfull essay.
- 18/11/2003
- 19:31:36
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this essay is totally right.great job
- 18/11/2003
- 19:25:36
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.