hi eggy, thanks for spending your time reading and leaving me such an excellent feedback! i love constructive comments! those points which you had mentioned are great. hope to see more of your feedbacks in my other essays ;)
- 03/04/2004
- 15:01:07
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
50% of this piece of essay are all quotes. If you quote, please give credits to the original author who wrote it. Include a "Bibliography Section" at the end of your essay. See example below.Bibliography:- Information Arts: Intersections of Art, Science, and Technology by Stephen Wilson, MIT Press, ISBN 026223209X- Alan Kaprow: http://www.
- 30/03/2004
- 03:03:02
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
hi Eggy. i feel so honour to have you rating my essay. i will take note of your points here. would greatly appreciate if you could read and rate my other essays. thank you. :-)
- 29/03/2004
- 01:37:51
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good work but Picasso is not the first to paint in a cubist manner. Since you had titled your essay as "Cubism", I think you should cover every scope of it. You have left out a important person, Paul Cezanne. Cezanne was the person who inspired and influenced Picasso to start painting in a cubist manner. Anyway, overall this is a piece of good essay.
- 28/03/2004
- 06:33:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Hi ccmustangs2001. Thank you for your comments. I will take note of that. ;-)
- 27/03/2004
- 08:00:39
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.