This paper provides some good examples of justice, but needs to be organzied for clarity. You are kind of across the board about the whole book, pulling pieces from here and there to try to make a point. Try starting from the beginning of the book and making your way through to the end, instead of jumping around.
- 18/09/2005
- 11:35:09
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
There is no need for bullet points and topic headings. In an in-depth research paper, the topic heading should come out in the reading of the paragraph. Points should be enphasized through the paragraph, not in direct points.
- 20/01/2005
- 07:46:23
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
too many paragraphs started with "Jackson". There is no bibliography. Personal opinion should not be used such as "(a wise move)", this is for the reader to decide.However, this essay is very detailed, and a bibliography would be great, because your details are down to the tee, and I would like to know were you got this information, since media effects were not a big issue in early America.
- 20/01/2005
- 07:43:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is helpful in introducing accounting. If you are writing an essay about accounting, this is an easy way to make up some wordage if you are lacking.
- 12/06/2004
- 14:08:36
- Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.