I am a aviation enthusiast as well, and this essay was a good description and recount of the mighty A380. The plane will prove to a spectacular sight and cant wait for it to become a mainstream model for airlines
- 08/03/2008
- 16:46:14
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good brief recount of story. Could be improve by improving word usage etc
- 07/03/2008
- 21:09:46
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
multiculturalism is an important aspect of Australia's identity. well written
- 06/03/2008
- 21:42:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
interesting but lacks depth
- 06/03/2008
- 21:35:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
conclusion does needs to be longer, and body can be further elaborated
- 06/03/2008
- 20:37:43
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a good essay, and quoting from many sources is a good habit
- 06/03/2008
- 20:33:46
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I found this essay quite interesting
- 06/03/2008
- 20:18:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
don't try to quote from wiki
- 06/03/2008
- 20:17:01
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Great aguements.
- 04/10/2006
- 18:32:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I totally agree with your arguement being a asian.
- 03/10/2006
- 00:39:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Is this your start to a short story? If it is, I think it is quite good, quite emotive and provocative. However, I must say that the piece lacks structure...
- 22/09/2006
- 22:14:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
What I think why lots of people are afraid of spiders as well as their appearance is that most have the image of huge fangs and venom permeating their body and dieing before reaching the hospital....
- 22/09/2006
- 22:04:53
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good points about euthanasia but some points needs to be mentioned-1. the issues surrounding the religious beliefs of euthananasia eg. christians prohitbit it, etc2. the pressure of the patient that he/she is a burden in life3.it would be hard for a normal person to actually kill someone, who will do it?
- 16/09/2006
- 03:05:53
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your essay on the history of the events before the actual battle was thorough and summerized.
- 01/09/2006
- 14:51:31
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.