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  • I like it

    I see that u are a bit biased toward federalists. You need to state more points on why they believed that way.
    • 17/12/2006
    • 15:49:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.

  • Suprised

    Definitely not college level, it looks like middle school level.
    • 30/11/2006
    • 16:58:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.

  • Wow, very long!

    Did your proffesor actually read this?
    • 30/11/2006
    • 13:26:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.

  • Good

    As stated below you might want to define what cults are and not assume the audience knows it.
    • 28/11/2006
    • 14:18:14
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Haha

    I find it insulting, lol. I am addicted to computers myself, I have to stop.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 13:56:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.

  • Nice comparasion

    I don't know if you can compare these two.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 13:54:29
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.

  • Great

    Very nice, infomative essay.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 13:53:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.

  • About the thesis

    Too much details. The thesis is just making the question into a statement.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 13:49:49
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Not bad, too much detail, lengthy, so-so thesis

    Has too much detail. Thesis is too short to answer the question.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 13:48:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.

  • Very convincing

    Let me guess, was this of AP Euro? I had to do something very similar. If only you had posted this here along time ago.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 07:01:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.

  • I like it

    Very detailed. I love this book and this essay.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 06:59:28
    • Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.

  • Not bad

    The essay is not bad but I don't think is at 11th grade level.
    • 26/11/2006
    • 06:56:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.

  • Whats up witht he <Tab/&gt

    The essay is good though.
    • 12/11/2006
    • 17:25:51
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.

  • Lack of detail

    Not bad for a sophmore. I believe you should have gotten a little higher grade. You should incude more details.
    • 25/09/2006
    • 16:35:53
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.