The essay is certainly informative but, u miught want to lessen the number of paragraphs through transitions and bringing paragraphs together.
- 13/01/2007
- 10:38:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
U need to edit. There is an "&amp" that keeps popping up in wierd places. The essay is pretty good other than that. Nice.
- 13/01/2007
- 10:36:11
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
If u wrote that poem then good job. Try adding decent titles to ur work however. It will provide a frame of reference if a person needs to find a particular type of poem.
- 13/01/2007
- 10:33:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Dude awesome analysis. DEEP. An awesome job.
- 13/01/2007
- 09:41:51
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Please dude. when you submit an essay make sure it at the least looks like one. This is more like and FAQ. GEEZ.
- 13/01/2007
- 09:40:06
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Your teacher tells you to do critical analysis of rock songs? Dam I wish my teacher did that. We have to do shakespeare and all that.
- 13/01/2007
- 09:38:14
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The information is good and there is a lot of information but seriously it needs organization. I mean come on. Also I'm not sure this is even your own. I think u copied it off of Sparknotes.com or something like that. Also if this is your own. Try using moderate to complex words in your essay too. Almost all these kinds of words are in the quotes not in ur explanation if them. Also never label your paragraphs "conclusion". Overall an ok essay. It would pass but not by much.
- 13/01/2007
- 09:35:12
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Essay? You need an intro and conclusion for one. This seems like and anecdote not an essay. Argumentative essays might have a personal anecdote or two but never just anecdotes.
- 13/01/2007
- 09:27:08
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Dude check ur grammar. Also needs citations. Always when quoting from ur sources, cite them.
- 13/01/2007
- 09:22:41
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Nice Essay man well written citations and all. Give it an A-
- 13/01/2007
- 09:17:29
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Are you sure this is an essay. Looks more like a comparison or result of an experiment copies right out of a site. And the topic you put it under. Plant Biology?
- 09/12/2006
- 11:53:52
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You use the same words too many times such as "quotes". You never bring attention to the fact that they are quotes but to the fact that they are only supports to your thesis. Also don't see what was the point of this essay. Was it to prove they were in love or to just show the quotes. Make the thesis clear.
- 09/12/2006
- 10:32:12
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Overall the essay was good and fairly convincing but you used too many questions. My teacher once said that a question should only be used about 2 questions for every thousand words. It seems you have gone way over your limit in tryign to provide rhetorical devices. While a few of them ceratinly help, too many will spoil; your essay. Too many cooks...
- 04/12/2006
- 17:58:43
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This kind of scared me but not as much as it would have had if you had some sources to back up your point. You logic is easy to follow but not all of us give as mcuh importance to logic as the greeks did. Get some legitimate sources to back up your point and make your essay a bit longer and it will be a darn good essay.
- 04/12/2006
- 17:44:50
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
An Awesome and way in depth article. So good that I felt I just had to cite this article in my essay on dialects. Of course mine isn't as complex as this article but I thought it was pretty good for my grade level.
- 04/12/2006
- 17:39:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.