I have nothing bad to say...Mein Kampf is beyond hard and terrible to say and you did a great job summing up the general idea. I enjoyed reading it it was informative and easy to follow.
- 29/12/2003
- 00:53:27
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Overall you covered a few main points about the issue, but I feel you didnt touch down on how hard it can be to try to lose weight. Peoplr who are obese want to lose wieght naturally but it is harder than to just get up and go. Once you weigh 220 pounds and are 15 yearsd old it gets discouraging and is not too easy to do something natural. Given this you have done a good job on the paper!
- 23/04/2003
- 16:34:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading this paper...very well captured and convincing too. Good work!
- 23/01/2003
- 13:54:27
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I am working on a practice essay for my exam, and found so many simailar things in your essay. You did a good job, good use of quotes. I do however think the conclusion can be worked on. Well done.
- 23/01/2003
- 13:20:18
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I believe this story can be great when finnished. You may want to consider fixing some grammer. It is a good read.
- 23/01/2003
- 12:59:48
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay, but I found there were some incomplete sentences. I enjoyed reading this paper. Keep it up!
- 23/01/2003
- 10:50:51
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
You did some great researching and seem to know well on this topic. It was overall a good paper.
- 23/01/2003
- 10:38:34
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
You did some great research and got the message across. I liked how you outlined exactly what you will do and then did it. Great paper.
- 23/01/2003
- 00:02:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It's a well written essay for the most part, I just think it could have been a bit more. At least I expected more. Maybe you need to work on the intro abit. But overall, excellent job!
- 23/01/2003
- 00:00:36
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
The essay presents some interesting ideas on how to prepare a speech. Although these ideas are well known, you do a good job in putting them down and letting other no. Good job!
- 22/01/2003
- 14:46:00
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.