Thesis needs some work.Essay needs to stay focused. I was a bit confused when reading some parts.A few spelling errors, and some problems with repetition.Other than that, it was pretty good.
- 14/04/2003
- 16:35:21
- Score: 20 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
The first paragraph wasn't needed, and, though fairly well written, was a bit general and somewhat close-minded (I think that's the word I'm looking for) when you said "There is the pro-choice and the pro-lifer. These are they only two categories that people's views fall into."
- 14/04/2003
- 15:38:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is one of the best essays I've read in awhile. It has everything a good essay should have: a strong thesis about a controversial subject, a body that supports the thesis throughly and does so in a tone that is easy to read and understand, and a conclusion that ties it all together, leaving no loose ends. I must say, I'm impressed. :)
- 14/04/2003
- 14:51:20
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very well written. A strong beginning that grabs your attention, a body that supports the thesis giving examples (I also like that spell and grammar check was used. Sorry, just a pet peeve of mine when it's not). The conclusion is a little on the weak side, but it's nothing that an added sentence or two won't fix. All-in-all, I think it's a very well written, well thought-out essay.
- 14/04/2003
- 13:40:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I liked it. Although I'm still trying to figure out if it is an essay or a report.
- 14/04/2003
- 10:41:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A well written essay about a great book.
- 13/04/2003
- 16:34:45
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think that you could have gone into more details though.I didn't really notice a conclusion, it just kind of ended and left me saying 'That's it?'.
- 13/04/2003
- 16:16:03
- Score: 17 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
Very very nice. I'm not one to enjoy reading long papers, but this one had just the right amount of facts, opinions, and controversy that makes you want to read it and leaves you saying "hmmmm..."
- 13/04/2003
- 16:08:46
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I, too, would like to know what a 'philosophe' refers to. Other than that, I would say it's a very well written piece of work. Bravo.
- 13/04/2003
- 16:02:05
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I wouldn't really say I 'learned' anything from this essay that anyone who read the story wouldn't already know. It was more like a cliff's notes overview, but still written well.
- 13/04/2003
- 15:40:14
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like it, but I think you could go into a bit more detail on some parts.
- 11/04/2003
- 16:10:47
- Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
A little wordy, but all-in-all, pretty darn good.
- 11/04/2003
- 16:01:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.