This document has good content but needs a great deal of work.
- 13/11/2010
- 23:57:08
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I would like to see this in english as well.
- 18/04/2010
- 05:03:04
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Good as a research guide.
- 29/10/2008
- 18:43:08
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This is not really a college level essay and it is written in the first person.
- 28/10/2008
- 20:36:17
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This document is very poorly written, has no references, and appears to be recycled materials from a 'free' term paper available on other sites. Poor grammar throughout. The writer has used a number of partial sentences and uses double negatives.
- 09/10/2008
- 08:12:40
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it is dated 1969 but reports information from 2001! this report needs to be clarified.
- 22/09/2008
- 08:49:53
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no indication in the text of any possible references yet this is clearly not 'original thought'.
- 25/04/2008
- 11:16:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
though the references are a little dated, this is an a-1 essay. it's a plus that the references are even included!
- 25/04/2008
- 11:11:30
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This is GREAT for a high school paper! Too much use of "it" but otherwise, this would be acceptable in a college level class. Study how to do the references a bit too, so you'll be ready when college arrives.
- 14/06/2007
- 22:14:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Excellent legal reasoning, but the spelling needs checked and grammar reviewed. Really good legal analysis :-)
- 14/06/2007
- 21:22:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This paper has good content but terrible presentation and grammar. Difficult to believe this was an "A".
- 14/06/2007
- 21:11:44
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This document needs grammar check and a punctuation check! Good that you included the references. Interesting document.
- 20/05/2006
- 04:53:15
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This missed being a really strong essay by a hair. You jumped from a good analysis to weak personal conclusions with no supporting information.
- 20/05/2006
- 04:48:42
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.