For a 9th grader you sure do criticize and analyze the things you see in a perfect way...I am seeing this anime for a while now and even if I'm a 25yr old male, I don't have anything at all to add to this marvelously short review...you said everything that one could say about this anime in a very objective way & therefore having ppl decide if it suits them...One minor objection: you should have explained the meaning of the word shounen for those that don't know (shounen represents anime or manga geared at a male audience of a young age: boy to early adulthood).
- 25/01/2007
- 17:03:10
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First of all, I don't like rap music but I love breakdancing and skateboarding...But this essay was just BRILLIANT! Cited so many sources, the vocabulary, expression, grammar are perfect and the flow of the essay is above great...I read these 11 pgs in 10 mins...it's flow was so great and the expression so good that you didn't think a second time about comprehensing anything you read...very clearly written...it deserved for sure A+...it was a very good history of the hip-hop culture movement...and you're a high-schooler...bravo!!
- 25/01/2007
- 16:50:49
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I haven't heard anything about this book but this essay is ok..good expression and choice of vocabulary about a book related with dreaming a better life.
- 25/01/2007
- 15:57:57
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For the 2nd yr of junior high school this is very well done....I don't know why it got a B...wording is nice and it clearly provides 3 main reasons why the roman empire fall and explains them..provides internal and external reasons as the writer says...in specific it notes 2 internal reasons for the fall of rome and 1 external (invasions).
- 25/01/2007
- 15:52:33
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Nice expression and all...I haven't heard before about Emerson's sayings for nature.Interesting stuff and you do have a closing sentence but I would enclose the essay with a more ecological message more suited to our troubled days....you could say "Emerson's words about the advantages of nature for human beings are eternal; if only man would take heed of these words and protect nature as he should..." or something like this...by the way interesting stuff said more than 150 yrs ago...
- 25/01/2007
- 15:22:10
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Let's see...you need a better closing sentence for this awesome character as you say...a more punchy sentence such as 'I only wish we would take an example of santiago's persistence and keep as well doing our best and not giving up in our own lives' or something like that...make a parallelization with ur life from what u learned from the bookAlso, refrain from using one word all the time...santiago (the character's name) was used an awfully lot of times...you can use also "the protagonist" "the hero of the story" "the main character" it's a bad tactic to repeat a word constantly...in a speech it's heard as boring and repetitive.Also needs more elaboration because it's a big novel, but nevertheless...it's not bad at all for 1st yr of high school...it's nice.
- 25/01/2007
- 15:11:56
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For 1st year of high school you think very mature!! Nice!! I agree thoroughly with your opinions....Very nice and way to go! You have some very good points and thoughts and you explain them...I liked this essay as a thought about sports even though I really like sports myself, I don't like them to be the center of attention over more trivial things like those you mentioned.
- 25/01/2007
- 12:26:33
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You say in the final paragraph that you DO NOT agree with the statement you mention in the previous paragraph; the truth is that you DO agree as you say in the explanation following the I DO NOT agree statement....omit the not saying that you do agree with the view that the style of worship doesn't matter but just worshiping God and u have an "let's say interesting essay" if not for some minor mistakes in expression and grammar.
- 25/01/2007
- 12:18:05
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I remember seeing this when I was 8 on cinemas....I was immensely moved with it's subject...I haven't seen it once all over these years again but I clearly remember it.On to the essay....It has some spelling mistakes (severly? it's more like severely) some grammatical and syntactical but it's not bad....it has the point of the movie clearly fleshed out...and provides a brief summary through the perspective of each main character.Only complaint is that he/she didn't elaborate also on Mr.Keating's personality as well.
- 25/01/2007
- 11:08:00
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It's an ok essay...It's good.....it has grammatical errors (some 's' were not needed, some tenses are not the right ones, expression could be clearer and better-done in a few cases) but overall is a nice essay and informative for the subject tha it's trying to cover...it's a nice essay to read with basic details just to become acquainted with a few things you may not know about cancer....Nice..not at all bad.
- 25/01/2007
- 10:59:49
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Not bad not good...It seems like it was written in a hurry and may be useful for ppl wanting to read the essence of MacBeth from Shakespeare in a few words....more elaboration could be done for sure for this play....it starts with a short description of what happens in the play and then the final paragraph is a short explanation and meaning of what has happened.The problem is that it should have more analysis but it's not bad.
- 25/01/2007
- 10:51:46
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I can't really say that this was useful....it just mentions what kind of methods were used in research for differences between accounting students from taiwan and from U.S.A.....it doesn't mention any differences observed from this research but only the way (qualitative research rather than quantitative e.t.c.)
- 25/01/2007
- 10:44:50
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The expression is horrible....there are many grammatical & syntactical mistakes....I think they're way too much for a 3 paragraph essay...and I certainly don't understand the usefulness of this essay..probably there isn't any.
- 25/01/2007
- 10:35:08
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Nice style, well expressed, very informative and will help anyone having to do a project on crisis management...I know it helped me!!!! Thanx a lot Manugill :)
- 03/12/2006
- 14:16:55
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I think it's a nice and on to the point essay...it is very useful for research I'm doing right now; especially the analysis about the opportunities and threats of entering into the online banking business.
- 29/11/2006
- 16:00:21
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I was shocked by what this essay says..914 members of a cult committed suicide in a specific case!!! To the essay now, I think that the words that are being used and the way things are expressed are very good! That goes for the vocabulary...BUT as the other user pointed you have to make the audience become acquainted with the term cult...what is a cult? When a group of people is regarded as a cult?
- 28/11/2006
- 11:43:59
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