really good essay sounds like fun
- 11/03/2009
- 16:14:18
- Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
really good essay love the info
- 11/03/2009
- 16:12:45
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very well written. Interesting topic and very informational
- 14/01/2008
- 17:11:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Way too short needs work! put more effort in writing each paragraph
- 14/01/2008
- 17:09:50
- Score: 14 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
A very well written essay. Good details. Especially for an essay done in 10th grade. I don't remember writing an essay like this when i was in 10th grade.
- 21/09/2003
- 14:26:22
- Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Really cool essay i want to go play paintball now lol :)
- 20/09/2003
- 16:50:14
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Love your eassy. I really enjoyed reading it beacause i love cats but also its a very infromative essay. Good Job!!
- 19/09/2003
- 20:05:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good essay but I think ccmustangs and eternal were right about the improvement on organization.
- 18/09/2003
- 18:57:14
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.