I am spinning in circles.
My head is aching,
My hands are shaking.
I cannot judge
Distance nor Time.
I am completely helpless.
It is difficult not to
Writhe, while in the grip
Of ecstatic pain
And agony.
I am completely alone.
No one knows the way
I feel. The way
I am at a loss
For words.
I am in a prison
With no means of escape.
Chained to the wall, I can
Only scream and listen
To the echoes.
Do not wish for such hurting.
If you do, you will lose touch
With reality.
Do not reach for my hand.
As it flutters helplessly.
The journey is too long
And too lonesome.
Do not walk it with me.
There is no beginning.
There is no end.
If you feel differently,
Take my hand.
And I shall show you
How it feels
To be hopelessly in love.
OMG!
this is the best peice of poetry i have read all day!!! u did a great job! i defently like ur style, and i defenetly love the way u choose ur words and made them flow with each other, once again great job! this peice is worth more than just one smily face! keep up the great work!
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