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ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ The first job I had was at Buzzy's Diner, located in a small suburban town in
upstate New York. It isn't a classy restaurant, it isn't even a very clean one, but during the
hours that its open in the morning it is probably the busiest place within fifteen miles.
Although the food there is inexpensive and very good, the main reason people eat their
lunch and breakfast there is because of the diner's cozy atmosphere and timeless quality.
ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ The diner is in a building that is about 65 years old and when you first walk in and
take a seat, it seems like you just traveled backwards in time. Along one side of the
dining area there is a counter with stools where people who come there by themselves go
to eat and read the newspaper.
The tables and the countertop are an off-white color
underneath a pattern of random gray lines that looks like shattered glass. The seats for
the tables are dark wooden benches, many of them are dented and scratched from their
years of use. In one corner there is an ancient cigarette machine (the kind with levers you
have to pull to get your cigarettes) and an old fashioned penny gumball machine.
ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ ÃÂÃ The walls of the room are divided horizontally by molding. The bottom four feet
of the walls consist of wood paneling that matches the benches. The top half is covered
with an ugly brown wallpaper that reminds me of the wallpaper in my grandmother's
house. The wallpaper usually goes unnoticed because most of it is covered up with other
stuff. Hanging on the wall behind the counter there is a collection of old frying pans and
various outdated...
Good Job
This essay is really good work. From the descriptions, it makes me feel like I am there and you are showing me around. Good job.
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