Kids should be monitored on the internet
The internet is known for many miraculous advances in today's technology. We have an unlimited quantity of knowledge on this so-called information super highway. Plus we can purchase merchandise, and talk to friends and family from around the world without leaving the comfort of our own homes. Seems great right? Sure, but if it's placed in the wrong hands all of this can be spoiled. Particularly when a child is sitting behind the computer screen. This is why I believe children should be monitored while being on the World Wide Web. There are numerous dangers out there that both parents and children should be aware of.
First, there is the subject of the "new and improved" way of shopping, on-line. If a child wonders onto a website of this sort then the child may be able to by something that cannot be afforded, or something the child is prohibited to own, but this is only the beginning of the problems your youngster will encounter if he or she is unsupervised or uneducated about on-line purchasing sites.
They might reveal important information such as name, address, credit card, number etc., and if a website is not secure (make sure the website as a privacy policy of some sort) then a hacker -someone who illegally gains access to and sometimes tampers with information in a computer system- may use your personal data for things such as identity theft, and they might even want to learn the whereabouts of you and your little one. It ordinarily doesn't get this extreme, but you should never take any chances when dealing with something this serious.
This leads me to my most important issue. Pedophiles and pornographers on-line. This is an utmost danger for kids on the internet. Kids...
Supervising children online essay.
More or less well written. But i am confused. Is this meant to be an persuasive or an informative essay? Because it felt like it was something in between. If it was meant ot be a persuasive essay perhaps you have have added a paragraph that was arguing the opposite of what you were saying and then dispelled that argument. Otherwise it feels as if your argument is only one sided yet at the same time you're not pushing your ideas all that strongly. Otherwise pretty well written. Well done.
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