A basic grade 9 essay. Some grammatical errors, and too simple.The entire last paragraph is simple sentences, loosely tied together. That could be worked on.
- 24/08/2005
- 21:24:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Looks to have been well researched...good job. I'd try to avoid first-person narroration.
- 01/03/2004
- 20:55:40
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Awesome...well written and obviously thoroughly researched.
- 01/03/2004
- 20:50:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Pretty good essay, points could be better outlined.ie. Value of deficitCIA statement is not needed/irrelevant
- 01/03/2004
- 20:47:01
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Good job. Well written, lots of content...a very good essay on a very good book.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:56:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Essay goes to great depths to explain teeth brushing....?Solid work.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:51:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
While I don't agree with HomeSchooling, I must say your essay was well written and well presented. Good job.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:50:00
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Great essay. Well worded.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:40:31
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Good job! I agree with everything said in this essay.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:36:19
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good facts. Try not to use first-person pronouns. ("In my opinion") Good job stating the sources.I would've graded this higher than a 58%.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:15:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good statistics, good facts. Also, it's good that you included your sources of information.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:11:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well written, very informative...everything is concise and to the point. Good work.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:04:30
- Score: 17 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
Very well done. Sounds like something straight out of TGM. (The Golfing Machine)
- 24/11/2003
- 18:02:09
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Awesome essay! Lots of content, facts are all correct...the 91% was well deserved.
- 24/11/2003
- 17:57:13
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A well compiled list.
- 24/11/2003
- 00:28:49
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Solid essay. Very informative. I'm not surprised you got such a high mark.
- 24/11/2003
- 00:26:26
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Not bad...you need to expand on your "solutions".Otherwise I thought it was pretty good. All your thoughts and quick and to the point...no filler.
- 24/11/2003
- 00:23:37
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.