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  • Example of equal news coverage

    "Israeli missile attack kills 4, including boy" here: http://www.cnn.com/2004/WORLD/meast/02/28/mideast.violence/index.html
    • 28/02/2004
    • 19:02:21
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting article could have used more supporting evidence

    When you said that the owner of CNN said "I would make the case that both sides are engaged in terrorism," to be honest, I was not convinced. You only included part of the quote. Before this, he said "The Palestinians are fighting with human suicide bombers, that's all they have. The Israelis ... they've got one or the most powerful military machines in the world. The Palestinians have nothing. So who are the terrorists?" ( http://www.commondreams.org/headlines02/0618-02.htm ) I think that he makes a good point and that the network is perceived as neither clearly pro-Palestinian, nor pro-Israeli, considering that both sides have accused the network of both biases.
    • 28/02/2004
    • 18:59:38
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting topic!

    great facts, this is something most people have probably never thought about!
    • 28/02/2004
    • 18:36:41
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    good quotes. I used one of them in my own essay. =D
    • 19/02/2004
    • 23:13:28
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hahaha

    "All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others." - George Orwell, Animal Farm (1946)I love that quote!Great essay!
    • 19/02/2004
    • 22:52:00
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    this is an excellent comparison of these two literary tragedies!
    • 14/02/2004
    • 16:43:21
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Mysogyny

    Although the society may not be entirely mysogynistic, Okonkwo is. And, he repeatedly gets away with beating his wives. Although he is punished for it during the week of peace, and during other times, he is reprimanded, he still remains respected and honored. This is a fault in Ibo society. Ofcourse, people get away with domestic abuse in western culture as well-- but it is not okay here either.
    • 09/02/2004
    • 16:27:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I think...

    this is a Great essay! Good vocabulary; shows thoughtful analysis
    • 09/02/2004
    • 16:22:36
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good analysis

    This is a nice essay, although the language could be cleared up a bit. Good quotes
    • 09/02/2004
    • 16:20:46
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    a few puncuational errors, but overall, a good essay. great use of quotes!
    • 09/02/2004
    • 16:18:42
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Agree with helpdesk & Neltharius

    This is very true. Stereotypes are not fact.
    • 07/02/2004
    • 18:33:11
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Agree

    I definitely agree about this- if we send all the children on drugs to alternative schools, then they will all be clustered together and will only reinforce bad habits
    • 07/02/2004
    • 18:28:48
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Just a suggestion

    you might want to first explain with "Hijab" is
    • 07/02/2004
    • 18:22:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I love philosophy

    You get a smiley face for a great topic! =D
    • 07/02/2004
    • 18:21:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting viewpoint

    this is a very good concept to argue! i definitely agree about the overemphasis on persuasive essays
    • 22/01/2004
    • 02:33:01
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice essay

    this is a good report on Andy warhol, but, just as a suggestion, did you mean to use "I" so many times? Overall though, really good!
    • 22/01/2004
    • 02:30:02
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I like this essay, although I think it is slightly repetitive with certain phrases. Overall, it is a very nice, warm, fuzzy, "feel-good" peice of writing that discusses the issue of human connection with other animals.Well-done, successful imagery.
    • 20/01/2004
    • 03:37:37
    • Score: 34 out of 39 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting!

    quite fascinating indeed!
    • 20/01/2004
    • 03:11:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Woah

    I like this, it is very interesting, slightly creepy, slightly fantastical. The use of the word "wasted" adds a touch of western culture to seemingly isolate island life. Nice peice!
    • 20/01/2004
    • 02:52:58
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    quite informative, provides good links to Greek culture!
    • 20/01/2004
    • 02:50:18
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    Interesting, morbid, certainly made me cringe. I like it though.
    • 20/01/2004
    • 02:25:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.