You give an objective and true opinion on the comparisons. Well written and structured essay.
- 14/09/2006
- 08:00:17
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You should try to form paragraphs?
- 26/03/2006
- 16:24:13
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
hehe, nice essay. Well structured and fun to read!!!
- 25/03/2006
- 16:20:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Now children read this story and learn from other ppl's mistakes =) Well structured essay and interesting.
- 12/03/2006
- 16:35:55
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
And your essay was alright.
- 22/02/2006
- 13:47:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Is ThaT called an essay?Alright, you decided to tell us about the camp, if you had 'the strong emotions' couldn't you write more?Try rewriting it =)
- 18/01/2006
- 15:44:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
We can clearly see your opinion on the novel. The first paragraph was well. The next two were alright though there was a lot of repetition.
- 12/01/2006
- 14:06:40
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Pretty good essay on the topic, not much u could add to it as for 7th grade.
- 12/01/2006
- 13:47:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
did u really get 85 for it, I would grade it as 60. I highly recomend to add more information, believing that there could be a lot of interesting facts. In my understanding of a biography, I thought it should contain at least some dates, like the birth and the death. Work on it a lil and improve, and its gonna be alright =)dpeace.
- 06/01/2006
- 21:19:38
- Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I read it all, its intereting to read, nice summaries =)
- 09/12/2005
- 16:36:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Thought you could include more details explaining the festivals, such as :-fasting is a good self-training it makes them think they have a control over their body. it shows equality, that everybody is equal in Allah's eyes.-about Leilat el kard which is the ;ast 10 days when qur'an was revealed to mohammad etc.it was mostly observations however it was good in general, =)
- 08/12/2005
- 14:02:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.