as a student studying this play, i know where you're coming from and I totally agree with your arguement. GOOD JOB!
- 09/04/2004
- 22:08:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay is good. however, it needs to be expanded upon. especially, during the analytical aspect of it.
- 29/03/2004
- 01:35:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
yoga has many benefits and you have given these benefits light. also, your personal experience makes it believeable. a very good job!
- 29/03/2004
- 01:32:41
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
details make this essay really well done. Good job!
- 29/03/2004
- 01:31:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading your essay because you linked each book together for the greater theme of alienation. I would've thought it would be difficult to compare so many books, but you have done this beautifully.
- 04/02/2004
- 19:08:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You described the history behind the depression very well. I like your transitions and your defence of your thesis.
- 04/02/2004
- 19:04:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like the way that you defend your thesis and how you explain you examples. Good
- 04/02/2004
- 19:03:13
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
http://www.gotrice.com/users/homework/papers/science/chemistry/cool.htm>:(
- 31/03/2003
- 14:24:41
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
concise essay that has a clear thesis and a very well thought arguement. Good job!
- 03/03/2003
- 15:10:03
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
this is a very thorough and concise essay that examines the various defenses that one may use when in a very tight position regarding the judicial system. I believe that since you don't outwardly say it, this has to do with Britian's law, and maybe you should clarify that in the beginning because someone may use it, but might get in trouble because it is irrelevent to their country's system. All in all, considering I'm not a law student, very good and made me understand the different defences one can use! :)
- 21/02/2003
- 23:02:58
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
and that is why i like this paper so much. Great evidence, support, and an extensive Bibliography. Good Job
- 13/02/2003
- 20:19:25
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is an essay, that needs more research and/or more analysis of the topic. Ok so you think self abuse is wrong, relate that some how to a much more higher frame of thought...all in all, mediocre :)..btw, i'm helping you!
- 19/01/2003
- 23:52:28
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
u ripped this off from : www.essaymill.com/free_essays/inmers/m715.htm
- 18/01/2003
- 00:09:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i loved this book and your review did it great justice...good job
- 11/01/2003
- 15:31:00
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
personally, i don't see a connection between u'r title and what u wrote in your "essay". I'd say this is more a biography of Barry Bonds than anything else. Also, what you can really improve on is your sentence structure and your opening sentence..It really didn't make any sense..This is good for a biography, but not as an essay.
- 11/01/2003
- 15:16:42
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
there are a few grammatical errors that are dealing with possession..it's Larkin's not Larkins..all in all good...
- 10/01/2003
- 00:28:21
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This is an informitive assignment, and even though I had no idea that teleworking was such and up and coming industry, you've opened up my eyes to this. What i suggest is that you can obviously fix up the way that your sentences are arranged because on this format, it really hurt my eyes while reading it. All in all, it is very informative!
- 08/01/2003
- 00:37:56
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
but you have discussed it in such a way, that does not give the reader and in-your-face "It's Wrong" or "It's Right". You've presented the opinions of the philosophers concisely and because of that it doesn't have the stagnant unoriginality that most essays have when discussing this issue because it doesn't have anything to do with religion and more with personal views.I enjoyed reading it! Good job!
- 08/01/2003
- 00:33:06
- Score: 42 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
This essay gives insight into the daily lives of many ppl in the western world, and how the obsession of the Internet has maybe ruined their lives instead of making it better. I really like the tone and the structure of the "article" or could I say response? Anyway, it added to the whole effect that it was trying to make that the Internet is just as addictive as other mediums but that it is being targeted unfairly by bored scientists. I know that will probably not help the writier, but I just really liked it!
- 07/01/2003
- 18:59:41
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
LIke Robert was saying, exactly how will this help others? also, this is more an advertisement than anything else. PLus, I can't wait to listen to Radio Tabloid! ;)
- 06/01/2003
- 13:41:03
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
this is an informitive essay/project, however, the insertion of "attend the university of wisconsin" is something, that i really don't understand the reason that it is there. However, the grammar and spelling of this essay needs some improvement/revision. Hope that can help:)
- 04/01/2003
- 20:37:48
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this is a mediocre letter, due to the fact that there are numerous spelling and grammar mistakes, but u obviously already handed this in and got a good mark, this isn't really a problem. However, wat u can do to improve this letter, is that u can summarize this less and add more analysis and how the book actually effected/stimulated u. Also, wat i would have done was add something about how the dementors affected Harry physically and emtionally. All in all, this is okay, but needs improvement! :)
- 04/01/2003
- 20:29:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
you should try using better transition words, and try to have a better thesis statement that clearly identifies the points in your essay
- 03/01/2003
- 23:48:04
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.