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  • Thought out

    It appears to me that you took you time an writting this essay, good job.
    • 02/11/2003
    • 20:05:06
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.

  • Very well organized

    Your paper was very organized and structured. Good Job
    • 13/08/2003
    • 16:15:47
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • Both sides

    You did a good job of showing both sides of the argument, but there was no real closing paragraph.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 16:10:01
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Lot of Information

    This is a very informative paper. Good Job.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 16:07:39
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • Moving

    i have not read the book yet, but by just the account you gave I can tell it is a very moving book. You did an excelent job of Portraying Dave's story is such a small ammount of space.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 16:02:04
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Paragraphs

    You may have been able to break the paragraphs up a bit.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 15:12:31
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • Very indepth

    Alot of indepth deatils and facts, well done
    • 13/08/2003
    • 15:11:20
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • No real opening.

    The paper is higly deatiled but it lacks, an opening/thesis statement other then that a well done paper.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:52:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Not bad

    You might want to work on ths structure a littile, but other then that not bad at all.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:49:44
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.

  • Not quite sure what the purpose of writting the paper was

    I'am guessing it was an assigment where you had to write a paper showing why a ficticous company should get database software. If that is the case you did a good job.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:34:43
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • I never finished it,

    I never really gave the paper a good closing because I was under the gun to get it turned in on time, luckily my treacher was understaing.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:30:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • You took your time

    To carefully explain the film with very indepth information.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:25:12
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Good Job.

    Takin into account that you are in 8th grade, your paper was not bad at all. You could have improved some aspects of it, but you tried hard.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:15:48
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Nice

    One thing that could have made it better would have been to clearly define consent in a opening paragraph.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:09:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.

  • Nice

    I could see that you tried hard and put in some good effort, nice work,. The only thing you could have done diffrently was decrease the size per paragraph.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:05:14
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • Intresting.

    The form that you wrote it in was not conventinal, but you made the information very straight forward and easy to read.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 14:02:13
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Wow

    You included alot of Information on the species. Not bad.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 13:59:57
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • Well written

    I don't know if I nescearly agree with you but you did clearly state the points you where trying to make and your felling where very clear.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 13:57:14
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.

  • This would make a good handout for a speech in class

    It is not really a paper or essay but it is very informative and easy to read.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 13:47:45
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.

  • Could have been better.

    You could have included more information on the dutch and the spice trade in general, but other then that it was pretty good.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 13:26:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.

  • OK,

    The only reason Iam rating this ok is because I did not see the purpose or the planned effect of using the term "negro men" and refering to them as henchmen.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 13:23:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.

  • Not very organized

    It seemed to me that there was no real structure to the essay, even with that said it still could have been alot worse.
    • 13/08/2003
    • 13:19:49
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.

  • Well Done

    This is a very informative essay, good job
    • 13/08/2003
    • 13:17:04
    • Score: 14 out of 16 people found this comment useful.