It was a beautiful crisp morning of February 4, 2002; I was standing outside having a cigarette and looking around the parking lot. I glanced over to see trucks passing by and that is when I noticed this fine Puerto Rican man walking. The man of my dreams was walking towards me with a big smile on his face.
He had short jet black hair with beautiful light brown eyes; he had a small nose but it was cute. His lips were full and ready to meet mine. His ears were the perfect size for me to nibble on them. He was wearing a long black leather coat that hid his figure. I couldn't tell much with the coat on, but what I did see was that he looked a little big in the shoulders. He was getting closer and closer to me when he finally was standing right in front of me.
I got really nervous and I didn't think I could have talked to him because I was speechless because of his beauty. When he opened his mouth, the first word that came pouring out of that sexy mouth was "Hi." I was so nervous, I tried saying it back but nothing came out.
We both were gazing into each other's eyes, until it was time for us to go to work. I made sure I had to see what he looked like with the coat off. As I watched him through the window, I almost fainted. His body was built, his shoulders and arms and chest were covered in muscles and his legs were strong and sturdy. He had a small belly but I didn't care. When he turned around, I finally saw his nice, full, grabable butt. I walked over all innocent and grabbed his butt.
Essay for school or erotica
This piece begins quite poorly and then goes on to border on erotica. It changes tenses, it goes from past to present. Grammar needs to be checked it reads as a bunch of thoughts thrown together. Though good in its descriptions, not sure if some are necessary or appropriate to get the point across!!!!
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